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ADHOORI ZINDAGI




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Part 27


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"Geet see I am here open your eyes" asked maan softly hugging her close to his heart. Maan also not feeling good because of his long day work stayed patting geet's back murmuring something. Geet snuggled close to him taking his warmth completely submitting her to him.
Minutes passed by but both hearts were not at peace still. Both didn't realize in which condition they were. Maan hugged her even more tight not allowing air to pass in between them listening to her sobs. "Shh geet don't cry please" said maan wiping away the pearls flowing from her hazels. Geet don't have energy to open her eyes but can clearly listen what he is saying.

More tears fell down from her eyes wetting his shirt. He gently wiped them away consoling her like a father did to his child. "Geet you are good girl right so listen to me don't cry" said Maan with voice enlighten with authority. Only he knows how much it is hurting his heart watching her cry like that. Geet smiled slightly with his voice n snuggled close to him hiding her face in his chest. Maan missed her smile .he tried again "Geet you know kids are better than you". Geet smile faded away from her lips for his comment.she snapped her head other side making maan realize she heard him.
Maan glanced at her face placing her curly locks aside which were disturbing her from long. She is looking like fairy in that white dress she is in his arms. his heart swelled with happiness. Maan rested his back on side door closed his eyes smiling silently. Geet stayed in his arms not bothering about anything her mis consumption he is some one else as per her thought.

Maan mobile rang breaking there blissful moment. Maan came to his senses tried to break there hug but geet is not ready for that. Giving up at last maan answered the call as it was amy.
"You are still alive thank your stars for that. Get ready to face death also" spotted amy with angry tone. Maan sighed heavily he know he deserved this as from morning he is ignoring his calls. Geet didn't bothered to give him the needed space stayed in same position maan also didn't complained about that.
"Hell with you maan and ha my girl friend ditched me .waiting for you only saying maa maa. Don't know what jadu you implanted on her huh" complained Amy making puppy face. Mansee chirped with enthusiastic voice listening the word maa. Maan cont help out but laugh with his cribbing imagining all those.

His laugh echoed in that small area geet felt like she is listening some melodious song. Rising her head slightly geet stared at his face making maan to stare at her eyes. Maan stopped abruptly watching the depth of emotions playing in her hazels.

"Are you done with that" asked amy hinting about his laugh. Maan looked away breaking the eye contact making geet stiffen slightly. Maan smelled alcohol smell is lingering in the air realized she has swallowed some amount.
"shut up Amy give the phone to pari now" ordered maan making amy frown.

Mansee grabbed the phone in middle distance before amy handled that to her. Ritzy giggled taking amy's heart away. "So pari is waiting for me" asked maan with soft voice. Geet snapped open her eyes listening to that pari word. Her blood boiled but she don't know why. She don't even met that person but the hearted building up in her heart. Maan sensed the indifference in his posture before he could ask manse chirped "maa maa" Grabbing maan's attention toward her.

Geet only heard maa she felt it is maan only her anger raised high with his next set of words. "Haww I love you soo much pari" said maan with mansee innocent call.
That's it geet snatched away the phone from him throws that away it landed below their seat. Shock was evident on maan's face for her act. He blinked his eyes to make sure what was going on is true only. Geet closed her eyes shut with a smile playing on her lips which is speaking of her victory. Maan gave amused look to her geet hided her face more close to his heart ignoring her questioning gauze.

"Geet what was that" asked maan breaking the hug harshly. Geet didn't open her eyes but a lone tear escaped from her eyes. She don't have answer for that question why she is doing this for what purpose. Maan going mad totally with her he don't know why she did like that. Secondly her tears they are piercing his heart like needles. Calming himself a bit maan asked softly "Geet what's wrong with you now".
Geet looked away not answering his question her head spinned with lack of energy and also alcohol taking effect on her. Maan dropped the idea of asking her anything looking at her messy form decided to take her home.


Home? Yeah it stucked in his mind where he can take her now?. If she left her to go to her home he know it won't be good for her. Thinking for few minutes maan decided to take her hospital as she need medication first. Deciding all things maan glanced at geet who is looking away with a grumpy face. Smiling silently maan makes her sit beside him but geet rested her head on his shoulder carelessly. Taking her hands in his maan kissed back of her hands with affection. "One more tear then think of consequences" warned maan wiping away her tears.

His eyes landed on her upper part her curves were peeking out from that fabric. Sia words ringed in his mind like temple bells "Your curves are looking prominent". Uff he is at end of losing himself maan looked away controlling the urge to touch her. He know she is vulnerable he cant take advantage of her state. Maan was about to order driver to take them to KH but stopped in middle.

Her dress no way he will allow any one look at her in that dress when she is hardly in her senses. Something stirred in his heart so he decided she should get changed first then make sure she takes something to eat also.
"Raj take me to palace" ordered maan dismissing driver. Raj nodded his head n taking driver seat headed towards the palace. Maan know Raj is very humble and loyal for him .he allows only Raj even ordered everyone in the palace to leave the place.


Raj makes sure no one were there even gate keeper also informed maan to come out. Maan gave pleasing smile to Raj before he went towards the entrance carrying her in his arms securely. Raj stared at his boss and the girl in his arms he know his boss is not womanizer. Something about that girl telling she is special to maan the way he looks at her. Raj smiled silently as he remembers maan making her wear his coat after he came to take driver seat.


Geet can sense they were going somewhere but she know when he is around her she don't have to bother about anything. Maan placed her on bed waited for her to with draw her hands which were hanging around his neck.
"Geet lay on the bed like good girl now" said maan with calm voice. He is angry on her for putting herself in this mess top of that she even didn't care to take his calls. Her indifference her cutting his calls like that. He is clueless about anything the reason for her cry.

Maan's eyes dropped out from his sockets with her next set for words. "Kiss me" said geet with meek voice but maan heard that. From the time she cut the call she is blabbering many things but he simply ignored all those. Maan freed himself from her hold roughly breaking geet's trance. Opening her droopy eyes geet checked her surroundings.





will update weekly ones only as my likes decreased so badly
not happy with that gals


maansee with maaneet is not there i know plz wait for two more

i think few more parts this story will end so enjoy gals


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Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ab tak maan ko samajh nahi aaya ki geet is jealous of pari who he is talking on phoneusko kab maloom hoga geet ki dil ki haal, raj driver came to know that geet has special place in maan's life, geet asked for kiss😛aur maan😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
teaser
nice...
did the 3 meet together?
cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update !!

haha geet nt leaving maan even when he was talking on phone geet kept hugging him tight ..

geet jealous of pari threw phone aways & maan confused why geet did this ..

geet asking maan to kiss her 😲 ..waiting to see if maan will kiss her or nt ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesme part
erm..geet jealous😆 she want maan all for herself haina babaji?😛
me wondering what would be her reaction when she vl know dat all time maanu was talking abt Mansee!!🤣
aww kiss😳
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Posted: 11 years ago


awesome update...

good that Geet is jealous...then she will shower her love on him...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely part oh geet is jealous woh mansi ko pari soch rahi hai thats why she throw mobile but maan is big wala ULLU samajhta hi nahi thanx for lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesomly awesome lovely updates:)
Sorry fr late comment yar ...
eagerly waiting fr next update:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely part
maan talking with his pari and geet jealous of it
geet asked maan to kiss her😳😳

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