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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: yellowpurse

i reallyyy loved...i too like u feel the EXACT same thing for Kalpi/ our takes on her feelings are so similar! i rlly feel 4 her😭

pls pls continuee

i think i should just admit my feelings to the world of EMA IF now...i put my claim on KALPANA VITTHAL JADAV!!!!😆😆😆 so while we already have people for all the guys...Sammy, Raghav, Prem...and even though i can't be her husband🤣...i still am claiming my 1st priority for Kalpi!!! 😳🤣

nice thought though you r a bit late..OK second to me...I have already claimed her as my muffin..eyes my muffin..though I can't be her hubby u come second..just next to me 😆😉🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it dear. Please continue!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 2:


kalpi was staring at her dad with soo much hope.. he does not have a heart to say noo.. but he just looked on,how can he let her daughter to go away...

after a few minutes of silence,vittal asked his daughter what do u want to do,kalpi said baba ab hum jo bhi discuss karenge aap aai se nahi batayenge..vittal was shocked,becoz till now he never ever hide something from kamala,before he trird to tell her that she took his hand and kept it in her head and said meri kasam.. he just nodded..

they heard kamala sound from outside so kalpi said baba hum kal subha baat karenge and slept.she does not want to see her aai's face.. it ll hurt her more...

Sleep is far away for her... Not jus for her ... there is someone twisting and turning in his comfortable bed in restlessness... whenever he closed his eyes he can see the big teary eyes of the girl staring up at him with innumerable question ... for which he doesn't ve an answer for one...

He replayed the events in his mind and came to the conclusion that he ll apologize to her for the rude behavior.. then everything ll be ok.. little did he know it ll be late ,may be little too late...

Its Sunday, kalpi and vittal jadav is sitting in silence in the park,after a few minutes of silence kalpi said baba i want to go away from here,vittal said i ll not allow you to go anywhere whatever the problem is we ll solve it...

Kalpi looked at her father and said main hamesha keliye nahi jaa rahi hoon baba..main toh bas..she was cut off by her dad,u are not going...

Kalpi said i want to set my mind straight.. i want to make sure what i am doing in my life.. and for whom.. i want to set my priorities right..

vittal saw his daughter controlling her tears while speaking.. he cant see her tears.. tum kahan jaana chaathi ho beta... she said baba i want to go some place where i ll be myself , i ll live just for myself ...
she getting teary and said i don't want to do anything becoz someone else wanted me to,i want to build myself again from scratch so that i ll not break into pieces.. i want to build myself in such a way that someone's words (remembering ragav's words) or someone's action( remembering kamala's negligence) doesn't hurt me..

Kis aur keliye main jeena nahi chaatha hoon baba.. main khud keliye jeena chaata hoon.. and break down... vittal said lekin hum tumhara bina kaise rahenge... baba main hamesha keliye aapse dur nahi jaa rahi hoon.. jab main sab kuch sehnei keliye tayyar hojaungi tab main vapas aajaungi...
lekin baba wherever i go i ll be in touch with you.. but you shd not tell anyone anything about be not even to aai.. said kalpi ...

vittal saw his rajkumari grown up... but she is broken...she jus needed some support and time then she ll be ready to face the world.. And this time he is going to be the pillar of support for his daughter come what may he ll be there for her...

And thus vittal jadav decided to help his daughter in anyway possible...

to be continued...



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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love vitthal...this father daughter relation is enough to make Kalpana stand and fight back..she's in true sense her father's princess...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww Vitthal is suuuccchhh dotting father...gosh conna make me teary-eyed...
"i want to build myself in such a way that someone's words (remembering ragav's words) or someone's action( remembering kamala's negligence) doesn't hurt me.."
LOOOVVEDD it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

nice thought though you r a bit late..OK second to me...I have already claimed her as my muffin..eyes my muffin..though I can't be her hubby u come second..just next to me 😆😉🤣


😆😆 okayyy di ab apke samne to ghutne tekne hi padenge...aur jab i get to b next to U then all's well!!😳 aur ye bhi to dhyan mein rakhna padega ki ap us asylum ki head hai jaha pe mein khud bharti hoon 🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: yellowpurse


😆😆 okayyy di ab apke samne to ghutne tekne hi padenge...aur jab i get to b next to U then all's well!!😳 aur ye bhi to dhyan mein rakhna padega ki ap us asylum ki head hai jaha pe mein khud bharti hoon 🤣🤣

😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome finally I got to see vithal standing up for kalpi if not in the serial in your os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful👍🏼
plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
i am crying yaar...i cant hold myself now..cant control my tears just hope aisa kuch serial main na ho...plz continue soon dear...loved it

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