KR two shot Jeene laga hoon..challenge first part updated

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arsha_simran

@arsha_simran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

rachu!!!!!

tune finally update Kia!!!!

haaayyyeee :* :*😳

mereko lags Tu bhul gayi hogi,... :p

and I didn't want to remind u kyunki padhai...ahhh bahut zyada hai so thought Tu busy hogi...

jab mein intro read kar rahi thi I thought new story new concept sooo happy!!! Bt den wen I read it further mujhe malum chala DAT dis is my challenge!!!

haayyyeee excited excited!!!

accha one more thing... I changed my user name to arsha_simran from krishaluv ...,,

ab now cuming to the update!!!!

the character sketch!!! Awesome!!!

the way I wanted the ppl to be!!! Perfect!!!

krisha ki bff wali bond mast!!! ND den kriyam sooo cute!!!

Sharon-- meri bff ho ya uski hahhahahaaa

haayyyeee Kriyaansh ki first meet!!!

awesomeee kria ka character perfectly portrayed!!! A small jhalli person who cares for her friends!!!

isliye rey se fight kar lia!!! Loved that!!!!

ND den nok jhok se dosti se pyaar!!

niceee!!!

ND den Tia ka character awesome!!!!

perfectly described!!! Loved it!!!!

and the school teacher wali part aweessoommmeee!!!!

it clearly shows kria luvd Tia sooo much!!! <3

I loved that!!!

kriyaansh fire escape scene awesome!!!

rey kria ko support Kar raha tha Bt the pic.,,,,.,,.

the pic changed it all...

am just waiting to read wat wil b kria's reaction and whether she wil forgive him or not,..,,

and m very happy ki tune isse 3 shot banaya!!!

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

awesome update...

loved it..

kria s thinking abt her sister d accident which took her away from kria n hates d person who did it..

rey s thinking abt d accident which happened coz of him n thinks abt d restless night he had n how he wants to say sorry to d victim's sister who he doesn't know where r who she s..

destiny had played a great cruelty in their life by making rey n kria fall in love not knowing d past n d consequences of it.. rey s left numb seeing d picture of kria's sister who she s missing d most n feeling bad for taking d most important person from kria's life n s now afraid of loosing kria for d mistake he did if kria comes to know that rey was d person who took her sister from her..

precap looks interesting waiting for next part...

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

that was fabulous chapter... means now rey know who accident he had did
was kriya sis and he fell in love with her... omg... swayan and sharon
are together... and rey is in think whether to talk to this about to his friends or
leave it inside him only... do continue soon and pm me

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Reserved

Unreserved

this was an amazing update..

each and every emotion of rey was wow..

and you making it a three shot 😃

i love you for that ❤️

thanks for the PM

PS. short comment very sick

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Awesome

Ahmazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

bt opsieee when u mentioned tia's death i knew it whud hav been becoz of rey

n worst is dis was da truth

Update Soon :)

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Awesome cs and starting loved it so much
Update fast
Pm me whn u update

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Hey!! Wow yaar kya likha hai!!!
A6a hai apne kriyansh ki yahan par bhi ladai se shuru hui hai!!
Dono ka confession bhi ho gaya!!! Oye hoye kya baat hai!!!
Itna i love u serial me bola hota to to sare fans faint ho jate ya fir khushi se dance karne lagte!!! Non dancers bhi khushi me dancer ban jate shayad!!!! 😉
Inki ye humesha humesha type ki talks na mujhe -ve vibes deti hai!!! Ab ku6 hoga aur dono alag ho jayenge!! Phir ye yaad karenge aur royenge!!! Kya yaar!!!! Mujhe isiliye ye senti dialogues nahi pasand!!!
Ab ke liye itna hi!!! Nxt update ke liye waiting!!!
Over ol a gud1...n ya i want der confession scene!!
Plz update soon!! N pm me for ur works plz!!!!