'!!That Dark Night!!', A maanveer two-shot. Part 2 . Page 2.

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awww, that was so sweet!😳 So AKASH was the person who hurt her, after reading the first part , I was certain it was Uday😆! U made Jai's character so pleasant😲 ... it was refreshing👏. All in all - a beautiful OS Nash👍🏼.

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Nishaya

@Nash..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: angleroops

hey nice and simple update

finally manveer became one

it was very sweet story

Thanx Roopali.

Manveer had to become one for sure. Glad that you liked it!

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Nishaya

@Nash..

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: ...navina...
Awww, that was so sweet!

So AKASH was the person who hurt her, after reading the first part , I was certain it was Uday

U made Jai's character so pleasant😲... it was refreshing

All in all - a beautiful OS Nash

I am very happy that you liked it Navina.

And Jai's character was just reformation!

Thank you so much for the lovely comment