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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Faria.


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Originally posted by: Irum.

very nice update.

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Chapter 3

Nupur aur uski friend half day lekar shopping ke liye bahar jate hain.

Coinsidently Mayank aur Aditya bhi ussi mall me aate hain. Jab MAyank mall me per rakhta hain tabhi Nupur ke heartbeats badhne lagti hain. Wo comfortable mehsus nahi karti. Usko pata nahi ajabsi bechini hoti hain.Aur wo apna hath apne chest par rakhti hain.

Radhika : Kya hua Nupur? Are you alright?

Nupur : Kya malum Radhika lekin bahot bechaini ho rahi hain. Kyun wo nahi malum. Aisa lagta hain idhar koi hain jo mere liye bahot important hain. Lekin aisa koi aas pas najar to nahi aa raha hain.

Radhika : Dekha Nupur wo uparwala bhi tumhe ishare de raha hain ki usne tere liye jisko bhi banaya hain wo abhi idhar hi hain.

Nupur : Tum firse shuru hogayi. Tumhe aaj kya hua hain?

Radhika : Are sachhi to bol rahi hu. Waise ek bat bata har ladki ke man me koi na koi image banayi hoti hain partner ki. Teri bhi to koi khwish ya fir expectations hogi na uske bare mein.

Nupur : Are baba me kitne bar bolu ki mujhe in sab cheezope vishwas nahi hain. Ye Pyar phir shadi ye sab zindagi ka jhugar hain agar luck achha hua to sab thik nahi to pachtana parta hain bad me.

Radhika ye bat sunkar chup ho jati hain aur thori der bad bolti hain tum kabhi nahi sudhrogi na? Tu aisi kyun hain?

Nupur : Me aisihi hoo. Aur wo dono baki ki shopping karne lagte hain.

At another side Mayank kibhi halat kuch aisehi thi. Wo bhi kuch ajbsi baicheni mehsus kar raha tha. Lekin usne iske emotions control kiye. Fir bhi wo apni soch me hi gum ho gaya tha. Aditya ne usse 2 bar awaj diye lekin Mayankne reply nahi diya isiliye Aditya ne usse jar se pinch kiya.

Mayank : Abe ye tune kya kiya? Kitna jor se pinch kiya?

Aditya : To me aur kya karta. Tu to apnehi khayalo me duba tha. Maine tujhe 2 bar bulaya phir bhi tu to khud ki duniya me hi ghum raha tha. To reality me lane ke liye mujhe pinch karna pada. Waise kaha gum ho gaya tha? (teasingly) kahin mujhe jaldi devar banane ki to nahi soch raha hain na tu? Agar aisa hain to please jaldi karna.

Mayank : Aditya tum bhi na? Ek to khud ki bachlerhood ko kharab kiya aur ab chahta hain ki me bhi meri azadi kurban karu. Kyun? Me to ek azad panchi hu. Mujhe apne sar par koi bhi responsibility nahi chahiye samjha kya? Chal ab. Shweta tumhara intezar kar rahi hogi.

Aur wo dono wahase nikal jate hain.

At Night

Nupur apne room mein bed par so rahi thi actually so nahi rahi thi balki soch rahi thi.

Kya Radhika ne jo bataya wo sach tha. Mall me jo mujhe baicheni ho rahi thi kya wo usike wajahse ho rahi thi kya?

Kya Nupur tum bhi na. Kya pagalon jaisi bate kar rahi ho? Chal ab so ja. Kal subah office bhi to jana hain na.

Mayank apne kamre mein : Khidki ke pass aakar khada ho jata hain. aur sochne lagta hain

Aaj mall me kya hua tha mujhe? Aisa laga ki koi mere bahot pehchan ka chehra mere samne aate aate reh gaya? Kya tha wo sab? Kyun me uss bechaini ko yad karke ek smile aa jati hain mere chehre pe?

Aur wo chand ke taraf dekhta hain.

Ye chand bhi aaj kuch alag hi bat bata raha hain shayad./ Kash ye chand mujhe kuch bata de. Aur ye hawa bhi us person ko jake bole ki me usse milne ke liye taras raha hu. Mujhe bhi to samjhe ki wo kaun hain jiske wajah se meri ye halat hui hain.

Tabhi BN me Nupur uth kar khidki me aati hain. Tabhi usse kano me hawa ka jhoka aakar use gudgudi hoti hain. Hey bhagwan!!! What's wrong with me? Me abhi bhi Radhika ki bat bhul kyun nahi pa rahi hu? Kya hua hain mujhe kuch samaj nahi aaraha hain.

aur wo khidki band karke wapas bed pe jake so jati hain.

AT SM

Mayank sochta hain

Are Mayank kya hua tujhe? Kya soch raha hain ye? Chal ab so ja. Aur tumhe kal sabko tumhara faisla bhi to sunana hain na. Aur wo sone jata hain.

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nice updt
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Nice updt.
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#28

chapter 4

AT Morning

SM

Sari SF kisika intezar kar rahi thi.

Samrat : Dad wo kab aanewali hain? Aapse unki kuch to bat hui hogi na?

Shekhar : Haa beta bat to hui thi. Unhone mujhe kaha bhi tha ki wo subah 8 baje tak aajayegi.

Samrat : Lekin ab 9.30 baj gaye hain dad.

Simmi : Mujhe bhi samajh nahi aa raha hain. Wo to time ki ekdum pakki hain. Koi bhi kam wo time pe hi karti hain. Samaj nahi aarahe hain ki aaj unko itna late kyun hua hain? Aur uparse unhone kaha ki kisiko bhi lene aane ki jarurat nahi hain. Wo khud aayengi.

Gunjan : Haa maa. Mujhe bhi ab tension ho rahi hain.

Tabhi unko gari park karne ki awaj aati hain.

