Happy Valentine's Day everyone ...
So here we are for our
Valentine OS Competitions
Thank you to the writers who took time to crack their head
and try to give a story within 300 words 😛
adhuku naan illa pa .. its the viewbiews 😆
Well now we are going to post all the entries here
and mark them as entry 1 entry 2 ...
all you need to do is read the entries and start voting 😛
each member is allowed to vote for 2 entries
Example : My vote : Entry __ and Entry __
Participants are allowed to vote too but not for yours okie
and do not promote your entry via PM's or anything
if we find out about it ... automatically that entry will be disqualified ...
So here you go.. enjoy reading and have fun voting makkazs ...
Special Note : Some entries we did not post out as the words were more then 300
It was a good attempt but will not be fair for the others
who had crack up for 300 words..
but that entry will be posted later on when we announce the winners
as appreciation to the writers 😊
Voting will be closed on 17th February 2014
entry 1#
MADE FOR EACH OTHER
It was Valentine's day. Karthik and Raji come early to Office, wish "HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!!!" to each other and exchange gifts. Raji s gift was a beautiful bracelet which Karthik asks her to tie on his right hand wrist. Karthik gifted Raji an elegant pair of earrings which she wears immediately removing hers. Then they get busy in their work. Karthik gives Raji a rose and a diarymilk every hour. In the evening Karthik takes Raji on his bike to Titan's Showroom.
Raji: inge edhukku koottittu vandhirukke?
Karthik: vaa... solren...
The showroom was filled with couples for the special occasion.
Karthik shows a voucher at the reception and a sales boy takes him to the concerned wing. The sales girl smiles at them and shows the watches he had ordered earlier.
Raji: enna Karthik idhellaam?
Karthik: Valentine special edition watch rendu perukkum... oru maasam munnaadiye order pannadhu... pidichirukka?
Raji: super aah irukku.
Karthik and Raji tie the watches on each other's hand. The sales girl gives them a form each and asks to fillup.
Karthik: ennanga idhu?
Salesgirl: Valentine's day kaaga Sir... Fun contest ... Fill panni kudunga... Orutharudhu oruthar parka koodaadhu...
Karthik: OK...
Both of them fill the forms and give it to her.
Raji wishes to buy a watch for her appa, goes through several watches and finally selects one. As they pay at the cash counter, they hear an announcement...
"Friends... Now we have the results of the fun contest conducted here on the auspicious occasion of Valentine's day. The winners are Karthik and Raji. Please come here to collect your special gift..."
Amidst huge applause Karthik and Raji receive the gift .
They put the rings on each other's fingers and come out of the showroom holding hands.
entry 2#
Misson: Impress Lakshmi
Screen opens with vishnu laughing in his trade mark style... Lakshmi was in sema gaandu... Lakshmi:Sirikiriyaa,un friend ah paaru ,lovela yeppadi asatharaan?neeyum irukiye... Vishnu:Yenna lakshmi ippadi solra,avane andhar balti adichi,
Raji kaiya pudichi..kavidhai solli...kaalla vizhaadha koraiyaa love ah ok panni irukaan...
lakshmi: Yeppadio love ah ok pannitaan illa?nee yenna panna pora? Vishnu:yenna lakshmi pannanum? Lakshmi:Indha valantines day ku yenna impress panra maathiri yedhaavadhu pannaa dhaan naanum ,namma loveah ok pannuven...
Vishnu:Ivlo dhaane,maamaa ippa ideas ah yeppadi alli vidurennu paaru... Lakshmi:Yenge sample ku rendu sollu paarpom... Vishnu:Naanum karthik maathiri kavidhai...solla...
lakshmi didn't let him to finish... lakshmi:Yendaa ?naan uyiroda irukaradhu unakku pidikalai yaa? Vishnu: Romantic gifts yedhaavaadhu?
Lakshmi :yen?taj mahal ku badhilaa, taj mahal teapowder kuduthu bulb vaanginiye adhu pathaadhaa? Vishnu: Spiderman maathiri nerupula maatikita paappaa va kaapathinaa,nee impress agiduviyaa? lakshmi:Yenakku ku pudichadhe indha maida maavu moonji dhaan,adhaiyum nerupula theechikaadha...
Vishnu:Adhuvum venaamaa...sari karthik maathiri ashramathukku poi sevai yedhaavadhu pannatumaa? Lakshmi: Nee yendha ashramathukku povennu oorukkae theriyumdaa,venaam...pen stand aala adi vaanginadhu marandhu pochaa?
Vishnu: Sari hollywood ,bollywood heroes maathiri hair style pannikattumaa? Lakshmi: Modhalla indha kuruvikoottu thalaiya cut pannudaa.. Vishnu: Lakshmi,cinema la varra maathiri candle light dinner arrange pannatumaa? Lakshmi:Sari ,yenna menu order pannuva? Vishnu:Rendu plate mutton biriyani,kothu parota,poricha kozhi,curry dosai...
Lakshmi lost her patience and tapped his head.. Lakshmi: Aamaa,ivlavum saapitutu,korattai vittu thoongu...podaa nee yum un idea um, nee indha jenmathula yenna impress panna mudiyaadhu.. Vishnu:Lakshmi,lakshmi,indha vaati correct aa solren paaru...
