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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Lovely.
Enjoying this tale, though the story is heart wrenching. Arnav and Khushi's path are separate now. But their hearts are still entwined together.
I loved the intensity in the story. Arnav and Khushi's love is so deep that it doesn't feel good without intensity.
So Arnav has turned to a pilot. Uff he must have looked sexy as a pilot. And Khushi has become a recognized poet. It was her first book launch. excellent. As she was melancholic without Arnav on the auspicious day of her success, Arnav was elated and proud to see her success.
The poem you wrote at the end was awesome.
Do you read urdu poetry?
One of my friend Arabela made some wonderful Arshi VMs with some poetry. Here is one, my absolute favorite, for you

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=gC-f-1Y-kcw[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by sohara - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Ankita, a good but sad story!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
I read both the parts together. I cannot for the life of me come up with a good reason for two people who are so much in love to be apart for FIVE years.
I will wait for the next update to find out why

Very nice story. And thank you for being a writer who never makes the readers beg for updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
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un resed my place ..page 8.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb Story.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I loved it.
I wonder what's keeping two people who love and understand each other so much apart.
I am looking forward to reading more.
Thanks.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
lovely oncept dear..
even after 5 years of separation without any communication thier hearts have their own way to talk to each other..

khusi is finaly a writer and arnav is pilot...the gift that she gave him on his birthday was beautiful more than one can expect...

so are they apart because of his career only or there is more to it...pls tell soon

but no matter how far they are from each other thier love had bound them forever
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful and heartfelt Two shot👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Firstly,All I can Say is a Big Heartfelt Thank You to each one for liking thie story and for waiting graciously because my internet connection has decided to go on a walk.

This update is dedicated to RizArshi and Nishu_Shorna.I know you both want to kill me but that poem I wrote on the day IPK ended.Hum sab ek hi kashti pe sawar hai.IPK is not there but we have the memories and each other right.😳


Here it is,Arnav and Khushi's love story.I haven't spilt it into parts,not wanting to loose the essence of it.


FLASHBACKS IN ITALICS


PART 3(A)

The crew members of his flying team were ectastic to say the least,when once in the whole time of working together,Captain Arnav Singh Raizada or ASR as they addressed him as personally invited them for dinner that night.


If anyone asked them about their opinion about him,then the words in accord of sincere,hardworking,honest and dedicated would fall as his abjectives on their own.He has climbed the top of ladder in his career in such a short time and was always strictly professional in all his dealings.


His timings were impeccable,nodoubt he held the record of most Intime flights takeoffs and landings and what intrigued people working in the same proxities with him was his obvious and adamant indifference to all the charms and perks of his profession.


He was a devilishly handsome pilot on whom from girls swooned over but he was completely oblivious to all the female attention.He never as much as looked at a woman unless it was related to its work,always giving the rise to talks that his heart has already found its destination.


No one had a clue about his personal life even the people with whom he were friends with.Though he has always been hideous to the concerns of his team mates,always filling in for them so that they can spend quality time with their families.




Arnav was relaxing in the lounge chair as his gaze wavered to his co pilot Michael who led his wife to the dance floor.He saw the much in love couple danced the night out,feeling enormously happy for them.He rememebered how 6 months back,Michael has been so disturbed regarding his relationship and it has been him who has suggested him to propose his long time girlfriend and solemnise it formally.


Now here they were happily married,the contenteness and the feeling of being one clearly viable in their stance.


Isn't that what everyone really wanted,a place to solely belonged to,the feeling of being home,the innate peace that he felt only with Khushi.But now he was far away from it as he pulled out Khushi's book from his leather jacket trying to feel her presence with her words.


He was never into parties and clubbing but today after so long he has wanted to celebrate because Khushi's first book has not only been acclaimed critically but was on its verge of becoming an bestseller.He shuffled a laugh as her perplexed face took over his senses.


He could so imagine her being bewildered by all these.He wanted to be there to see all the myriad of emotions adoring her beautiful face while he broke this news to her.Nodoubt she has been informed about it by her brother or father but he knew her better.


She will be least concerned about the figures the book was garnering.A part of him was scared because he wanted Khushi to continue writing.He felt like letting out a mirthless laugh at the play of destiny.He had thought he would demand her writing debue as a wedding gift and has ended up asking for it as the last thing before parting.


