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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: drrose31


are where are you bhaaging ???

you are due for the update now

Valli valli
update update 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: drrose31


we are stopping at 129's last post ..

acha 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely ...
Everyone is getting and giving another chance
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chalo ab katam hogaya valli aajao jaldi
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Originally posted by: priya111111

chalo ab katam hogaya valli aajao jaldi

ok..aagaya hoon..are u all ready to read next
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Posted: 11 years ago
going 2 update part 54
Edited by vrinda22 - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrinda22

ok..aagaya hoon..are u all ready to read next

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Originally posted by: vrinda22

going 2 update part 154

154 😲😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hai dears,😊
thanks for the friends who gave cmnts n likes😃
thanks spammers..
promise day..n im here to fulfill ur wish...
so here goes next part...enjoy..
n sad news..next will be last part.

previous PART- 53.

PART 54


Abhi:papa..

Maan was searching something in the shelf..he turned..

Maan: abhi..tum..is waqt..

Abhi:papa..i..want to talk to you..

Maan knotted his brows..

Maan:ok..come..n sit..

Maan took the file..he got what he was searching..he came n sat opposite to him..

Maan:ok..tell me..what u want to talk to me..

Abhi:first of all..sry for what I did..i know u n mama has forgiven me..but I feel some distance has formed ..before too I never came to you papa..but now..i want to break that thin line between us..

Maan: why do u think so abhi..

Abhi:I know papa..ab sochne lagan hoon..Why I couldn't be like di. Why I couldn't give the same love Di gives to you. Why I can't accept your words blindly like di does.

Maan kept the file aside n looked at Abhi.

Maan:Abhi, don't blame yourselves.you are a good boy. Haan you are a little stubborn. But that too boz you got it from your parents. U know,Me n your mother both are stubborn . But the thing is we know what we are doing is right n we stick to the decision. But you .. You are still a teenager. Your blood is hot n you think what you do is correct. You all think by mind but not by heart.

Abhi: I understood it now papa..

Maan:abhi, experience makes a man mould. Somewhere we are also at fault Abhi. I want jaanu to love you more like we do. So, we gave more space for you both to betogether . Then taking care of business n keeping eyes on the rivals we made a thin line between us unknowingly. When Your needs got fulfilled by your sister you stop coming to us.jaanvis love to o spoiled you.woh tumhari har icha jarrooratse zyadha poori ki. N we too didn't realise it. Jaanu came to us with your needs n we fulfilled thru her. When the thin line became a wall we didn't know.n if we point your mistakes you started to speak against us. Whatever happened , we are also equally responsible.

N about the properties on jaanus name..

Abhi:no papa.im sorry for saying that n questioning you. Im ashamed of myself for asking such things.

Maan: I want to clarify abhi.

Abhi: no Papa. I want only your love. Not properties

Maan: phir bhi I want to say it. You must know. Not only your share even vickys childrens share is also under jaanu's name

That was shocking for abhi..then realized chachu n chichi never raised such a question against man but he did..

Abhi:papa, im sorry. You don't want to explain me anything

He started to feel low of himself..

Maan: no abhi you must know the reason behind it. Me n ur mother both have witnessed the death n we know god will play with our lives.whenever he wants..

Abhi : papa.. Don't say like that.

Maan: saying fire won't burn your mouth abhi... Im just saying about the future. N kc .we all have worked to bring this height. I want the kc properties in safe hands. Vickys childrens are minor n u are a grown up child. Jaanu is matured n we know how she loves you all three. The property papers had the clause, when you all become Matured enough jaanu will give your shares to you all.

Abhi was feeling ashamed. His head was looking on floor

Abhi: im sorry

Maan:its ok beta. galati sehi insaan seektha hai..Now go n sleep.

Abhi stood up he hugged maan n said

Abhi:I love you Papa. I promise I ll obey your words. N will make you and mama n di proud with my behavior. Di promise

Maan too reciprocated the hug n patted his back lovingly.

Maan:I love you too beta. I know you will keep the promise when you do on jaanu.

He pecked his forehead. he felt light after talking with him.

Abhi: good night papa

Maan: good night dear.

Geet was happy seeing both in good terms.

When Abhi came and saw geet standing outside he hugged her with love.

She patted his cheeks

Abhi: mama I..

Geet stopped him.

Geet:Abhi, past is past. So leave it. You have changed . That's enough for us. Go and sleep without thinking that has gone. But Onething. I want to say again. If you ever hurt jaanu i won't forgiveyou

Abhi:i wont.mama.aapki jaan mera bhi jaan hai...n she is my sister..i love her mama..really I do...i have been childish enough..now I will be a gud bro n gud son

Geet was happy to hear his confession..

Geet.Good night.

Abhi:Good night. Mama

Geet went inside.

Abhi St: how easily they forgave me. After what I did. No Abhi, as ma said, all is past. Now you are newly born n you will make their head high by your good behaviours.i ll make them say im Abhi s parents.

He walked with determination.

Maan: geetu u here. You must be sleeping. See the time.

