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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3


Both father and daughter sat in silence after agreeing to kalpi's decision...

Vittal saw his daughter watching kids playing in the park with the smile in her lips.. but he knows that her mind is not in it.. even though his daughter didnt say anything about why she wants to go.. he can understand that its becoz of kamala...but he is not sure its fully becoz of kamala... he would ve been happy if she complained like when she was little that her aai was never there for her... now it shows she has grown big..

But he is sure that its not about growing up.. there is something bothering her... which she is not revealing... so the father daughter duo started from park...

on the way they saw neetu talking with a man,not talking it looks like fighting...they both are not in a mood to meet neetu and hear her bakwas.. so they came sideways without gaining attention of neetu.. but when they heard the name kalpi they stopped... they listened to the entire conversation about how they failed kalpi... and now the man is asking more money from neetu,but this time neetu is not willing to pay the money and told that man this time let the marks come.. she don't care anymore ...


vittal's blood boiled,but kalpi asked him to keep quiet and took him away,they both went to the college as it is saturaday the principal was there.. they told what they witnessed while ago.. the prinicipal heard everything carefully and assured them that he ll personally do the revaluing... And he also promised to take action on the examiner after enquiry...


Vittal and kalpi came out of the college.. vittal thought his daughter became matured overnight. he wants to know what happened with his daughter to change drastically... and he is sure that he ll never get an answer...


Next day went in a jiffy.. There is nothing to hide from kamala... Becoz she was not there at home.. She went to shopping with Paaki .. Paaki told kamala maa that she wants a new wardrobe to attract ragav... Kalpi made some calls to her friend and made some arrangement...

Monday morning kamala maa went to help someone in the chawl... Kalpi and his dad went out taking Kalpi's bag.. Today vital is strong for his daughter.. he is thankful that kalpi came to him .. he is sure that if he didnt allow her she would ve gone without telling...

Kalpi directly went to office.. She is much early than anyone.. she kept the resignation letter in Ragav's table.. and took her belongings from her table,looked at the office for the last time and went away..

After some time everyine started coming to office.. paaki came and looked at kalpi's table and thought kalpi abhi tak kyun nahi aayi... shayad ragav ne usko kuch kaam de diya hoga and went into her cabin..

Ragav and sammy came to office along with maya..he is not in a good mood with continuous sleepless nights and project pressure... when he crossed the kalpi's table he felt strange ,she is not there... he went into his cabin and sat.. he saw the letter his mood become worst..

He called paaki and asked her Miss.kapoor,where is Miss.jadav? Paaki who is in a dream world came back.. i dont know Sir, may be she is late today..

Ragav's anger grew no bounds.. Oh Miss.Kapoor, ur assistant is not there and u are telling me u don't know.. Hearing his loud voice sammy came and asked what happened Ragav,Miss.kalpi ne resign kardiya.. Uski letter yahaan par hein.. and miss.kapoor ne bata rahi hein ki she doesn't know anything..

his voice grew heavy with each words.. he felt like he lost something precious..
Immediately paaki called kamala maa... Kamala informed them that she doesn't know anything, she ll talk with kalpi once she reach home as she is out...

Ragav asked her to call in kalpi's number,but it said the number is currenly switched off..Ragav was irritated, he asked them to get back to work... Sammy concerned for kalpi.. he know she is hurt.. becoz last time when she spoke with him ,he saw pain in her eyes for the reason unknown to him..

Paaki is confused.. when she turned to go back she saw the challenge number is not there in the glass... when she voiced her confusion everyone saw the glass door..

Ragav remembered kalpi telling him that she doesn't want 30 days ,she ll resign the job.. he thought 'did she really think that he hates her" that she resigned the job...

Nothing is going as planned he wants to maintain a distance from her.. but he never thought she ll go away from him... Everyone is in their own world thinking of reason for kalpi's resignation...

Kalpi is on the way to her destination leaving all the pain and burden..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Loved it please update chapter soon can't wait now😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Amzing Update...!!!
Liked d pain..nicely written...Amazing!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Itz awesum... plzzz update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Awesome update šŸ‘please update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
This is amazing šŸ‘šŸ¼
I am at loss of words to appreciate your work...I could fee the raw pain and sorrow of Kalpi while reading. Equally empathized with Raghav by the end. Your an amazing writer

Please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written wonder wat Raghav is going to do if he going to look for her or maybe da compay she will for will sign ai contract with Raghav
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow the update was worth the wait
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
just caught up with the last 2 parts...
poor kalpana😭.. but I love her courage and determinationā­ļø
I also admire vitthal for supporting her decisionšŸ‘šŸ¼
Im so eager for the drama when kamla, pookie and especially raghav discover that kalpana is nowhere to be found...
plz continue soon
take care
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing šŸ‘ plz continue soon i cant wait

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