The first time,she has recited her first poem to him,he has known that it was her real calling.But stubborn,as she was and her apprehensiveness at her own talent has never let her take that big jump.Inspite of the superhuman efforts put by him,she hasn't relented and thus he has decided to demand it as his wedding gift which she wouldn't be able to deny.


And Now he was here having read and reread each poem penned down in the book that he has lost the count of it.His Khushi was far away from all the worldly charms.She followed her heart,wasn't abashed about any of her choices, living life to the fullest.The aura around her screamed innocence.His thoughts reeling back to the time when he has met her first time.

He had been there for his routine checkup.Having no one to lean back on,he has long ago learned to be self dependent .


There he has seen her the first time.He has been about to exit when his eyes has caught the sight of a girl,standing on the threshold of stairs,swaying on her step.Her eyes closing due to dizzying and her hands trying catch on the railing for support.


The instinctive protectiveness that he has felt towards the girl has made him run to her and caught her in his arms.Escorting her to the nearby bench,he had made her drink water.Time has ceased to stop when she has opened her eyes and he has stared into those hazel orbs.


A moment later,he has heard the most melodious voice ever thanking him for his help.She has went on informing that she was here to donate blood voluntarily and has skipped breakfast because she was running late and thus due to weakness she has had a fainting spell reasserting that she would be fine after eating something sensing his cautious gaze.


Somehow seeing her in that vulnerable condition has restricted him to leave her alone and thus for second time in a day,he has surprised himself when he had walked off only to return with a sandwich and juice for her.


Her eyes hadn't been able to hide the sudden surprise at his gesture and he hadn't been able to say a word.She has politely refused but then have accepted it seeing he hadn't moved from his position.He has waited until she finished and when he has seen the color rising her face,he has left wordlessly.


That night everytime he would close his eyes,a pair of hazel orbs would flash in front of him evading his sleep.He hadn't even ask her name,well he didn't need to anyways,he has tried telling himself that.Though,he couldn't deny the strange kind of warmness that he has felt when he has seen something akin to admiration for him in her eyes.


In another part of the city Khushi Gupta laid wide awake in her bed,her mind on an overdrive regarding the happenings of the day.Not only has he saved her from falling but he has been courteous enough to wait around till she felt fine.Such an act of kindness by a stranger was nodoubt overwhelming for her but what disturbed her was that he hadn't felt like a stranger to her.


The briefest of moment when his eyes has held hers captive,they have seemed to cast a spell around her.Whatelse could have let her to blurt out everything to a person she hadn't even seen before today.To her,it has felt like an explanation and Khushi Gupta didn't give explanations to anyone.


Moreover,she hadn't even thanked him properly and thus lost in thoughts of that stranger with the hope of meeting him again,she has fallen asleep that night.


After three months,Khushi stepped out of the chamber after donating blood waiting for that stranger to show up.As time passed,she felt disappointment creeping in along with the foolishness of expecting him here again.She has been about to move ahead when she felt his presence.


Arnav Singh Raizada stood in the corridor of Red Cross Society defying all the logics his brains has been putting up last night or precisely since the day he has met her.He was about to make a move to the next floor assuming to find her there when as if pulled by an unknown force,he turned and there she was dressed in yellow churidar looking like a blooming sunflower.


Khushi turned the exact moment he did as they stared at each other but there wasn't a hint of surprise in either of their eyes as being here was the most expected thing to do.They both moved towards each other at the sametime meeting halfway ,struggling with words everytime they opened their mouth only to end up speaking together.


While Khushi started to thank him for the other day,he has asked whether she was fine as they both erupted into pools of laughter at the strange familiarity of their sitiuation.The ice broke between them and the rest started falling into place to his own.



Khushi sat on the swing staring at the paper in her hands.The December air was cold but to Khushi,the coldness she felt in her heart was much more graver than the weather.She caressed the paper with her dainty fingers as if trying to caress the features of the person who has penned down the contents of it.


It was impossible to make out a single world as the ink was smudged with her tears.Whenever she would look at it,she wasn't able to keep her tears at bay as they cascaded down mercilessly.How a day that has brought so much happiness with it has ended up drewing them apart.


Each and every word written on the piece of paper was engraved in her heart.The set of instructions by Arnav Singh Raizada which she was expected to follow.In someother day and time,such a thing would have resulted in an heavy argument between the two but that day Khushi has relentlessly agreed to his each word.


