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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Res 😡

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Girl you dedicate this chapter to me and Nish because you made us cry with your poem and what did you do just now? 😡

I can't believe what just happened. Her father denied? That's the reason they are apart? Anku I am literally crying now.

My heart goes out to Arnav. He has been alone for so long. Finally he had Khushi but she too was cruelly snatched from him. The man that Arnav is, he would never want Khushi to be away from her family just so that she can be with him. Doesn't matter if it kills him. He won't let Khushi oppose her family. That was heartbreaking. Their love story was a beautiful one. Their souls connected the first time they met each other. I loved the way you incorporated the teej scene. The incident before Khushi confessed her love to Arnav reminded me of two other people if you know whom I am referring to. Before it was only Arnav who was alone. Now, Khushi too is alone despite having her whole family with her. But can you really say that they are alone? I think not. The distance are keeping them apart physically but they are always with each other in each others thoughts and in their hearts. Its been five long years. i hope Khushi's father has now understood that Arnav is the only family Khushi ever needed. I wish he brings Arnav back with all the respect he deserves. Update the next part soon. Its enough now. Bring them together. BAS

P.S. The song suits them to a T. They are living for each other bearing all the hurt and pain of their separation. But this pain and hurt couldn't douse the fire of love in their hearts. Let their love win. Its time. Hogi pyar ki jeet
Edited by RizArshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
loved the update wonder if its her family that separated them both love each other so much but both promised each other to stay away that's so sad and she wrote a book loved how she said happy birthday and then left awesome part thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Lovely update.
Though apart their heart beats as one!
Wonder why they are arart!
She is rich and he is not so rich? Her parents kept them apart??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
so sad they are not together
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
What happens when you want to do something and your wifi ditches on you.


Ill post the update as soon as my net works.


Hope not to keep you all waiting for long.
Edited by togetherforever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
net can be major pain for sure
no really it can be
but will wait for yours to work fine again
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
CAPTAIN Arnav Singh Raizada. Wah! Wah! 😳
I knew it. Arnav feels the same way being apart from Khushi. The pain is mutual. But why did he chose a job that keeps him away from the love of his life 😭
FIVE YEARS! My God Anku you have kept them apart for so long. I will get u for this.
Woww Khushi is a writer. That's awesome! Loved how even in absence Arnav plays a significant role behind Khushi's success. After all he is her inspiration 😳
Loved the moment she comes wearing a pink saree to the book launch thinking her Arnav is watching her, which he did. It was an emotional moment for Arnav to see her wishing Happy Birthday, and a very special moment for both of them.
Ab aap hi bataye why are they willingly staying apart.
The lines are awesome! So is the update 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
chi, ur poetry is too good
dkitni baar kahoon don't under estimate it *fake angry look* [fake isliye k aapse gussa ho jaun ye ho nahi sakta, aur aap mujhse gussa ho jao, ye main hone nahin dungi 😆]

for some resons, i was reminded of these songs:-

1. Door Ho Kar Bhi Door Tum Nahin Ho
Paas Ho Lekin Paas Kyon Nahin Ho [jhankaar beats]

2. juda hoke bhi, tu mujh mein kahin baaki hai

loved the update

n as usual will just say, YOU R GERNIUS

love you

mwahz!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
wow!!
beautifully written. .
arnav loves her..
they are apart but Still together. .
khushi's an author. .
waiting for their meet again. .
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
HEART BREAKING SO I WAS RIGHT IT WAS HER FAMILY BETTER YET HER FATHER WHO BROKE THEM APART IS HE HAPPY NOW SEEING HIS DAUGHTER UN HAPPY AND NOT MOVING ON IN HER LIFE BUT WAITING FOR THE ONE PERSON WHO COMPLETES HER LOVED THE FLASH BACK SO SAD A FEW WORDS TORE THEIR WORLD APART SO SAD ARNAV WAS JUDGE BECAUSE HE WAS AN ORPHAN YET KHUSHI IS AN ORPHAN EVEN DO SHE HAS FAMILY THEY DID NOT UNDERSTAND THEIR CHILD AFTER ALL THESE YEARS THANKS FOR THE PM
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CYDgN-gqSKo[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by dumas - 11 years ago

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