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Hai dears,😊
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PART 53

When geet n maan turned around rahul n arjun came near them..

Rahul:can u give 5 minutes pls..he looked at all faces..there was only hatred for them..they have not interacted with them till now..how can they after what they did..geet broke the silence.

Geet:betiye..

Maan:what u want to say..

Rahul sighed..

Rahul:hmm..woh..

He couldn't get the confidence..when he was all wrong he talked with them ..but now his heart is piercing him n words were not coming of their mouth..

Arjun was no less than rahul..jaanu never turned to face him too..

Rahul:i..i want..to ask you only one thing..

Maan:what?

He folded his hands before maaneet.

Rahul: I have no words to ask forgiveness too..but pls forgive my deeds..im really sry for whatever I did..jaanei anjanei mein meinei bohut galth kiya..if I have known u really loved my sister n married her n jaanvi is my niece shayad I would not have become a hurdle in ur life..i repent for my behavior..im really sry for whatever happened in ur family n in ur business..

Maan:rahul..pls ..dont say big words..its ur love for drashti..n ur love blind to do this..shayad if I have been in ur place I too would have reacted the same way..

Rahul smiled:its ur big heart maan..but sach kahoon tho..if u r in my place u would have not behaved like me..atleast u would not have played using ur son like I did..

He looked at arjun..

Arjun was looking at jaanvi with loving look..but he was hurt seeing her totally turned off to him..rahul touched his shoulders.n he looked at his dad in pain.then he turned to maneet.

Arjun:aunty,uncle..im really sry..i too hurted u all with my behavior..mei sry kehneki layak bhi nehi hoon..i played with jaanu's feelings..pls mujei maaf kardejeyei..he touched their feet..

Maaneet :beta,jo hua so hua...its ok..we are not angry with you..u did not do urself..we know u did it for ur father..

Rahul:yes..i installed the rival in his blood n now ..

He sighed..

Rahul:kher..chodiye..we are leaving India forever..hum khamesha keliye london jarahi hain..

Geet looked at jaanvi..she froze at her place but again turned normal..her fists tightened holding the pallu..

Rahul :we wont disturb u ..bas yehi kehnei aayithi..

He stood up n saw arjun whose eyes were still on jaanvi..he tapped his shoulder..

Rahul:arjun chalei..

Arjun:huh..hmm..ya..

He came near jaanvi n said..

Arjun:im sry..but..i..

He closed his eyes..no he cant say it now..she is now in the place where he couldn't reach..

Maan n geet looked each other with meaningful look..

Jaanvi turned n climbed the stairs..she felt suffocated ..

Arjun looked at her for one last time n moved to the exit followed by his father..silence prevailed in the hall..noone said nothing..

Geet:arjun..

Arjun turned

Geet:you have forgot something..n u r taking something which belongs to us..

Arjun checked his phone n wallet ..

Arjun:ji..

Geet:wo yese cheese hai jo aakhon mei nehi dikaydega..

Arjun:ji..mei samji nehi..

Geet:u r leaving ur heart here n taking the smile of my daughter..

Maan:rahul,if u have no objection still we could be relatives..by marrying our childrens.

Jaanu's steps froze at her place..she turned towards her parents unbelievingly..same was rahul n arjun..they cant believe their ears..did they hear it correct..

Rahul:aap..aap..kya bolrahi ho..

Geet:very simple..what u heared is correct..we want jaanu to be ur bahu..

Rahul was left in thoughts which made maneet think if they were wrong asking hands of arjun..

Geet hesitatingly asked:rahulji,do u still think of community..

She couldn't think much than the reason which he could deny..

Rahul:no no..yese nehi hai..if im same old rahul..i would have thought..but after knowing about u how can I think about my belief on caste now too..when a princess thought only of love n took care like a mother to my niece..how can I think even in that manner..by birth she is my sister daughter . But the blood inside her is yours. Ek rajvansh ka khoon..

Maan:then why are u hesitating..

Rahul:we are not upto ur status..n after what we have done..i feel very low to stand before you..