Geet: Oh mr.khurana. then you must also be sleeping n what you are doing here in study.

Maan:erm woh. I came to check some files.

Geet: ho. Ok.i ll also help you

Maan:Pagal hai kya. You have returned today only from hospital. You need to take rest

Geet: n I think you too need rest.

Maan:you go geetu

He placed the file on table. Geet turned her face n settled on chair.

Maan :geetu,

Geet didn't give ears to his place n finally maan scooped her n left to their room.

Geet:put me down mr.khurana.

Maan:noways mrs.khurana.

Geet: nowadays you are searching for a chance to lift me. You have become shame less.

Geet looking upwards: babaji deko isko harwaqt masak aur nautanki.he loves teasing me. Agar bache dekli tho.

Maan: they will think how much pap a loves mama.n isme Besharam kya hai babaji.meri wife.meri ghar.

Geet was all red n hide her face in his chest.

Maan placed her on bed n slide next to her. She kept her head on his chest while Maan threaded her hair.

Maan: now sleep peacefully sweetheart.

Geet:when I have the heaven near me I ll sleep peacefully..i was waiting for you only..how can I sleep without you..

Man pecked her hairs..

Man:Love you patniji...

Geet:Love u too pati devji..

They loved teasing each other..

N Geet slept soon.




Maharaj stayed with maneet for another day.the more he stayed he was in remorse. His Princess didn't show even a glimpse of hatred to him. She was taking care of him though she was ill.and the others were taking care of her.

The love and affection between each and every person of the family made him realize what he missed in this life. His wife was right. He doesn't know how to be good father and good husband. It's too late now. He can't change the time but promised himself to be a good father until he is alive.

He thought to leave to his Empire. N was walking to his room. He saw maan entering jaanvis room n he too thought to have a small chat with him before leaving.



Maan saw jaanu still lost. Her eyes fixed on the mirror where the blood was still there.

Maan:..jaanu

He tapped her shoulder to get her attention.

Jaanu:yes Papa

Maan:where are you lost. Hmm

He sat next to her on bed n she leaned on his shoulder s

Jaanu :papa, is it easy to forgive a person so soon

Maan knew what she is talking about

Maan: it belongs to your heart beta. What you want you decide it

Jaanu: Papa mama asked me to accept arjun.i m so confused. I couldn't forget what he did

Maan:nor you could forget he is your love to o.

Jaanu: im torn between my mind n and heart. is it easy to forgive a person so soon..

She asked the question again.

Maan lifted her chin and made her look at him

Maan:how many years have you been with arjun..hmm nearly an year

Jaanu: ya

Maan:you hate him for his deeds which you came to know ..hmm ..about a week

Jaanu nodded her head

Maan: so your one week hatred is more than a year of love.

She was speechless.

Maan: do you think of your mom. How easily she forgave her dad. She loved her father even though he was strict n not affectionate..she was with him for 21 years. N parted after marriage..But the distance was more than it.nearly 24 years.

Jaanu:hmm.

Maan: do you think it will be easy for her to forgive her father. If he has been more lovable and understanding will your mother would have ran away from her Mahal and faced so much in her life. Bcoz of you we both got together. Otherwise what would have been. She may have ended her life in some or other ways. But she didn't think of past. She thought of the present and future. Only you must have the will. Being patience for a while will get you back all the happiness ..n rest of your life will be filled with joy. You can understand what I m saying na. leave it to the time it will make you forget the past. And when a man sincerely apologize you, then you must give a chance . this will give you peace to rest of your life than holding hatred inside for him.and arjun is your love. We have seen the world n we know arjun is truly repenting.n he wont do a mistake again. Thodasa time n see everything will be fine.

Jaanu now understood what her dad is saying to her. She smiled thinking how her mom too was saying such things.

Jaanu: you know dad you and mama are same. Your thoughts too are alike. It was easy for you to forgive rahul maamu n for mama her dad. But for me

Maan smiled. Its not tough like you think. See you have already accepted them in your life.

Jaanvi :what..how..

Maan: did you realize what you said. Rahul maamu. It shows you have started to accept him.

Jaanus eye's widened with the reality.

Maan:After all you are our daughter and you have the same blood n thoughts of us.

Jaanu hugged him n said. Hmm maan Singh khurana ki beti hoon..n I ll not easily

She stopped biting her tongue and blushed..

Maan smiled seeing his naughty Jaanu back

Maan hugged her..hmm so you are going to make arjun restless for some more days.

Jaanu: how you know Papa.that I ll not let go this chance to make arjun dance in my tunes...

Uff. She bluttered n hide in maans embrace ..

omg..what she was blabbering

Maan :don't forget im your father n kaafi experience hai.bcoz of your mother.

He winked

Maan:everything is fair in love and war. haan but dont take it for long.bcoz the long er you take the rope will break.

Jaanu: I ll keep your advice in mind dad.

Maan kissed her forehead. N left.

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Edited by vrinda22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update di..
Awesome..
Geet handled it well..
Wat is it tat abhi wanna talk wid maan..
Cont soon..
Waiting...

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