'!!That Dark Night!!', A maanveer two-shot. Part 2 . Page 2.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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THAT DARK NIGHT..


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She wallked on the road drizzly.. Her eyes were pouring out the solution that she could no longer hold back. Life had never been so fair with her and this was another of it. Only she knew, her love for him and it was only him who could SHATTER her so well. She didnt know her destination, yet she dragged along her feet forward on that lonely road in THAT DARK NIGHT...

Whatever happened to her was her destiny for it is said.. SORROWS ARE TEMPORARY AND HAPPINESS IS NEVER PERMANENT... And she was someone, to whom happiness did not like be with! Her vision were now getting blurred due to the heavy intoxication that she had taken just a while ago. That road had a small river on its side and its fresh passover breeze were disturbing her shuffled hair...making her more drowzy. Her heels were constantly trying to knock her down but still she tried walking straight afterall the word FALL had no place in THE MANYATA MALHOTRA's dictonary. As her vision started to betray her, she heard two racing bike and before she could react one of it just hit her...making her roll down into the river...

TO BE CONTINUED.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great first part Nash, very short though😉! Hope Manyata is not too badly injured, wonder what (or whom😆) brought her to such a point. Do continue soon😊.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...navina...

Great first part Nash,


very short though!

Hope Manyata is not too badly injured,
wonder what (or whombrought her to such a point.


Do continue soon.

Thanks Navina!

Actually it was supposed to be longer but then because of some problem , i updated only half of the first part.. SORRY! Will compensate on the next part.. And your doubts will be removed too.

Will continue asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow... 101 views and still jst 7 likes and 1 comment. Am I that bad in writing???

SORRY , if I have irked you with this one.

But i can't discontinue it for some of them still read it and so i will have to continue it for their sake. SORRY AGAIN, will not do such mistake from now on.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was amazing! I, as a reader, had an urge to read more of it and that's a great accomplishment for a writer! U didnt commit a mistake by sharing this piece of ur creativity with us! Thank u for doing so! And u dont need to apologise!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey the update was small
but wonder wht happened to manyata
waiting for uday entry
i hope manyata is fine
plzzz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nashia

It was amazing! I, as a reader, had an urge to read more of it and that's a great accomplishment for a writer! U didnt commit a mistake by sharing this piece of ur creativity with us! Thank u for doing so! And u dont need to apologise!

Thank you so much Nashia but i guess its not so that people like to read my work hence, from now on i will not be writing such pieces. But am extremely glad that you found it good.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: angleroops

hey the update was small
but wonder wht happened to manyata
waiting for uday entry
i hope manyata is fine
plzzz update soon

Will make the ending i.e the next part longer. Thanks for the comment.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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2nd Part!


Uday stopped and threw his bike on one side . His other friend, Jagat also stopped , they both went and got Manyata's body out of the river. Once her body was out.. And they laid her down to see her face..Jagat exclaimed, "HOLY SHIT MAN, SHE IS MANYATA MALHOTRA, THE SUPERSTAR!".. For a moment, world just stopped in front of Udayveer's eyes. He had hit such a famous person, and here she was badly injured. Now if he took her to the hospital, she COULD BE saved but HE would be GONE UNDER THE TRIAL AND CHARGES OF RUNNING OVER A FREAKING CELEBRITY.

Jagat's voice brought him out of his reverie," Uday yaar, lets just leave her here. If we take the risk of saving her life, Your future will be in Risk itself. No one is here who saw us so just get up and let go Man. She is hell drunk.it was surely not your fault." .. Jagat's word seemed true but as Uday got up, manyata's ring got stuck in his shirt. He looked at her. She was really beautiful beyond limits. His heart felt a flinge of pain to see her like that but then taking her to the hospital was STILL a big NO..

Uday carried up her in his arms after several negligence of Jagat. He took her to his HOME. Obviously HIS MOM was dead horrified but a mom is a human as well, she felt extreme pity for the poor girl

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Days passed by and since Uday was a medical student, he had been curing Manyata himself. But Uday hadn't told her that it was he who had hit her infact he just made up that he had found her. He thought that he MIGHT LOOSE HER TRUST or most of all HER. Within these days, Uday was getting unconventionally attached to her. He loved to watch her talk, eat and shout on the phone at his PA. He just loved being around her. Though the reporters on the tv had always shown her to be a Sexy arrogant woman but now after staying with her, he noticed how innocent and lonely she was.. The way Manyata got along with his mom, reflected her loving nature and pure heart.

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On the other side, Manyata was completely broken after what AKASH DID TO HER. She was DUMPED BY HIM. But these days, Uday's presence made her feel her better. She has told everyone that she was on holidays and no one disturbed her except Jai, who visited her every now and then...

There was a swift knock on the door..."COME IN"., Manyata said.

"Hello best friend !", Jai hugged her tight.

"Am gud sweety.. Just missing you."., Manyata hugged her back. They both talked for hours, they hit each other, they joked when Uday's mom came in with Tea and snacks. After Jai greeted her, she left them with a warm smile.

Manyata sighed," some people are just too lovely na Jai, that you never wish to leave them." Jai looked at her," then dont leave them na Best friend." Manyata smiled," i have to! In fact my and their world are much different. "

Jai cupped Manyata's face," what you dont wish to, you dont have to dear. But tell me one thing clearly dont you wanna go back to your world."

Manyata's eyes were all teary while she whispered," i just dont want to leave them Jai, they are so good to me unlike the outer world who run back of me for my name and Fame."

Jai was astonished to her breakdown this way, even when AKASH cheated on her, Manyata hadn't cried," You dont wanna leave them or You dont want to go away from This house Manyata?".. Manyata was flabbergasted because she herself did not have the answer to this question.."I doo..nn..nt know." she whispered," Uday and his mom have done so much for me. He takes every little care of me. He laughs with me over silly reasons.. He acts silly so that I feel better..." before Manyata could complete ,Jai interrupted," And so YOU have FALLEN IN LOVE WITH HIM RIGHT.". Jai hugged her and left her with that question upon her to DECIDE AT.

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At the dinner table, both Manyata and Uday were stealing glances at each other. She was now sure, She was head over heels in love with this man, HER SAVIOUR!

MANYATA was walking to her room when She suddenly dashed with him. They both fell on the floor, he on the floor and She at the top of him... For sometimes they just looked at each other with that Intense love that they had for each other... Slowly slowly they drew closer... And in that of moment their lips just met with abundant passion that they felt .Uday pulled up her body constantly to deepen the kiss while Manyata fisted her hand into his hair, trying to give in equal passion.

They broke the kiss when both had ran out of their breath. Once the trance was broken, both of them were Speechless. MANYATA couldn't hold back her feelings," Uday I love you.".. Uday couldn't believe his ears "If my status bothers you then i am leaving ALL THIS RIGHT NOW BUT Plz dont leave Me." she spoke everything in one breath. UDAY looked at her in dismay . He pulled her in his arms," You dont need to do that sweetheart and for your answer" He claimed her lips with
his which answered all her questions.. To be happy


THE END!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey nice and simple update
finally manveer became one
it was very sweet story

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