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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: 132547689

Interesting. Looking forward to read your story.



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Originally posted by: Tinkerbelle88

Really cool concept will be looking forward to it. Also I'm a Korean movie fan so more reason to like it 😃



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Originally posted by: Tinkerbelle88

Really cool concept will be looking forward to it. Also I'm a Korean movie fan so more reason to like it 😃



Oh,Really U R Fan Of Korean Movies 😃

I Am Not A Big Fan But I Started Loving Korean Dramas. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: saijahnavi



Thanks 😊 & Plz If U Wanna Write A Story Then PM Me.

I Will Wait For Ur Story...😳

Just finished First Touch and have started Chance one in a million

Maybe after that

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Originally posted by: Chahanya

Just finished First Touch and have started Chance one in a million

Maybe after that



Okay As Ur Wish.But When U Update It Plz Pm Me. 😳
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Episode 1


Scene open on a fantasy sequence, set in what looks like an enchanted meadow in a fairy tale. The CG is exaggerated, but it has that overtly whimsical sensibility of Pushing Daisies or Big Fish " dreamy, romantic, and girlish.

In the daydream, a handsome young man dressed all in white comes upon a sleeping girl, kisses her lightly, then walks away. When the girl wakes, she sees a white horse and follows it through the forest to another meadow, where the horse turns back into her mystery man.

He approaches her and leans in. This time, she anticipates the kiss and purses her lips in readiness...

Which is when she wakes up. At school. Late for class. Humeira, waking from her latest crush-induced fantasy, races off as the bell rings.

In class, Humeira's teacher attempts to exert some authority over her sluggish pupils, but this ain't the last-place class without a reason. Students nap, zone out, and generally slack off. Humeira and her friends aren't worried about their latest grades, though " they're always at the bottom, so what else is new?


While Humeira, Nikhat, and Najma hang out in the lounge, a student comes by and loses a coin in the soda machine. She's Teena, who's basically a Mean Girl, despite being younger than Humeira.

With a flourish, Humeira steps in and kicks the machine to get the soda to pop out, and enjoys basking in the moment. Particularly since it momentarily puts a cork in Teena's superior act.

Humeira moons all over Haider, which seems to be a pretty common occurrence. Her friends are used to it, and only shake their heads when Humeira shares her daydream and calls him a spirit of the forest. She goes into raptures over his perfection, saying that now she understands how vampires feel " such is his beauty that it makes her want to bite right into him.

Speak of the devil: Haider makes his appearance, calm and cool as you please, blithely ignoring the squealing of girls who ooh over his entrance.

Humeira freezes as Haider approaches, victim to the vicissitudes of adolescent infatuation, and her heart thumps wildly. Teena flutters over to him offers her soda instead, chattering on as though they're close friends. Apparently their mothers are friends, and Haider tries to use this to ingratiate herself, fawning all over him.

Haider ignores her, but when his coin also gets stuck in the machine, Teena calls out to Humeira to employ her fix again. She particularly enjoys putting Humeira on the spot, making the latter reluctant to comply but also reluctant to refuse.

So Humeira goes up to the machine, studiously avoiding his gaze, and delivers a kick. Afterward she cringes in embarrassment, not wanting this to be his impression of her, but I say there's something satisfying in the way Haider gapes; he's not exactly impressed, but eliciting any reaction at all from his stone-faced demeanor is probably an accomplishment.

Haider turns to leave, and Najma, trying to help her friend, calls out her name loudly so that he'll hear it. Haider turns and starts walking back toward them, and Humeira readies herself in anticipation " surely he'll thank her, or say something? But no, he retrieves his change from the machine.

Her friends urge Humeira to confess her feelings, since they'll graduate soon enough. Despite her earlier embarrassment, Humeira bounces right back and clings to the new hope that perhaps Haider isn't expressing his feelings for her because he doesn't know hers, and decides a confession is just the thing. But how?

To prove her utter lack of common sense, Humeira likes Najma's joke suggestion about dressing as Gollum and addressing Haider as "My precious." Nikhat's suggestion is better, but not by much: a mating dance, like animals.

This leads us into another fantasy, wherein Humeira dances in Swan Lake, joined by Haider. Again this goes longer than necessary, but at least the punchline saves it (sort of): Haider partners Humeira, lifts her in the air, and then tosses her aside.

Poor girl. Even in her own daydreams she can't catch a break.

