MG- Keh doon unkahi.. Prologue-pg4..updtd/mar22.

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chhavi

@Shonameet

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey guys!
As u know...
After Pehle pyaar ka pehla gum! & Pal-pal soch me aana naa..!
now..
"keh doon unkhi.." will be the 3rd & final part of my trilogy...so I want ur suggestions.
I mean to say that how would u like, the story to move further? How u want or imagine maan and geet to confess their feelings to eachother?
I will try to start it soon..till the end of this month..so plzz do share ur views/suggestion it will help me to write it better n sooner.
Will be waiting for ur suggetions..
-Shona.😊

Edited by Shonameet - 11 years ago

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lizzy84

@lizzy84

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Posted: 11 years ago

omg omg 🥳

what a surprise

i was waiting for this sooo eagerly

and thanks to u that u came up with it

hugs and lots of love 🤗

apt title

hope now maan and geet say their unkahi baate to each other waiting desperately

love ya

aanu 😃

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chhavi

@Shonameet

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -calculus-
omg omg🥳
what a surprise
i was waiting for this sooo eagerly
and thanks to u that u came up with it
hugs and lots of love🤗
apt title
hope now maan and geet say their unkahi baate to each other waiting desperately
love ya
aanu😃

lov u too sweety..😊🤗
But tumhara suggetion toh do?

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lizzy84

@lizzy84

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Posted: 11 years ago

i will not call these ideas as suggestion becoz i know u would carry on with this story brilliantly

i would just like to give my insights here

-after all the pain which geet has gone through becoz of maans ignorant blues ,geet must have formed a shield around herself ,where she would not express herself fully to maan unlike past ,the girl was already hurt and will be in constant fear that if see does anything like expressing her feelings maan would distant himself ,so tackling this geet would be a tough job for maan

- where else maan would first try to resume or kick-start their wreck friendship and gradually would turn to put-forth his feelings

- i would love to see a jealous maan

-thats it rest is all ur beautiful writing and ideas

Edited by -calculus- - 11 years ago

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daredevilisback

@daredevilisback

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Posted: 11 years ago

greattt...
will be waiting for this...

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Nikita

@nikkirockssss

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -calculus-
i will not call these ideas as suggestion becoz i know u would carry on with this story brilliantly
i would just like to give my insights here
-after all the pain which geet has gone through becoz of maans ignorant blues ,geet must have formed a shield around herself ,where she would not express herself fully to maan unlike past ,the girl was already hurt and will be in constant fear that if see does anything like expressing her feelings maan would distant himself ,so tackling this geet would be a tough job for maan
- where else maan would first try to resume or kick-start their wreck friendship and gradually would turn to put-forth his feelings
- i would love to see a jealous maan
-thats it rest is all ur beautiful writing and ideas

me also want same...geet ko jo pain hua h maan k behavior k wajah se uske baad tho maan k liye tho tough hona chahiye geet se apne dil ki baat kahna