Shekhar : Lagta hian ki wo aa gayi. Chalo.

sab SF bahar aati hain. Gari me se ek aged vyakti utarti hain. Aur wo driver ko apna saman ghar me lane ki order deti hain.

Shekhar aur Simmi jakar turant unka aashirwad lete hain. Bad me Gunjan aur Samrat bhi unka aashirwad lete hain. Sab ghar ke andar aate hain.

Aged Aurat : Mera dusra dulara kaha hain? Kya usko mujhse milne ki ichha nahi hain. Aur mere do nanhe nanhe shaitan yani meri badmash company bhi kaha hain?

Tabhi waha pe Mayank sidi se neeche aata hain. Aur shock ho jata hain.

Mayank : Are dadi aap? What a pleasant surprise dadi!!!

Mayank aur Samrat ki dadi Nalini Sharma. Wo apne dono poto se bahot pyar karti hain. Wo ujjain me Apne poti ke sath rehti hain.

Payal Mishra. Payal 24 sal ki larki hain. Uske mummy papa yani Mayank ke bua aur phuphaji ek car accident me expire ho jate hain. Isiliye wo apni nani ke sath ujjain me hi rehti hain. Wo apna education mumbai me puri karti hain. Shekhar & Simmi usko apni khudke hi beti mankar usse bhi bahot pyar karte hain.

Nalini dadi : Haan me. Kya karu mere potonko mere bete ko aur meri bahuonko meri yad nahi aati to maine socha mehi khud unse jakar milu.

Shekhar : Maa aisi koi bat nahi hain. Lekin business ke karan nahi aa pate hum log.

Simmi : Maji Payal kaha hain? Kya wo nahi aayi aapke sath?

Nalini : Are wo aayi thi lekin usse ek kam yad aaya to bahar chali gayi hain. Thori der me aa jayegi. tabhi waha pe Deepika & Deepak daudte hue aa jate hain.

Bachhe Nalini ke per chukar ashirwad lete hain. Dadi aap aagayi ? Aur bua kaha hain?

Nalini : Are me natkhato bua bhi aati hogi. Batao tum dono kaise ho? apne mummy papa ko kitna pareshan karte ho?

Gunjan : pareshan? Wo to puchiye mat dadiji. Pata nahi itni pareshan karne ki aadat inko kaha se lagi hain?

Nalini : Are beta ye Sharma khandan ka khun hain. Aur aadat to inko inke papa se hi lagi hui hain. Aur wo Simmi ke taraf dekhti hain. Kyun Simmi Sam bhi to aise hi pareshan karta tha na tumko.

Simmi : Haa bahot pareshan karta tha. Humesha sirf apni hi bat manwana chahta tha.

Samrat : Kya maa appb hi na. Sab log hasne lagte hain.

Mayank : Ye Payal ki bachhi kaha reh gayi? Kya isko apne bhaionse milne ki ichha nahi ho rahi kya?

Tabhi waha pe Payal aajati hain.

Payal : Hello everyone!!!!!

Sab darwaje ke taraf dekhte hain. Payal daud kar Shekhar aur Simmi ke pass aati hain.

Payal : Hello mamaji mamiji. Wo unka ashirwad leti hain. Phir wo Samrat aur Gunjan ke pass aati hain. Hello bhai hello bhabhi. Wo dono ko hug karti hain. Wo bachho se bhi milti hain aur unko chocolates deti hain.

Gunjan : Na Na payal. Inke pass aur bhi chocolates hain jo Mayank ne US se laye huye hain. Kyun Deepu? Munni?

Lekin bachhe turant Payal se hath se chocolate ki bag lekar bhagte hain.

Mayank : Oh hello madam... Aap bhul gayi kya me bhi yaha hu.

Payal : Oh aagaye aap? Aagayi aapko meri yad? Aap ne ek phone bhi nahi kiya na bhai ki aap India aa rahe ho. Hum online kitni sari bate karte the lekin aapne kabhi bhi mujhse India wapas aaneki bat nahi ki. Wo to Samrat bhai ne mujhe kaha tab mujhe pata chala.

Mayank : Are meri maa.. I m sorry. Ab maf bhi kardo...

Payal : Ek hi sharth pe..

Mayank : Bolo kya sharth hain?

Payal : Pehle mujhe mera gift do jo aap mere liye laye ho.

Mayank : Aagayi na tu patri pe. Achha chalo mere kamre me..

Mayank aur Payal dono Mayank ke kamre me jate hain.

Dadi : Haa bolo ab. Kya plan hain aap logon ka?

DF nalini ko sari bate bata deti hain aur bolti hain ki aap hi ab ispe solution nikalo. Nalini unko dilasa deti hain.

At BN

Nupur apne office me jane ke liye taiyar ho jati hain. Aur neeche aati hain.

Sushant : Ho gayi tu taiyar.??

Nupur : Ji dad. Kyun aap ko kuch kam tha kya?

Sushant : Nahi. Kuch nahi. Tum kya aaj office se jaldi aa jaogi? Wo larke wale tumhe dekhne ke liye aanewale hain aaj sham 6 baje.

Nupur : Kya Firse?? Aapko malum hain na Dad mujhe shadi nahi karni. Fir aap...

Sushant : Are ek bar larke ko dekh to lo. Agar nahi pasand aaya to na bol dena.

Nupur : Ok OK. Waise Uska nam kya hain?

Sushant : Mayank Malhotra

Nupur : Mayank Malhotra (Wo si=ochne lagti hain)

Sushant : Kya hua? Kya sochne lagi?

Nupur : Kuch nahi aisehi. Chalo me nikalti hu.

Sushant : Theek hain. Lekin jaldi aana office se. Bye..

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beautiful update ketki
keep it up

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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
very nice .
Thnx for PM.

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