Next up is drawing class, and Ayaan (whom I've taken to calling Duckie in my head) is tapped as figure model. Anyone with half a brain would be totally onto how very much he's in love with Humeira (or at least in grand infatuation), but I suppose half her brain is perpetually fixated on Haider, so she brushes his attentions aside.

That means all his efforts to look cool are wasted, although he doesn't know it. As the pose becomes harder and harder to maintain, sweat beads drip from his forehead but Ayaan vows to stick with it, since Humeira is looking at him.

Humeira does draw, but in a mechanical way as she doodles the words "Confess... mating dance... Gollum..."

Adding salt to the wound is when Ayaan peers at the drawing at the end of class " to see that she has drawn his body with Haider's face.

We don't see much of the teachers in Episode 1, but I suspect they'll have their own storyline, so let's introduce em: Aliya Plays The Class Teacher 3 &Zen plays the Class 1 teacher . Both are "Teacher Song," but are polar opposites " kind of like Humeira and Haider, in fact.

I wonder if their storyline will mimic our main one, since it appears Aliya may have a crush on Zen, who is just as cool and superior as his star student.

Humeira becomes engrossed in thought, trying to figure out how to confess her feelings to Haider. Dad picks up on it, and understands that she's got a crush on a boy even though she describes it as the situation of "a friend," and shares how he made his confession to her mother. He Replied " I Taken Ur Mother For A Long Drive And Driven My Car Like A Maniac.Ur Mother Screamed To Stop The Car.But I Won't Stopped It For Few Minutes.After A Few Minutes I Stopped Driving.Ur Mother Started Taunting Me.Suddenly I Confessed Her ."

Humeira " What Do U Said?"

Gaffur Replied " If U Want To Live Then Accept My Proposal.Otherwise Die..."

So that launches Humeira into another reverie " really, drama? Number 3 already? " wherein she corners Haider with her motorcycle gang, looking like a bad girl out of Grease while a pale imitation of "Beat It" serves as background music.

(these extended fantasies that never end!)😳

Badass Humeira confronts Haider, who backs away meekly, and she recites her line, which offers him the choice to either be with her or die.

And even in her fantasy, Haider picks the coffin. Aw! There's something really endearing about Humeira in this.

Thankfully Dad has more practical advice than her friends, and suggests that a sincere love letter might just work best. Humeira decides he's right, and delivers a letter to his locker, then waits nervously for his response.

When he walks by the lounge and shows Humeira no recognition at all, Najma shouts her name loudly, determined to make her friend known. Nikhat joins her, and this time, they have a reaction.

Haider asks, "Are you Humeira?" He makes his way back to them, and holds out a letter to her. Students gather round curiously, and Humeira barely contains her excitement as she opens it, telling him she hadn't dared hope for a reply.

Yet as soon as she starts to read, her excitement fades, replaced by crushing disappointment.

Teena has to live up to her designation as Mean Girl, so she swipes the letter from Humeira's grasp, then crows about its contents. Haider hadn't written her a reply " he'd graded hers! The letter has been marked up in red pen, and he'd given her a D-.

Teena positively exults and talks about it loudly for all to hear, while Humeira can only stand there, humiliated. Meanwhile, Haider just stands there and tells her, "I'm sorry to say this, but I hate dumb girls."

Ayaan " bless him " comes late to the party but has sized up the situation, and confronts Haider for his rudeness. He demands that Haider apologize, to which Haider smirks, "For what, correcting her mistakes?"

Ayaan retorts, "Do you only see the mistakes? Don't look at the letters, look at the contents!"

He challenges Haider to fight and takes a swing, but the latter swiftly evades the punch " cool as you please, his hands not even moving from his pockets.

The vice principal interrupts, and as Haider is the golden child, he is dismissed while Ayaan is called in for disciplining.

Finally, Haider deigns to speak and levels a finger at the board that has been posted of the recent test results " Humeira and her friends occupy the lowest status of the school. He points to a second sign, which marks the 50 top students who are admitted to a special study hall each month.

Turning his scorn to Humeira, he calls her thoughtless for choosing to waste her time rather than caring about more important things: "I hate thoughtless, impudent girls."

Humeira is devastated. Worst of all is probably the fact that he's not wrong " she IS the lowest scoring student. Still, she hardly deserves such a drubbing from him.

She takes out her frustration by running around the school, exhausted and stumbling by the time she reaches lap 34. Her friends urge her to stop, but she insists on running two more laps. In a lovely moment of solidarity, they stand up to give her a hand (literally) and support her through her last lap.

