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bubblydoll

@bubblydoll

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Posted: 11 years ago

SS:BROKEN

Index:

part 1: page 1

part 2: page 4

part 3:page 6

part 4:page 9

part 5:page 11

part 6:page 12

part 7:page 15

part 8:page 18

part 9:page 19

part 10 :page21

part 11:page 24

part 12:page 26

part 13:page 28

part 14: page 30

part 15:page 32

part 16:page 34

part 17:page 35

part 18:page 37

part 1

it was after kamala went to paaki without serving food for kalpi...

kalpi got up and went away without listening to her baba and bhai's pleas to eat.. she said she wanted to be alone..and she started walking in the lonely road... she is walking aimlessly with tears continuosly flowing in her eyes... she is thinking about her life from childhood till now... her legs came to halt in a park.. she sat in the park bench looking at the sky and crying..

she is tired ,tired of fighting for herself ,for her rights,for her share of love from aai,fighting for the chance to prove her worth to others,fighting to achieve the goal her aai had planned for her but never once beside her to share the victory when she achieved.. she is utterly broken..

she is remembering everything that happened from the time she started to alibagh.. she know she is at fault when she asked him to give lift for the couple.. but she does not know they are dacoits.. she would ve never done anything like that if she knew it would cause danger to him... she does not know why it pains her soo much if he insults her.. all in her life she was someones second priority... never first.. today she lost hope that some day she ll become some ones first priority,,,

she wants to go from the world where she is of no importance.. whatever she did,how hard she tried she ll never be the good.she ll always be someone's second choice.

she remembered his words in alibagh,she is musibat magnet,wherever she is there will be problem,so today she decided to end all his problems.

with the new found sterength shew walked towards her home,when she reached her home she saw her dad waiting for her,her aai is nowhere to be found,maybe still with paaki.she didn't care...

Today for the first time vittal jadav saw his daughter without facade,in his whole life he never thought he would see his rajkumai in this state, she is broken,her eyes doesn't have life.

He hugged his daughter to himself,he vowed to himself whatever is troubling her daughter he ll make it go away,

For once she didnt cry or complain about aai,she just sat there and told her dad that she wants to go away, he blinked once thinking he is imagining, but no he is not imagining his rajkumari really said about going away,

to be continued..

Edited by bubblydoll - 11 years ago

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

lol u seem to be more broken then kalpi...coz today even i felt bad for kalpi...am feeling bad really

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OmkaraKiParvati

@OmkaraKiParvati

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Do continue... Very interesting. Do continue.. Wanna know wht happens next... 😳

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bubblydoll

@bubblydoll

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ShanUlas
lol u seem to be more broken then kalpi...coz today even i felt bad for kalpi...am feeling bad really

u r rite... today i felt bad for kalpi when ragav insulted her,but wen i saw the precap i litrally want to kill them both.

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Nandini Swarna

@nandinidavid96

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

wow...this is very interesting 👍🏼

Please continue soon

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Soni

@soni-zee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Do continue your os dear.. it's really nice😳 and sad too😭 but update soon 😊

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sawant21

@sawant21

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

Please do continue. I was thinking the same, she going back to panchagani to teach there. And rag have finds out she left heart broken and holds him responsible for her condition.