VIRIKA: Bleeding in Love = ch.27 on pg.120 - Page 69

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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 20

It felt unreal for both Viren and Jeevika that a moment like this came in their life. In their hearts they both couldn't believe that one day they would be in a situation like this. For Jeevika it was a matter of having a partner to share the responsibility of parenting a child. For Viren, he did not even have a single person to share his pain with. His idea and dream of having a family was here, and that too mainly because of Riva. The beautiful moment fell short when Riva's phone call came. Jeevika picked it up and was scared for a moment listening to her daughter. She held onto Viren's hand and they both rushed to get into a taxi. Even though Viren's apartment was not too far, he knew he had to get home within the next few minutes. He couldn't tell what was going on, but all he knew was the fact that Riva was panicked over something. As soon as they reached, Viren and Jeevika went upstairs opening the apartment. Riva was there seeming to be drowning in her own tears in a way. Viren and Jeevika both kneeled down near her to comfort her. While Jeevika hugged her tightly, Viren just tried getting both of them to quiet down so he could find out what was happening. When Jeevika broke away from her daughter, Riva looked at Viren. He took her to the couch and sat down with her.


v - "Okay tell me now what happened?"

r - "I was sleeping, and then I heard my cell phone ringing. I picked it up even though I was asleep thinking it was you or mom. And then..." she said starting to cry.

She was having a hard time completing her sentence, but Viren at least now knew someone called and was the reason behind this. When Riva was a little calm again Viren asked her more questions.


v - "Do you know who was talking?"

r - "No, I had never heard his voce before"

v - "What did he say?"

r - "He said tell your mom to open the door or she will regret it. He wanted to hurt my mom" she said starting to cry again.

Viren was so confused at what was happening. Who was calling and for what purpose?

Riva was scared, but more than scared drained out from crying. She was holding onto Viren's coat so tightly while Viren and Jeevika both tried to figure out what was going on. When Riva had fallen asleep on the couch, Viren got up and got Riva's phone. He saw there were three missed calls in the past half hour and all from an unknown number. When he went to voicemail to hear the messages, he could understand why Riva was so panicked. A deep manly voice threatening to kill Jeevika and take away Riva from her. Jeevika was standing at the door probably more freaked out now than Riva was. She didn't say anything, but she couldn't hold still. The fact that someone was calling and threatening to hurt her was bad, but blackmailing to take away her daughter was even worst. At the back of her head she knew who this was, but was too scared to admit it.


v - "I need to go to the police and lodge a complaint. We need to track this number down and find out the whole truth" he said angrily.


Now that the three were a "family", Jeevika and Riva were his responsibility and he was doing only what the man of the house would be doing. Viren was about to call the police when Jeevika went up to him and took the phone out of his hands ending the call.


j - "There's no point Viren"

v - "What do you mean? You want Riva to keep getting phone calls like this? We need to find out who is behind this"

j - "I know already"

v - "Who is it then?"

j - "Viren I don't think we should be together" she said staring down breaking down.


After more than ten years Jeevika found a man who she could say those three words to, and within an hour she had to emit those words and that beautiful memory for the future.



20th update of Bleeding in Love!!!! Tell me how it was? (besides the fact that it was short 😆) Do comment and like so I can update sooner 😊 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
res !!! :)

#unres ..
other suspense filled bil update...
but I loved it
viren is very caring .. a perfect husband material !!:)
those calls... I want to kill the person on the other side ..
nd I know the person !!! perks of being ur frnd !!! 🤣
jeevika emotions was totally acceptable.
she has gone frm a lot in her life...
hope everything gets well really soon !!!:)
keep writing such amazing updates...

guyzz plzzz comment nd like every writer work .
they put a lot in each nd every update...
nd in return what they want some likes nd comments !!!
they deserve more thn this !!!
comment soon .. so tht she can update !!!! :)
Edited by millee18 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Liked the update...!!!life is all abt ups n downs..its how v deal...amaxin but jeevika shouldnt bkout now..waitin for next. Thnks for the PM!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww.. poorr Rivaaa!!! im feeling baddd for the little one!!!! i just hope everything gets sorted out between Virikaa.. im damn sureee tht wud be Jeevika's ex-husband!!! Goddd!!!! Viren save Jeevikaa!!!
keepp continuinggg... eager to readdd moreee :D :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
i loved it😊😊😊
how can u write so brilliantly👏⭐️
the emotions were described so beautifully👍🏼
i can feel the pain😭
poor riva 😭
cant see her crying like this😭
aww viren the man of the house😳
why jeevika said all this to him😭
hope everything becomes alright😊
want to know jeevika's past🤢
i m sure viren will handle it greatly😊😳
and i hate that caller😡
waiting to read more n more😉
and it was really very very short😉
i want a big update😃
plz continue soon 😊
why u always make us wait this much😊😉
plz continue soon😊

Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update.. I was think about something like that will happen... now finally we know about jeevika's past... hopefully viren will solve the problem soon.. coZ wanna see virika's happy family.. update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank God u updated ! I thought u will not ! Thank u so much for updating !
It was short ! But it was awesum !!
Truly loved it ! No why this happened?
I think its jeevika's ex- husband?
Hope it dont creates so many troubles for virika !
Plzz do update soon bcoz it was a short update !
Loved it !
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally we gonna c jeevi's past
m sure viren will handle everythng softly
loved the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Y MAKE US SAD AFTER GIVING HAPPINESS :-( I NO LIKE IT :'(... WELL OFCOURSE MY LOVE HAS DONE AN AWESOME JOB YET AGAIN LOVE YOU
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Posted: 11 years ago
Karina di
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My best sweetest sister, worlds best writer for virika n kryan... Behna your story always let me imagine a real life story ! We know that a real life is full of adventures, and its so pretty.. And your story is a real life story full of twist and turns love ittt... How cute was when jeevika tells the worlds best words "I Love You" and now she is afraid that maybe her past will comee... But i know our sweet viren will never let go, and he will always be positive because jeevika and riva is his life and family! So scary that our sweet riva got a scary call like this, and jeevika knows who is it! And viren wants to protect both of her pretty ladies. And know jeevika is scared that maybe if they are together they will be unhappy but i hope jeevika undertsands and viren helps her to come out...
The update was:
Cute,
Loving,
Helpful,
Strange call
Scary
Huggy
Hug
Protect
Family
Awesome
Sweet
Mindblowing
Outstanding
Out of the world
Cant wait for the next chapter di... I hope jeevika dont let viren go and that unknown person gets arrested i dont want any complication inbetween virika and riva.. Specially riva going through this much and now this call (urghh) i want kill that person but our hero viren will do it...
cant wait for the next update... Thanks uuu diii.. Ur the besttt love uuu keeniii di...
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Guys please comment and read stories the writers work really really hard for making us read it.. If they want they could stop it but they wont.. Bcoz the trust us.. So pls pls read, than click LIKE button & and then please give a COMMENT.. Pls pls pls... I beg u everyone...

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