Lakshmi:Sari sollu,mavane indha vaatti maatum sodhapina,avlo dhaan...
Vishnu:Naan unakkaaga yen kaiyaala special aa halwa senji thandhaa ,nee impress agiduviyaa? Lakshmi starred at him...and started to walk out..
He chased her,and asked, Vishnu: Suicide attempt pannaalaavadhu impress aaviyaa?sollu lakshmi? She started throwing things at him..
Lakshmi: Adhukku munnaala,naane unna konnudaren daa... She walked away out of frustration... Lakshmi was very upset with Vishnu for his incapability of impressing her...she was alone in the conference room... Vishnu sneaked in,and stood before lakshmi...with innocent face... Lakshmi:Ippa yenna? She asked him with irritation..
Vishnu:lakshmi ,sathiyamaa,unna yeppadi impress panradhunnu yenakku theriyala...pls ,unna correct panradhukku oru idea kuden...
She shook her head with disbelief ... Lakshmi:dai ,nee irukkara paaru... She raised her hand to beat him but stopped in mid,and started smiling.. And finally she said, Frauduuu...
Vishnu with his trademark smile... Me too lakshmi...
entry 3#
February 14, valentine's day for all but for Raji a joining day in nettech. Raji first day floor ku enter aanavudane Karthi oru glance paathutu poitaaru, appuram dhan feel panninan, something is there in that girl nu. Raji ku 1 month training, niraiya friends kidaichaanga, but one close friend name is Vishnu. Rendu perum romba close. Indha one monthla namma karthi adikkadi raji paarthu love vandhuduchu, but adha yarkittayum sollavillai. Karthi try panni yeppadiyo raji & Vishnu va avanga teamku yeduthukuttaru. Avarukku pakkathulaye seat allot panni train panninaar.
Pakkathulaye uttkandhu irundhadhala rendu perum yella matter share panninaanga. Raji karthi kooda close a irukkuradhu avanga team leader ku pidikkala, yeppa paathalum rendu peraiyum vera vera system maathuradhu, illana shift change pannite iruppanga, sorry avanga peru susan. Karthi yendha ponnu kittayum pesa maataan, but yella girls um avan kitta vandhu pesuvaanga, appo rajiku appadi oru kovam varum, adha vache karthi conform pannikittaru, she is in love with me nu. Appurm konjam konjama possessiveness adhigam aanadhu. Ippadiye story poitu irundhappo, dhideernu oru naal night shift mudichu kilambum bodhu, karthi raji kitta propose pannitaan, adha yedhir paakaadha raji confusionla veetukku kilambi pogum bodhu, Vishnu kitta idha pathi discuss panninal, appo Vishnu dhan karthi ku support panni, avana maadhiri oru paiyan kidaikka maataan, so nee yedha pathiyum yosikaadha, ok nu sollidunu advice panninaan.
But raji ku family mela avvalavu paasam, konja naal distance maintain pannina karthi kitta. Appuram oru naal raji karthi kitta idha pathi pesinal. Naama nalla friends irukkalam, indha love vendam, romba kashtama irrukkum nu. Karthi yedhuvum pesama, un ishtam nu sollitu poitaan, but avanukku theriyum raji yala avan illama irukka mudiyadhunu. Ippadiye oru 3 months pochu, yedha venumnaalum maraikkalam, but love maraikkave mudiyadhu, vendam nu solla solla adhigam aagum. So finally raji decision yedutha, marriage pannikitta karthi ya dhan pannikanumnu. So veetla first avanga amma kitta pesina, raji oda amma so sweet, yella vishayathayum differenta think pannuvaanga, first avanga othukkalai, but raji porumaiya yeduthu sonna appuram othukutaanga, apuram yenna dum dum dum dhan...
Finally love says it all ..
To much of pain can be seen in Raji eyes. It kills Karthik so badly. He could not even look into her eyes after all he had done to her. She had stayed true to her love but he? Situation made him lost. Raji touch his hand. Karthik eyes " i don't deserve you Raji .." Raji eyes replied " but i deserve you.." Karthik looks at her. "Please don't say sorry ..." raji's eyes plead. Karthik nods his head. Both holds hand for a long time. Raji lay her head on his shoulder. Thinks of the first time they both meet, first time(100) she tried confessing her love. And their memorable loving days at office. Karthik thinks about future. Its time to face reality. He can no longer hide anymore. They have gone through to much and finally love had won. "Lets go Raji ..." Karthik holds her hand and takes her into his house.
House is decorated with lights and people are walking there and here. Angel is glowing in happiness and chatting happily with Karthik parents. Vishnu Laksh noticed Karthik Raji walking in. The noisy house started to become silent as Karthik walks in hand in hand with Raji. Angel aware of (100) silent turns around. "First love is not about falling in love first, its about falling in love with a person who you can truly never get over. I got over you easily Angel but i could never get over Raji. She is my true love ..." says Karthik. (47) Angel tears in eyes, smiles walks to Raji and gives a peek on her cheek. And walks out without turning back. Raji lift up her head and looks at Karthik. She could only see the love he has for her. Raji smiles.. pain in her eyes replace with love she has for Karthik.
Kabhi Neem Neem Kabhi Shahad Shahad
