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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome part dear... it's soo gud to see Kalpi father stand by her.. update soon dear😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Mind -blowing !!!!!! Love it !!! plz update the part soon plzz !!! hope Raghav will stop her ... but like your imagination Bubly doll
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its gr8 ..plz update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Superb update
I'm happy that Kalpi dad is there for her and support her decision even though he is not happy with it
Her mom is too busy to care
Kalpi leaving, and Raghav already going crazy lol
I wonder how he will react when he hear Kalpi leave not only the job but the city as well
Wonderfully written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 4


Ragav sitting in his home drinking...Thinking about Kalpi...

Its been a month since he last saw her.. everything changed in this one month.. Ragav became more furious ,more temperamental,more rude, more khadoos...

Flashback:

when they saw the resignation.. He told paaki to bring kalpi next day to office.. unaware that next day ll bring a huge strom in his life.. The whole night he thinks of some way to apologise to kalpi so she ll take back her resignation..

AT chawl:

Kamala created a huge hungama when she came to know that kalpi resigned the job and in no where in sight.. Vittal's patience broke and he said in a no non sennse tone that " aaj ki baat aap meri rajkumari ki chints chodiye, aur tumari paaki ki khayal rakhiye..

Kamala stunned " vittal yeh kya baat karrahi hein... paaki aur kalpi dono bhi meri beti hein na...
Vittal : nahi kamala mujhe pata hei ki tum kalpi se kitna pyaar karthi hei... lekin aaj ki baat main meri rajkumari ki khayal rakoongi... tum uski chinta chodu do..

Kamala, " vittal kalpi hei kahaan.. tumne kaha woh bahar gayi hein lekin ab tak woh wapas kyun nahi aayi... she is hurt with vittal's accusation...

vittal shouted at her may be for the first time in her life.. He shouted and told her kalpi is not here ,she went away to some place... and she ll not come until the right time...

Kamala thought vital is joking with her just like the previous time.. but when she opened the cuboard she didnt find kalpi's clothes.. now she became hyper..

When she asked vittal about kalpi's whereabouts , he told no one should know about kalpi's whereabouts except him.. kamala begged him atleast to talk with kalpi.. vittal felt sorry for his wife but he want to be strong for his rajkumari.. He said kalpi will talk only if she wishes to.. and went away ,he can't see his wife's tears..

When he came home after few hours,paaki was sitting with kamala, paaki asked vittal to tell about her whereabouts in the pretext of office work... but vittal stated clearly that there is no agreement has been signed by kalpi to the company.. and she gave the resignation letter... so there is no need to call her for anything that related to work...

He told kamala that aaj tak maine tumhari har faisla par saath diya hein.. iss baar mujhe tumhari saath chaaye.. mujhe vaada karo ki kalpi ki baare mein patha karne ki koshish nahi karoge, aur kisi si bhi nahi kahoge usse pata karne ki( looking at paaki)..

kamala was stumped,but looking at her husband's steely gaze she gave the promise...

Next day paaki came to office and told ragav and sammy about kalpi...
Ragav was speechless, he thought "woh sach mein chali gayi"...


Flashback ends.

in this one month Ragav didnt talk abt kalpi to anyone.. But sammy knows better but he kept quiet...

Ragav always thought keeping distance from kalpi ll be good for him.. he ll be able to maintain his sanity.. he ll be able to control his life...

But nothing of that sort happened..

He is a mess... a pure mess.. he maintain his charade in his office .. but at home he dont want to maintain his charade.. becoz it paining a lot to maintain a charade that nothing matters to him.. but every damn thing about her does matter to him.. maybe more than his life...
He know he is at fault , he pushed her away..

But he doesn't know she ll go. he thought she ll come back just like everytime he pushed her with his comments...

He wants to see her , apologize to her... Atleast he wants to see her from distance .. he wants to make sure she is alright...
Its been a month, now everything is getting out of hands.. maintaining a facade is becoming difficult for him..


On the other side kamala and vittal's relationship is strained,even though both didnt voiced out anything.. kamala started feeling that she is reason for kalpi going away,becoz its been a month since went away but still now she didnt talk with her not even once... she know that kalpi is talking to vittal once in a while.. but not once to her...

Nowadays whenever she see paaki , she started missing kalpi.. (what an irony. whenever she is paaki she never cared about kalpi now everything changed).

Paaki started sensing difference in kamala maa, sometimes she talk with her kamala maa she feels that kamala maa is not listening to her , her mind is not in her talk...she knew kamala maa is missing kalpi.. seeing kamala maa sad she feels guilty,somewhere she knows that she is also one of the reason that kalpi went away..

But somewhere away from everyone Kalpi is leading her life in much more peaceful way than she ve ever dreamed...




Edited by bubblydoll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Continue... Plz do continue... Wanna know whr Kalpi is and how she is leading her life.. And how Raghav and Kalpi will meet...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Just wow...eagerly waiting for more..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Lovely update
Now they all I missing Kalpi
And Raghav he deserve to be miserable lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Last part us something I really want to happen in the show too... Maza aaya Kamla ko she deserve that only..
Very nice update
plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Itz really awesum...
Cant wait more...
De suspense is killing me... wanna knw where is kalpi n how wil rags cum 2 know abt it...

plzzz continue soon...

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