MG~FF~2~ADHOORI ZINDAGI Thread 3 added page 1 feb 17th

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ADHOORI ZINDAGI

Haii cherries my 1st story reached to second thread I am so happy to share this news with all of you thanks to all who commented and given likes to every update

Special thanks to Dona di my 1st commenter of 1st thread and also Jeev didi

An also specially to my Milky girl, Gulabii, Shobha di, praff , Hinal maaneet, cadburry and all who commented

Being new writer I didn't expected this much warm welcome girl's thank you soo much for making me feel special will update tomorrow sorry for delay

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ADHOORI ZINDAGI




Banner credits goes to my drakulla aks aka "kingof me"
arey yaar tuje thanku wanku nahi kahogi dont expect that😆


Banner credits goes to my praff aks aka "reachsky 2011"
thanks u sooo much praff


prologue

The cameras were flashing on them making it difficult for him to open his eyes that were already flooded with tears and see the cruel world that was right in front of him. The reporters were clicking there pictures and asking numerous questions seeing the most unnatural thing happening


Rep1: sir how come you are here that too with her
Rep2: what happened to her? Why you are carrying her like that
Rep3: what relation you both were sharing
Rep1:we heard that you both have some affair
Rep4: silence won't help always Can we make our own assumptions


That was limit he shouts on them with his lungs out. His face was firm eyes were looking like volcano. The reporters got afraid and come to know that he was in his demon avatar. he wants to break those damn cameras and punch those reporters face for asking such questions. How can they point a finger on them he will make sure those people won't be alive anymore.


He straight away goes out from there away from that people who are not more than monsters. In his way he gives a mean look to one man, who is the sole reason of this destruction. The sky was clouded because of storm just like his heart and his eyes were pouring tears just like rain. He didn't bother about the nature just heading to a unknown destination away from all those monsters.


He is carrying her lifeless body in his hands whom, is his whole life and breathe, staring at the sky blankly. He stopped at same place where they met first. He was silent, speechless and helpless crying with his bleeded heart bitterly silently. His cry was fading away with thunder sounds may be god also not able to listen to him, that's why he snatched her from his life. He is pouring his heart silently, can say confessing his unsaid words to her.


You are my most beautiful girl that I have ever seen
But an enigma for me to understand
You are my ray of hope in my life
But darkness surrounded around you
You are my innocent angel
But hide that with your demeanor
You are my destiny
But trashed that with your own hands
You are the owner of my heart
But got ditched with your hatred
You are my princess my love
Yes you are my love

I love you

"Love" that word echoing in her eyers and makes open her eyes instantly.

(dont judge the book by cover itself)

Next part 1

guys that is it hope u all like it
sorry for spelling and grammer mistakes
if u guys really like it plz press like buttons and do comment plz
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ps: this story rights belongs to me if u get any resembles in the story its pure co incidence do let me know through pm's
thanks to all cherries




dedicating this SS to trio

muskan di, aniee di and valli di

(dont judge the book by cover itself)

pooja




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Posted: 11 years ago
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will give charters as the story go on

so if you want to know jake updates pado cherries😆😉

with love pooja
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrax for new thread

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Congrats for the new thread cherry.. :-)
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congrats for the new thread pooja...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congratulations on the new thread
waiting for update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congo for new thread...
Continue soon...
Waiting...
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for new thread..
uff..
you have totally changed my name..
i love it

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