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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all wish you a "HAPPY ROSE DAY"



I hope I'm giving somewhat a romantic update. 😳

Surprise awaits as Geet is getting a new lover!! Really want to hear your opinion about this guy!! 😉

Here we go...

PART 29

PAST

Geet could not believe what she just saw. "Her Maan" actually left her all alone for another girl!!!

But she was not going to let some dreamy-mini-skirt-stick capture her Maan pushing her away. So what if she can't go out on public and pull him away from that witch? Geet decided to keep an eye or in other words spy on Maan and the "chudail". She tip-toed and quietly entered into the bar counters from where she could get a clear view of Maan sitting with Pari on a couch. She lowered her body and squatted Indian style so that only her head would be visible from the bar counter. As she was trying to focus her attention on a Maan who was visibly skulking beside an over-enthusiastic Pari, Geet didn't notice the bartender staring at her with his hands folded across his chest. He cleared his throat to gain her attention. Geet saw him and grinned innocently. He signaled her to get up and she nodded negatively like a stubborn naughty child. The bartender was looking around to call the guards. Geet got up and tried to explain.

Geet : dekhiye bhaiyaji.. me kuch nhi kr rhi hu bas mujhe kisi pe nazar rakhna he..to me is kone me chup chap khadi..i mean bethi rehti hu aur ap log apna kaam kr lo kyu..

The bartender didn't listen to a single word of hers and called the guards. Geet struggled and tried to argue. Maan obviously noticed all the drama and handed a note to one of the waiters instructing him to give it to the bartender. The bartender opened the note which read :

"The girl arguing with you is my fiance. If I come to know that she felt uncomfortable by you or any of your team tonight all of you can pack your bags and go around looking for a new job tomorrow morning

- Maan Singh Khurana

PS : Don't mention this fact in front of her or you will face the same result "

The man read the note and glanced at Maan who was looking straight at the bartender clearly indicating that he meant every word on the note. The bartender quickly asked the guards to back out.

Bartender : I'm so sorry madam.. mujhe nhi pata tha..umm I mean ap..you mean no harm

Geet : koi nhi bhaiya ap apna kaam kro aur me apna..

The bartender arranged a small seat for Geet so that she could spy without feeling "uncomfortable".

Maan knowing that fact that Mishty was spying on him now flirted with Pari which was very easy as the girl was hopelessly all over him. Geet's cheeks were turning red. She would hit on the bar table and talk to herself. Maan enjoyed all these but he knew that things were getting out of hand somehow. He decided to escape.

Maan : Pari, I will get you a drink, ok?

Pari : never mind Maan, I'll fetch for myself (and with a coy smile) and you too..

Before Maan could respond, Pari moved towards the bar right opposite to the counter where Geet was un"officially" spying on Maan!! Geet hid lowering her head further so that Pari wont see her. But what she heard next, made her eyes almost pop out.

Pari : get me one vodka and one drink that has all the others mixed!

Bartender : pardon?

Pari : mix absinthe, sex on the beach, vodka,rum, whiskey and some beer

Bartender : all in one? I think that's illegal

Pari : not if I tell you that I'm one of your boss's sister!!

Bartender(murmured): great! All the bosses on loose!

Pari : did you say anything?

Bartender : no mam, just making your drink!

Pari : wow ek baar Maan Khurana ye drink pee le..phir dekhti hu Pari ke jaadu se kaise bachte he!!

Geet almost fainted hearing that.

Geet(self-thot) : haye rabba!! Ye chudail to bohat agey nikal gayi.. bechare mere Maan! Zarur koi jaadu tona kar diya tabhi mere Maan ko leke gayi..lekin me unhe bachaungi.. ye drink Maan nhi piyenge..ha! me chup-chap drink badal deti hu..

As soon as the mixed drink was set, Geet took the glass as Pari was busy on her phone. Before she could throw it one of the waiters saw her. Geet couldn't throw it now. She looked like a thief who was stealing a glass of alcohol!! She smiled awkwardly and tapped the glass, "just having a drink"

Waiter : do you need some ice?

Geet : noo..no..(self-thot) ab kya karu..issey pehle Pari dekhe drink bhi change krna he..babaji..bacha lena mujhe

And then she did the unthinkable. She quickly drank the whole glass and replaced it with a glass of whiskey which was somebody else's drink. Geet was not in the state to see where Pari or Maan was. Her head was aching and the whole ground was shifting and shifting and shifting...

Meanwhile Maan moved to the dance floor to escape from Pari. But Pari was quick enough to spot him. He sat with her and took the drink under the impression that Geet was watching them.

Pari : hey Maan that girl you know who was standing near you when we met

Maan(alert mode but faking non-halance) : uhuh..

Pari : she was sitting in that counter you know!! And then she had some drink and went maaaddd.. She ran some where. I think some stupid moron must have brought to her to a party like this and ditched her for some other hottie. She doesn't look the type you know who is used to these kind of booze parties! I don't understand some men! They bring these innocent girls and ditch them!! That's how half of the crimes take place. You know she won't even know if anyone took advantage of her state now!!