Her patience was wearing off with each passing day.Every moment spent apart from him was plaguing her inside out.If he would have demanded her life,she would have happily given it without battling an eyelid.It could have been better than dieing a little every single day without him.


Khushi was never known to be patient but she has waited all these years.His love has made her capable enough for it.At times when she felt like,she can't go any longer,she would steel herself to go on,holding onto his beliefs on them and their love.


The ring was glinting in the moonlight,the paper in her hands and her heart aching for its possessor.She has read about LOVE in novels,seen in films,heard about it from people but she has understood its true meaning when Arnav has come into her life.


Falling in love with him was inevitable.It was meant to be,they were meant to be.It wasn't a kind of love that could be altered with the traces of time and place.It was an all encompassing love that no distance could diminish rather it has only grown stronger with the passage of time.


CONTINUED BELOW



Edited by togetherforever - 11 years ago
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CONTINUED


How the one out of the blue meet with a stranger has turned out to be the one person,beyond whom the world ceased to exist for her.Their meetings that has started on a formal arena has held a mind of its own as they seamless fell into an amiable companionship in the days to come.She has been in her final years of Bachelors and he has just shifted to Delhi for his Masters.


After their respective colleges,the would meet at their fixed place as they recountered the happenings of the day.She would giggle and laugh as she narrated the stories one after the other and he would listen attentively,having all the time in the world for her.


Khushi hasn't even realised when she has started to looking up at Arnav for everything. He always held a solution to all her problems.He has become her confidante with whom she can talk about everything and not feel even slightly abashed.


Something has shifted between when they have shared their first laughter together.He talked less and listened more,he was reserved when she was completely outgoing.Their choices were as different as chalk and cheese,she preferred tea while he didn't drink anything except coffee.


She thrived on different cuisines of food while he relished simple meals.But all these things seemed to fade in oblivion when they were together. Over shared cups of tea and coffee,over bubbling laughters,in the mundane daily life,they have found a space where they felt completely whole.


Sometimes she has wondered,how come he bare with all her craziness and her antics but the moment the question has left her mouth,Khushi has realised it was too late.In all these months of being together,Khushi has first time his eyes veiling a mask in front of her.


Those bewitching eyes that has perturbed her the first time,the same eyes she has come to read effortlessly,the same eyes that talked to her when he was silent,that always told her when he needed his space,when he needed a friend,when he just wanted someone to be just there has then turned expressionless.


He has left without voicing a word to her and Khushi has felt the world fade around her.In that moment Khushi has stumbled upon her realisation of love and the sight of him walking away from her has led to such a havoc of emotions in her that she has confessed her love aloud halting him in his tracks.


He has turned ,his face mirroring expressions from shock to amazement to realisation and then recognition.As they have walked towards each other,crossing the distance of few feet between them,Khushi has realised she has hurt him by her question.


His eyes were brimming with same love that clouded hers,she has known that he loved her more than she could ever love him.She has pulled at her ear for apologising but he has stopped her midway nodding his head in negative.


Bridging the gap between them as he has pulled her close and they have shared their first kiss,they have realised what ultimate happiness felt like.After that defining moment in their life,Arnav and Khushi have become synonymous to life for each other.


Having someone to finally call his own,Arnav had told Khushi everything about himself.His father was a well renowned businessman,the Raizadas were a name to be reckoned with and his mother was the most loving lady ever.


They were a happy contended family until destiny had played a cruel joke and snatched his parents away from him at the mere age of 12.He was a single child and his relatives has shown their back when the time arose.His father has been his hero and he has taught him to never be dependent on anyone.


Arnav has always felt,it was always the parental instinct in his parents that they have opened a trust in his name.The business has dissolved with no one to look after it and he has spent all his after years in hostel.He never had to worry about money because his father has made all the provisions of his wellbeing.


Recognising his passion for flying quite early,Arnav has found his direction long ago.Once he has turned 18,he has turned the trust into an orphanage for other children keeping the name of his parents alive.


Khushi has never known so much pain until he has heard him,seen his tears,hear the cracking of voice everytime he talked about his deceased parents.Holding him to herself,Khushi has cried the tears that he hasn't been able to shed for himself.


