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Posted: 11 years ago
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will b waiting... update soon n do pm me...
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CONGRATS FOR THE NEW STORY
WAITING EAGERLY
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u noe wt tat movie reminded me of our maneet as well.. d whole jungle scene was tooo gud...n tat was wen i fell in luv wit Vidyut❤️ both d actors hd justified d role! gud tat u r thinkin in dose terms... eagerly waitin fa d update. tc😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Deelight

u noe wt tat movie reminded me of our maneet as well.. d whole jungle scene was tooo gud...n tat was wen i fell in luv wit Vidyut❤️ both d actors hd justified d role! gud tat u r thinkin in dose terms... eagerly waitin fa d update. tc😊

OMG! I was also reminded of Maaneet during that Jungle scene! Not only that the bus scene where she talks and he looks indifferently seems like Maaneet but also the way he fights reminds of Maan's tai-chi! And just like you I fell for Vidyut Jamwal too. Haaye! I am a freakko for action movies with Jackie Chan being my fav but in Indian I think I found my fav in Vidyut! He was too good! And the dance Lutt Jaawaa - Oh wow! Breathtaking! I totally loved the movie and wanted to write on Maaneet more as a salute for such an awesome movie!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART I. GEET'S WEDDING!

Geet stood near the window staring at the decoration outside. Today was the night before her wedding; her wedding to the son of Khuranas. But Geet was not happy. This was not what she wanted. No! Never! This was something she never dreamed of. It was something straight out of her nightmares. But what was she to do? She had to agree to the wedding for the sake of her family; or whatever is left of the family. The door to her room opened and she turned around to see her little sister Rajji standing at the door staring at her. Geet knew what Rajji saw in her; not a bride to be with hands covered in mehendi and face glowing due to haldi. No! Rajji saw a broken hearted girl whose parents had been killed brutally in front of her own eyes. A girl whose family had been killed in front of her and her sister's eyes because they had the guts to oppose the marriage of Geet to the son of Khuranas. They killed all of them including her Daarji, her Taayaji, Taayiji, her elder brother Brij, her Bhabhi and her younger brother Titto; all because her family refused to marry her to a goon. Rajji entered the room and stood there for a moment. Geet raised her arms as if asking Rajji to hug her. Rajji burst out crying and ran to her sister and hugged her.

Geet Handa belonged to the Handa family of Hoshiarpur; one of the reputed families in the village. Her brothers Brij and Titto always adored her while Rajji wanted to be like her. Her mother and father were always proud of her and she was a favorite of her Daarji! Her family unlike the rest of the families in the village believed in letting girls study and fulfilling their dreams. Her Daarji was her biggest support in fulfilling her dreams. She would gladly say that her life was the one were dreams came true. But one day everything changed and her dream life turned into a horrible nightmare; a nightmare which she still could not come out of. One day, when Geet was walking around, she saw a man verbally abusing an old lady. She went and fought with the man. He had asked her if she knew who he was. But she had dismissed his words and continued to scold him.

Geet did not know that her one action that day would destroy her life. That man was none other than the son and heir of Khurana Khandaan. Khuranas were from old families of Hoshiarpur. Every generation of that family had been the Sarpanch of the Village. This had made them arrogant about their wealth and status. The latest scion of the family was more of a goon and less of a human. The whole village and many neighbouring villages were scared of him and refused to go against him. He was ruthless and cruel and had fallen for Geet that day due to her righteous behavior. He had hated the fire in her and wanted to break her spirit. He wanted to marry her just to break her and mould her to his will. He wanted her to be an example to the people of the town as to what happened to people who opposed him. Soon, his mother came over with his rishta for Geet. Her family knowing very well about the man's mentality refused for the marriage. And then started a trail of destruction as the heir of Khuranas destroyed the farms of Handas and not allowing anyone to lend them money. He even stopped electricity and water to the house. Soon, people refused to even associate with Handas not wanting to face the wrath of Khurana Heir. The last attack came by his men killing her family in front of Geet and Rajji. His men had deliberately not killed Rajji. They left her untouched to use her as leverage against Geet. The Khurana scion threatened to kill Rajji if Geet did not comply and marry him. This left Geet with no other option than to bow to the will of Khuranas. Rajji was the only person in the whole world who was her family and Geet refused to let her die. And hence, today was the night before the day of Geet's wedding but Geet was not happy.

"Aapne haan kyun kahaa Didi?", Rajji whispered and Geet looked at her, "Toh aur kya karti bol?", Geet spoke in a soft voice. Her bubbly behavior had deserted her after she consented to her marriage. Now there was nothing but sadness on Geet's face and heart. Even though, Geet had moved on and had accepted her parents' death, the stark reality that her future was in darkness left her sad and more like a dead body and less like human being with emotions. Infact, her eyes had cried so much that now she had even forgotten how to cry. "Didi! Mat karo yeh shaadi!", Rajji whispered and Geet looked sadly out of the window. "Toh aur kya karoon?", Geet asked. Rajji looked at her with so much excitement that Geet felt hope rise in her heart. "Didi! Hum kyun na bhaag chalein?", Rajji whispered. Geet shook her head, "Kahaan jaayenge?" Rajji smiled, "Manchanda Uncle ke ghar! Woh jo saalon pehle Dilli chale gaye the apni beti Pinky ke saath! Woh toh Papaji ke bahut achche dost the na! Woh toh humaari madat bhi karenge! Aur Dilli mein toh in Khurana waalon ka raaj bhi nahi hoga! Matlab hum bach jaayenge!" Geet wanted to refuse this plan but her heart filled with hope refused to let go and she found herself agreeing to Rajji. Soon, both the girls planned their escape and Geet let out a true smile for the first time after her parents' death.

If you want PM, buddy me!

Next up, Geet's escape!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Khuranas are villain.😲 interesting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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am guessing that maan isnt the khurana heir
well her wedding
i was like what the
gave me right heart attack
but then it isnt maan
cant be right
so she will meet him in delhi right
i hope so
who ever this khurana dude is he is mean violent and evil for sure
he killed her family just because they didnt want their geet to marry him
that was brutal
hope they do escape man
sheesh that was full of action already
and dont ya just love that
so glad that at least they left her little sister
so handas werent like they were in the serial
and am glad about that
but the brutal way they were killed man that was horrible
poor things have no one
hope they get to delhi
and maneet meet
cant wait for more
cheers for pm
will get onto DFL now
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
bhag ja geet...jee le apni zindagi...

superb n scay update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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very diif. concept of story
continue soon
waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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please uss Khurana Khandaan ke waaris ka naam to bata deti...

is he Maan...so brutal he is...he killed her whole family except Rajji to blackmail her...how can Geet accept her...for such a small reason that she fought with him he did so much destruction...

will Geet and Rajji will be able to run away and save themselves...

very eager to read further...

waiting for next part...


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