ArHi OS: Love Happens.

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

dis was simply amazin..:)idk y people think of endin der lyf for such foolish ppl,,i mean if sum1 doesnt realiz der wrth..u shud move out..nt beg 4 a place in der lyf..if u actually mean nethin 4 dem..dey wud demslf make a space 4 u in der lyf..:)here both Arnav n Khushi went thru d same phrase..n dey both knows how d othr 1 feels..
in d beginnin..i thot it was sumthin related 2 Khushi-Shyam..
bt thankfully NOT!!

...dey wer wid diff ppl..havin felt d same..

its sumtyms tuff 2 accpt d reality..bt sooner or later lyf wud turn around..n make evrythin at peace..:)loved it..:)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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awaww

@awaww

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

You really should've continued this. I thought Arnav was talking about Khushi in the first paragraph but once I read on I realised that it wasn't her. Poor Khushi, one man destroyed her. Thank God Arnav was there to save her.

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Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Adorably cute story keep it up

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Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Don't you think you can continue this?

Another lovely OS. I felt really bad for Arnav & khushi, both had to suffer a heartbreak. But the way you portrayed their feelings was perfect. I liked the way Arnav dealt with his heartbreak & the way khushi dealt with it, shows the stark difference in their characters. It was really sweet of Arnav to take care of khushi like that.

The ending was beautiful & it's open ending so you can definitely continue it *winks* :p