Arshi SS : LOVE (Language Of Various Emotions) Note : pg 15

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Hello Friends, </font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">I am starting a new script on Arshi. Please let me know your opinion for this so that i can continue along with my other works.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Prologue : </font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Arnav met anjali after her accident and got satistifed that his sister is with him and she is alive except for some bruises on her head and hand. Arnav realized the importance of khushi after having a chat with his Di and he decided to propose her. Shyam was shocked to see anjali alive and was seething in anger. NK and akash had heard the convo b/w arnav and khushi and knew that arnav was planning something. Arnav went to his room and took a deep breathe and started thinking his words which he wanted to tell khushi. He went to her room and wrote a message to her to meet him at the terrace. All this was seen by NK & Akash who were all in love world but someone else was in fury and wanted to burn Arnav alive. Shyam thought he will meet khushi first and somehow tell her that he loves her. Khushi came to her room and read the message and moved towards the terrace not before checking whether someone is following her or not. Satisfied that all are busy she went to terrace. NK & Akash saw this and moved towards the terrace but then was accompanied by anjali as NK told her what they saw in khushi's room. Khushi was thinking what arnav wanted to tell her when suddenly someone grabbed her arm in a vice grip and hugged her. Aranv was climbing towards the terrace but was stopped by HP for some last minute arrangements. Arnav cleared the doubt and moved towards the door and opened it to get shocked. </font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Shyam :Khushiji believe me i love you only you. </font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Khushi : Enough shyamji, aapki himmat kaise huie hume haath lagane ki. I am silent just cuz of anjaliji and arnavji. U are not at all a man. Anjaliji doesnt deserve you. Why dont you leave her.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">All the 4 were shocked to the core seeing the truth un-fold infront of them, anjali was in shock and started fainting, akash helped her to sit in the nearby chair and went to hear the entire truth. NK and arnav were boiling in anger. </font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Shyam : I will leave her for sure, will you marry me then. </font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Khushi coming out of the hug and slapping him : Mind your words shyamji, u being married or not married i dont bother. U dont deserve not only anjaliji but also me. She is sucha person and thinks u are god and what are u a cheap, who know only to break the trust of your wife. Just imagine what will happen if anjaliji comes to know about this truth.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Shyam : Oh shut up khushiji, I dont want her, i just wanted her money and Raizaadas are very rich. I get what i wanted by just manupulating raani-sahiba. She is such a fool to think i will love her. If so why u dint tell the family about my truth. I had planned so well for her accident but she survived.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Khushi : How dare You!!! You cheap...Do you think i dint come to tell the truth, i came to tell anjaliji, but then her mangalsutra broke and she was worried for your health,and arnavji, i know how much her loves his Di and i am sure he will turn the world upside down to give her all the happiness but i cannot see him broken, since u will break him if he comes to know your ugly truth. Shyamji my last warning, just stay in your limits and try to keep anjaliji happy if not even arnavji will not be able to save you from me. And ha if you ever try to hurt her again i will make sure u are thrown out of this house the very next second. </font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Shyam again tries to hug her, but khushi pushes him and slaps him again and moves out crying. She thinks that its time for arnavji to know about this man. NK & Akash look at Di and carry her to her room and arnav moves to his room in anger. </font>


<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Prologue : Above</font>
<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Chapter 1 : Page 3</font>
<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Chapter 2 : Page 6</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Chapter 3 : Page 8</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Chapter 4 : Page 10</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Chapter 5 : Page 10</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Chapter 6 : Page 13
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting prologue.👏⭐️
I like it.
Looks promising.
I am looking forward to reading more.
Thanks.😃
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Fantastic prologue.
Its the the most important scene in the dram The terrace scene.
Thank goodness Arnav didn't leave in the middle n heard the whole truth. Now Anjali is also aware of shyam cunning face n so does Akash n NK.
I am eager to know Arnav thoughts for khushi. he knew very well that he is innocent.
Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice concept
loved it
plzz pm me when u update
waiting to see what anav does😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start. waiting to read further
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats for starting a new story from this point of view
I loved it 😃
So now Arnav, Anjali, NK along with Akash now the intentions of Shyam
Waiting to read further!!!!
Thanks for the pm😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful start,
waiting for the 1st part.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wait did he hear what she said
the full thing
cause anj only heard half of it and she fainted
dammit i dont want another mu between them
guess we will know and soon if that happens right
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its a nice try and totally different concept
hope anjali will gets out of this mess soon and would like to see her strong and independent
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fabulous prologue...the terrace scene was the key scene for the drama...thank god that Arnav stood there and heard full conversation between Khushi and Shyam...I am eager to read more...please update soon.😛






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