Maan:status ko tho mei nehi maanthi..n we have forgiven you..so shall we take it as an yes..

Rahul:yes..but..jaanvi..

Jaanvi was in dilemma..she has never gone against her parents words..now they are fixing marriage with the man who hurt her family..her eyes burned..

Geet:jaanu come here..

Jaanu took slow steps n came near her mother..geet lifted her chin n made her look her..

Geet:jaanu we are waiting for ur yes..

Jaanvi:maa..they would have been successful in their mission if I didn't reach in time..how can u accept him as ..

Geet:leave that jaanu..answer my question..

Jaan:hmm

Geet:did u ever loved arjun..

Jaanu:maa..i loved him like I love u all..but he broke my trust..how can I trust him for my rest of my life..arjun dipped his head in shame..

Geet:what would u do if u are in arjuns place..if u come to know bcoz of ur rival ur family lost 2 precious persons of their life..rahul lost his mom n sister..n his rivalry is r8 from his position..

Jaanvi:but maa..

Geet:can u promise me that u will forget arjun..ur first love..n u can move ahead in ur life..Can you marry someone else

Jaanvi was silent..none disturbed the mother n daughters talk..they listened only to them..

Geet:no na..ur first love will be there in ur entire life time..n arjun..see him..i can see him repenting..he really loves u beta..can u hate him n move on bcoz of us..give a chance to him beta

Jaanu hugged her mother..she cant deny that she can ever forget arjun..she loved him to core..but moving ahead without him is also impossible..n breaking her mothers expectations she cant do..trusting him is also not possible..but she can even die for her mother who gave this life to her..

she nodded her head n accepted for the marriage..

geet kissed her forehead..

Geet:rahulji,we will fixthe date of engagement n inform you..nakul kaka..sweets lekar aayiye..

She went to dadi:dadi..im right na..

Dadi:yes beta..u r right..meri pothi ki shadhi..mujei bohut saari tayari karni hai..

Abhi:in a low voice..mom how can u believe them..n do u think di will be happy there..

Geet patted his cheeks..

Geet:shayad u forgot..jaanvi is his niece..n he repents his deeds..he will treat her like princess to overcome his guilt..believe me..she will be happy more than here..

Geet came to arjun:beta,

Arjun:thank you aunty..i..i..

Maan touched his shoulders n he hugged them both in a bone crushing hug..

Arjun:thank you..thank you so much..

Geet:beta,she has accepted only for us..u have broken her trust..so u must win her love back..it wont be easy for u..

Arjun:i ..i..promise..i will keep her happy..n win her trust back..i will get my love back..

He said with confidence..geet saw jaanvi walking to her room..

Geet:ok chalo bath karlo..n manofy her..

Arjun grinned widely n ran behind jaanvi..

Nakul came with sweets n gave everyone..

Maharaj was silent..he has no words.. khuranas know about jaanvi's love.she denied her love for her family...but geet made her accept her love to marry arjun..jaanvi preferred her love for her parents more than her love..its the affectionate she had for them..he thought about himself..geet did said about her love..what he did..he caged her n made her run away from them..their love had no strength..like her love did..he was proud of his daughters brought up..they all were binded in love..not money..nor power..nor community..nor status..

Geet n her family has taught him so much in this few hrs..he felt proud to be geet's father..

Jaanvi went to her room n was about to lock the door..arjun kept his foot n came inside n locked the room..

Jaanvi:what are u doing in my room..go away from here.

Arjun:no jaanu..

Jaanu turned n walked to the corner of room..he held her hands..

Arjun:listen to me once jaanu

Jaanu:bohut kuch sunliya.not more..pls leave..

His presence was chocking her..her love n hate was fighting in her heart..

Arjun came before her n made her look at him..

Arjun:I ll go jaan..pls keh do..u forgave me..i accept what all I did was a big sin..but I was bounded with my dads words..

She averted her eyes..he forcefully made her look at him..

Arjun:look my eyes jaan..do u think I can be happy hurting you..i love you jaan..pls maaf kardo..i swear on you..i ll never hurt you..