That day she realised the man Arnav Singh Raizada truly was,inspite of all that he has faced,he didn't harboured any negative feelings for anyone.He was a self made man who has battled all odds and to know he was hers for keeps was a joy like no other.


She has vowed to herself to never let any more pain come his way ever,not knowing what future held for them.It is said that true love empowers you and it couldn't have been more true in her case.


She was youngest in her family,adored and pampered by her parents and brother and inspite of growing up,she always remained the baby for them.Her father was in the textile business and falling the footsteps of her brother,she has got herself enrolled in business manangement course.


Though a few weeks down the line,she has known it was not her calling.Yet she has sticked to it not knowing whatelse to do.Confused as she was,her life has been going on until Arnav came and changed it all.


If he has broken his rules by following his heart and taking a step ahead in their relationship,Khushi has long ago known that when it comes to him,no rules existed for her.From the first time when she has explained the reason of her fainting to a stranger to making him privy to her secret scribblings as she has termed it as,he has always been the only exception.


They completed each other,falling together like missing pieces of a puzzle.His protectiveness ,her liveliness,his secret smiles and her echoing laughter,her reciting her poems as he listened incessantly,their mindless bickerings and pacifying each other,their first date,the innumerable photographs capturing their cherished moments immortalising it.

Arnav has applied to the flying school in USA and the day he has got his admission letter,they both have been on seventh sky.He has to move for 2 years and for the life of themselves,the idea of living apart was never in their thought process.


They haven't talked about the time and when because it has always been a preconceived thing.Their relationship has to be culminated into marriage,they both respected the sancity and sacredness of this institution and that has been the reason they have never crossed the boundaries of their relationship.


Thus that evening,ASR has turned to the doorstep of Khushi Gupta to formally ask her parents for their marriage.Khushi has been elated with the mere thought of being his in all ways and she was confident that her parents who had never denied her anything,would agree to Arnav's proposal at the very instant.Besides,her Arnav was perfect.


The man he was,Arnav has told Khushi's parents every single detail about him.Khushi has felt her head going ten inches taller when she has heard the conviction in his voice as he talked about them,his voice never faltering.He has provided not only verbal but assurance to her father of being more than capable to take care of all her needs.


Arnav and Khushi have stood there holding hands as an dreaded silence has surrounded the room when Arnav has finished talking.The ground beneath their feet has shaken when they have heard her father's words.He hasn't said much but those few words has shaken the entire course of their life.


"I cannot bestow my daughter's hand to an orphan.How could I trust a man to give my daughter the security that only a family can provide when he has never had his.Khushi,if you want to hear my answer in one word then it's a clear NO and if you still decide to go ahead with this relationship then we are finished here".


Khushi has felt that someone has sucked the life out of her.All her dreams has come crashing down in a fleeting second,thousand arrows pierced her heart as her father's words resonated in her ears,he has called her Arnav an orphan.


She couldn't even fandom what Arnav might be feeling as she opened her mouth to speak but she found Arnav gripping her hand as gestured her to not say a word.His face hadn't deciphered anything but when has he been able to hide his pain from her as khushi felt her own heart being ripped into pieces seeing the raw hurt in his eyes.


He made a move to leave and stopped only to ask her parents for meeting her one last time and when he pried his fingers away from her,they both have known the decision was taken.



(CREDIT TO THE MAKER)


A Song that suits Arnav and Khushi perfectly,If you would like to listen,then here it is.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CYDgN-gqSKo

SORRY,CANT EMBED IT,USING PHONE.


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Edited by togetherforever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I read both chapters in one go and I must say this is a really heart touching, wonderful story. It's simply an amazing piece of work👏

So Arnav is a pilot, and Khushi is a writer; who was inspired by her love of life. Truly seeing the love both have for each other, I really can't put out in words what I feel for them. It must be really hard for them to stay apart, as they seem to love each other a lot. I wonder what this promise is which made them stay away. What really made them distant?😕

Khushi's birthday gift for Arnav must have been the best b'day gift Arnav must have received in his whole life. Khushi truly is a sweetheart, and Arnav truly is a wonderful man as he stayed true to his words😳

But as you said, no matter how distant they physically are, their hearts only beat for each other. Thank you for penning down this beautiful, romantic and fresh story, and sharing it with us🤗

Eagerly waiting to know the rest of the story

Update soon😉

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