Word of Humeira's encounter with Haider spreads through the school, making her the laughingstock. Is it worse to be mocked by your peers, or pitied by the cafeteria and cleaning ladies? Thankfully we'll probably never have to know, but Humeira has to endure.

As she and Dad settle into their newly remodeled house, unpacking their things, he notices her glumness and guesses that the confessing didn't go so well. He tries to cheer her up, and in the unpacking process he finds an old plaque that had been made when she was a baby " it bears the handprint of her parents, as well as her baby hand and footprint.

Nikhat, Najma, and Ayaan come over and marvel at the spacious digs and the newly built second floor. They sit down for a delicious meal prepared by Dad, who sighs that Humeira didn't take after him in the cooking-skills department. Ayaan takes that as his cue to assure Dad not to worry, since he'll take care of the both of them.

The others laugh at Ayaan's over-the-top declaration and tease him, which makes him cry out in an exaggerated gesture and bang his head into the wall. Which sets of a series of creaks... and rumbles...

...and leads to the house crumbling down.

It's not Ayaan's head-butt that causes the damage, but a small earthquake that shakes up the neighborhood. However, where all the other houses experience no more than mild rocking, Humeira's house has inexplicably caved in on itself.

That's one more reason for Humeira to become the focus of unwanted attention at school, and as she walks with her friends the next morning, they catch sight of a strange woman snapping photos of her. And for some reason, passing students keep looking at her and whispering.

The reason becomes clear moments later as they hear Ayaan on a megaphone, who has taken up a spot at the school's entrance calling for donations for a needy student. He means well, but one hardly wants to be called pathetic and a charity case in front of her peers, so the girls slink away in mortification.

Alas, Ayaan spies Humeira and drags her into the circle, continuing his appeals for donations " just as Haider walks by. She'd like to ignore him, but misguided chivalry drives Ayaan to engage, and he blames Haider for being the cause of all of Humeira's troubles.

Haider points out that it was the earthquake that felled her house, and Haider sputters in reply, saying that while that's true, Haider's guilty of an "earthquake of the heart," and for hurting Humeira.

Haider shrugs and offers to contribute, then, and pulls out his wallet. He starts to put in 20,000 (about $15), which is when Humeira finally speaks up. Indignantly, she tells him to put his money away " she wouldn't accept his help even if she were a beggar under a bridge.

That affects him not at all, and he starts to leave. But now Humeira's really worked up and she bursts out again:

Humeira "Who are you to look down on people like that? I bet to you, all the kids here just look like idiots, huh? You think you can just mock us. Are you so great? So you have a high IQ? You're a good student? So you have a good-looking face and you're tall!"

Uh, that statement took a turn, and Humeira realizes she's started to lose ground here. So she fumbles for a suitable retort, and insists that she CAN study. It's just that she hasn't bothered to!

Haider tells her to prove it. What does she propose, and how will she show it?

Gulp. Humeira can't back down now, so she says she'll score high enough in the next exam to score one of those seats in special study hall. Clearly not believing she can do it, Haider agrees to carry her piggyback for one lap around school if she succeeds.

Internally, Humeira does a little giddy dance at the prospect of being carried on his back, then tamps that down to coolly agree.

Humeira "Thanks to the news broadcast about the earthquake wrecking their house, Dad's old friend had seen him on TV and called him to offer his house while the Ohs figure out what to do. Dad is thrilled to be reuniting with his old best friend, with whom he'd lost contact after they'd moved to Here."

When they arrive, Humeira marvels at the grand house; his friend must be a rich man.

Dad (Gaffur)'s friend is Rehmad, who is married to Dilshad, both of whom are very friendly and give Humeira a warm welcome. When Rehmad notes that she's "even prettier in person," Dilshad has to fess up that she was so curious about her that she couldn't wait and sought her out at school this morning. Humeira recognizes her as the mysterious photographer outside the school.

Dilshad offers the services of her son to bring their luggage in, and sends him outside to the car where Humeira is gathering her things.

And really, it's no surprise at all when the two kiddos discover just who they're about to spend the next days, weeks, months, living with.😆



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Edited by saijahnavi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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And really, it's no surprise at all when the
two kiddos discover just who they're about to
spend the next days, weeks, months, living
with.

So is it Haider? 😃
Awesome ...
Waiting fr nxt update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barbievishi20

And really, it's no surprise at all when the
two kiddos discover just who they're about to
spend the next days, weeks, months, living
with.

So is it Haider? 😃
Awesome ...
Waiting fr nxt update 😊

Thanks 😊
Ya , It Is Haider😆😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks😃

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