The Earth almost shifted from Maan's feet when he heard that. Ofcourse, he was the moron rascal idiot who ditched Mishty in this hard-booze party and is openly flirting with some other hottie in the name of ego!! He stood up and ran to the counter without even waiting to see the baffled Pari's reaction.


Maan came to the counter, "Geet kaha he?"

Bartender : who sir?

Maan : the girl who was here..my fiance!!

Bartender : ohh sir, madam wanted to go outside. I tried but she won't stop.

Maan : kis taraf gayi wo?

Bartender: beachside..

Maan : damn!!

Maan ran towards the beach... He searched every where but couldn't find Geet. Fear started gripping his mind as he found the beachside empty. It was all his fault and it seemed the darkness that was in the shore was engulfing his soul. Without her the world seemed empty, everything around was a hollow. The blue hue of moonlight held no beauty till the moment he spotted an angelic smile around the corner. The relief that washed over his face was indescribable. He walked towards the direction where he heard the voice. And there behind an old abandoned boat she sat all alone!!!


Maan stopped and looked at her innocent beauty under the blue hue of the moonlight. She was like an angel that God had sent for her. It was a serene scene watching her sitting near the shore among the faint noise of the waves and...waittt who was she talking to? Maan looked closely but there was no one except, well a crab!! He walked closer curious to hear what she was saying but stood far enough so that she won't notice.

Geet was looking at the crab with warm and sympathetic eyes. She looked towards the sea and then to the crab. Her voice was shaking and hoarse due to the alcohol in her system.

Geet : hey crabbie...don't cry..ok? Let her go into the sea and meet new crabs!! After meeting everyone she will realise that you are the one for her..what?? what if she never returned? Ohh.. you don't worry.. look at me! My lover dumped me too for some dreamy-mini-skirt-stick He is drinking and probably dancing and kissing her now! And look at me! Am I worried? Nooo I'm not worried!! I'm single and happy. You are single and happy tooo.. he na crabbie?? I think we should date.. Have you heard of that story where the girl kisses the frog and it turns into a handsome prince! May be you will turn into a prince..but I don't want a prince. I want my Maan!! But he says I am a stranger!! Ok, I will kiss you only if you turn into Maan!

Maan(murmured) : well done Maan! You tried to make her jealous and now have a stiff competition from a "crab"!! Am I that bad, really?

He made a mental note to order a crab fry for the next day's lunch, just to get a revenge you know!

He sat next to her and cupped her cheeks,"I am sooo sorry mishty!!"

Geet : oh noo crabbie, you didn't wait! I didn't even kiss you and you turned into Maan!

Maan : how about kissing Maan then??

She moved his hands away and pouted like a cute five year old.

Geet : I can't kiss Maan...

Maan : why??

Geet : because he thinks I'm a stranger crabbie!!!

She hugged him and buried her face on his shoulders. Maan tried hard to keep his mind in control. He too had a few drinks after all and the love of his life was so close to him. Geet left him suddenly and ran towards the sea.

Maan : Godd.. Geeet.. ruko kaha ja rhi ho?

Geet : don't follow me crabbie... I don't want to live in a world where Maan doesn't know me. I am going to live in the sea.

Maan : Geeet nhii meri baat suno Mishty..

Geet : Mishty?

Geet stopped running just on the shores where the waves touched her feet. By that time Maan reached near her.

Geet : hey crab! How do you know Maan calls me Mishty?

Maan : Because I'm not a crab and I'm Maan!!

Geet: But Maan says I'm a stranger to him!! You seem to know me..

Maan(murmured to himself) : kitni bhi chadi ho madam mujhpe blame daalna nhi bhulengi!

Geet : dekha.. you are talking crab language too.. mere ko nhi samaj...

Maan : abhi samjhata hu. Pehle mere saath ao room me..

Geet : nhi crabbie, maana mene josh me akey kaha that I'm dating you lekin me sirf Maan ki hu.. samjhe tum! Aur me jal pari banungi..

Maan : agar tum jal pari banogi to Maan kaise tumhare paas ayega? Tum to paani me rahogi

Geet : haa! crabbie you are so stupid!! My Maan knows surfing.. he will surf tab me unhe apni bahoo me le lungi and he will forget that stick..

Maan : wow that seems like a nice idea...

Now Maan took Geet's advice and lifted by her waist from behind.

Geet : oh my God!! Craaab you are a man now..leave me..arey..roop chahe jo bhi ho adat kaise chhutegi? Crab to crab hi he..Leave me.. leave me you crab!!

Maan : Geet stop calling me crab and come back to room now!!

Geet kept struggling and Maan forced her to come back. Suddenly a huge wave hit the shore drenching both of them in water. The unexpected splash of wtaer made Maan lose his balance and he fell on the wet sand with Geet on top of him. Geet stared at him her whole body still resting on top of him. Maan on the other hand was mesmerized by the way she looked. Her hair was all wet and the little bit of sand that was on her cheeks and the wet locks enhanced her beauty. The chill breeze couldn't lessen the heat that was emanating between their bodies. Maan's eyes took the beauty of her angelic face and roamed down to devour the clevage that was doing things to him when pressed against his muscular chest. His hands autmatically gripped around her waist and Geet moaned involuntarily. Maan released his hand from her waist and moved slowly feeling every line of her body to her cheeks. He was about to touch her locks when Geet whispered in a rather teasing tone, "dekha.. I told you.. crab can't lift me..abhi to gir gaye na.."

