ArHi OS: Love Happens.

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Frances

@Punkin22

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Well, Jessica, first congrats on being a goldie. Secondly, you did a excellent job writting dear. Your OS was very interesting and boy what a first page. You style of writing is smooth and easy to read and flows nicely. I was hooked also immediately. 👏👏 I look forward to your next update. Thank you for pm.

Edited by Punkin22 - 13 years ago

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Swetha

@swetha1495

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

luvly os... congrats on becomin a goldie..

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naina

@warriorprincess

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Congratulations on becoming a Goldie, this was a nice piece.

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@Fazila~

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Jessiii🤗 First...congrats on becoming a Goldie...Second...u sure this is ur first...😉 Its awesome... like im reading a mills n boon...so romantic...cant wait to read more...gr8 start...do conti...soon 😍

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

A very different and fresh approach...I liked reading this OS..

Congrats on being a Glodie,..

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@PersieV

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

EEEP!!! You wrote an OS!!

Wow this was completely different!

You need to write more on ArHi!!

Get writing loved it

Edited by Aveiro - 13 years ago

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IFrozenl

@IFrozenl

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

AMAZING OS JESS!👏

LOVED IT FROM THE BEGINNING TILL THE END.

IT WAS VERY DIFF AND FRESH ONE.

LOVED THE POEMS.

I KNOW YOU WANTED ME TO BE THE FIRST ONE TO COMMENT BUT IT WAS NOT POSSIBLE AND AM SORRY FOR THAT😭. AND AM SORRY AGAIN FOR REPLYING SOOO LATE. BUT YOU SHOULD BE HAPPY THAT I WAS THE FIRST ONE TO READ😉

BUT THE NEXT TIME YOU WRITE AN OS, FOR SURE I WILL BE THE FIRST ONE TO COMMENT!! 😳

Edited by shirley_sarun - 13 years ago

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Hey friend, I absolutely loved it. Please continue and pm me on updates! Eagerly waiting. Tfs!

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Hey!

Really really great for your first OS!

I especially liked the part where he reminded her of her mom and bro. The people we leave behind are the one who will suffer more!

Do write more!😉