He bent on his knees n hold his ears..

She bit her lips to control her sobs..

Arjun:I cant see u in tears baby..just give me a chance..

Jaanvi:go away from here arjun..its not easy like u think..its my heart u broke..joining it back is not so easy..

Arjun:so what aunty said is right..u accepted for them only..

She turned n showed her back..

Jaanvi:yes..i can do anything for them..if accepting u in my life too..i can do that for them..this life is my mothers..n I can die for her..

She turned to see arjun n her eyes froze looking at the mirror..arjun was holding the rim of chair tightly their was a nail whichpierced his palms . He did not care for it. He pressed his palm more on it till the liquid flow. He wrote in blood..

I love you jaanu..

Arjun smiled seeing her frozen state..

Arjun:I can die for you jaanu..bcoz I love you..my every ounze of this blood will scream n say how much I love you..think jaan if u want me or not..n then we will go for engagement..

He left the place leaving a baffled jaanvi..drops of blood on floor made her come out her reverie..she came out n saw no one in hall..all have dispersed to their rooms..n rahul n arjun has left..

She came inside n touched the blood..her heart was crying seeing the blood..

Nakul called all for breakfast..jaanu didn't come..so geet came to her room with dinner..jaanvi was still standing near the mirror..

Geet:erm..so my son in law has shown his love writing by blood..

Jaanvi looked at geet helplessly..

Geet:ur heart is bleeding seeing it na jaanu..

She nodded yes..

Geet:then y cant u accept his sry n forgive him..

Jaanvi:..i..i.. couldn't maa..

Geet:he is really a gud boy..if u have thought deep u would have known his dilemma...did u think we won the bid bcoz u came at time.

Jaanu looked at her mother confused..

Geet:arjun knew the quotation amount..if he wants, he would have quoted the least more than ours.n he would have won in the first round itself..but he was torn between his dad n love..that he quoted the same amount we did..uski pyaar ki majboori samjo..trust ur mother..he really loves you..give him a chance to prove himself..n accept for this marriage by ur heart..

By this time geet has fed her fully..she kissed her forehead..gudnight beta..

Jaanu kissed her..maa..did u have ur dinner n medicines..mei kesi beti hoon..when u r sick im making u feed me..

Geet:u r my child..n a mother cant be happy more than taking care of her childrens..ab so ja..n think about arjun..n if u can talk to him..

Jaanu:maa abhi..

Geet:he has taken dinner n went to sleep..now u sleep ..

She tucked her under spread n went to sleep..

Geet went to kitchen kept the plate..all were happy seeing geet fine..

Vaishali:di..atleast now u can go n rest..see all works are done n all have left to sleep..

Geet:yes..

Geet moved to her room n saw it empty..

Geet:where is maan..

She came n searched for him..

The study light was on..

Geet:yeh maan bhi na..what he is doing in study at this time..

When she entered she saw abhi taking slow steps to reach maan..he looked very hesitant..

Geet:what abhi is doing in study at this time..n why so much of hesitance if he wants to speak to maan..

1958 words..

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next PART- 54

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Edited by vrinda22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally , after long wait...

thank you for updating ...

it was an emotional part... but a happy one...

liked the way Jaanu accepted for only her mother.. as that life is hers... so sweet... touchy lines...

arjyn and rahul repenting and accepting ... their mistakes...

maaneet forgave them...

arjun asked forgiveness but janu didn't ...

geet and janu talks so nice...

waiting for more


Edited by drrose31 - 11 years ago
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what ???? 😈
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you n on time 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update

so finally even rahul accepted tat he was all wrong and as usual understanding maan and geet forgave him and even understood the love arjun had for their daughter
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally all is ok
rahul ne magi mang liya
maaneet r very sweet maaf kar diya 😛😛
awee geet know her daughter well
arjun ko accept kar liya
but jannu still confuse
she will also accept arjun soon 😛😛
hmm what abhi want to do now
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bravo... you should clap for that naah ???? 😛


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Originally posted by: drrose31


bravo... you should clap for that naah ???? 😛


yeh le 👏
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