Maan rolled over making her go down and him on top of her.

Maan : Geet, baad me mujhe mat kehna, you asked for it!

Geet : uffo.. you know what you were better as a crab

Maan : Geet stop calling me crab warna..


Geet : warna kya?

Maan : mujhse bura koi nhi hoga!!

Geet : aur zyada time spend kiya na, to crabbie bhi Maan jaise khadus ho jayenge. I am going to make you a crab again..

Maan : Gee..

Before he could complete her lips were on his, touching assertively yet apprehensive. She looked into his eyes hesitantly as if to ask him if he didn't want this. How could he stop her? He leaned forward and kissed her fervently. His hands roamed all around her curves. He pressed his lips and his body on her losing himself to her desire. Eventually when they needed some breath they parted. Maan moved from over her while Geet was still panting and smiling.

Maan : nice try, but now I'm gonna show you how a crab lifts his princess!

Geet : go away crab warna Maan ko bol dungi..

Maan : ab chup karo bhewdi..

Geet : bhewdi teri hone wali Mrs. Crabbie

Maan : beshaq..Mrs. Crabbie

And he lifted her in his arms from the ground while Geet threatened the crab how he was gonna pay for this when Maan would come looking for her! Finally Maan reached their room holding Geet in his arms. He gently let her down on the couch.

Maan : Geet kapde change kro aur so jao

Geet : nhi k..krna mujhe change. Me thak gayi..

Maan : geele kapdo me so jaogi to bimar ho jaogi. Abhi jaake change kro!

Geet : nhi..agar me change karungi..(giggling) to mere kapdo me crab ghus jayega...

Maan glared at her, "tum change kr rhi ho? Ya me karau?

Geet opened her arms wide "karaooo..acha game he! I will change your clothes and you will change mineee..."

Maan gulped as he imagined the situation.

Maan : you are tempting me!

Geet looked him innocently.

Maan : ok, here we go..

He switched off the lights and Geet shrieked so loudly that Maan immediately switched them on back.

Maan : kya hua MIshty??

Geet : mujhe andhere se dar lagta he..

Maan sighed and closed his eyes tightly and slowly undid her dress as Geet kept mumbling and giggling. As soon as he felt the dress falling on the floor, Maan involuntarily opened his eyes and saw her petite form clad only with the essential inners and that too wet. Geet lowered her eyes and her cheeks turned heavy pink as his eyes bore into her feminity. Geet tried to escape from his proximity but he captured her firmly by holding her bare waist. He lifted her chin and forced her eyes to meet his own intense eyes. The passion could not be denied by her and she hugged him back tightly feeling every flexing muscle of his back.


Her hands freely roamed around his back and came to his chest. She tore the thin wet fabric that covered his upper body. In no time the rest of their clothes fell away as a puddle and he moved on the bed lifting her. His mouth travelled every inch of her body devouring her tender beauty. She encouraged him running her hand all over his masculine figure. They kissed and rolled feeling each other. She moved closer to him intending to push their limits and move forward. All her mind wanted was him to feel her within. Rightly, Maan gained his senses in time and moved back panting with pure desire but that would never cloud his mind to do something irrational. He quietly kissed her on forehead and rushed to the restroom. Geet opened her eyes and saw him disappearing. She blushed crimson and covered her body with the quilt that lying crumbled on the floor. She waited for him to come out and dozed off to sleep. At the same time Maan stood under the shower with a faint smile and blushed as he thought about what they were about to do. He murmured, "ye ladki sach me mujhe paagal kar degi!"

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PRECAP :Maan weds Geet??? 😲

Hope u like this one 😃

waiting for your longgg reviews!!



Edited by madhubala123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing dear
love d crab story
mk weds geet
in past or present
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Posted: 11 years ago
such a sweet update.loved mr nd mrs crabbie.continue soon.would love to read more about present as well
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet calling maan as crab was hilarious...

Poor geet blabbering something getting drunk...

Y did maan marry Pari when he was madly in love with geet?

Who is the devil separated them?
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsem update i think precap is present
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Posted: 11 years ago
⭐️
nice
maan crab se j
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Posted: 11 years ago
funny cute romantic update
Loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome👏 update

maan ko sach mai bhari pada flirting ka natak ...
poor bartender
😆
pari words hit maan hard ... he was so worried

crab story was amazing
😉😃 ...

love maan murmuring "
well done Maan! You tried to make her jealous and now have a stiff competition from a "crab"!! Am I that bad, really?"
n
"kitni bhi chadi ho madam mujhpe blame daalna nhi bhulengi!"😆

geet antics was lovely😃

maaneet went in flaw
😳but maan control himself

love it

precap is awesome... but in past or present????

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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a nice update loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesme part
aww geet n da crabbiee lolz
lovely
precap?!

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