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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
that was fabulous and great start... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Superb start!

Do continue soon...its truly enticing!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
awesome starting
i loved it
hayee mera haal toh kria se bhi bura hota hai jab mera lappy kharab ho jata hai
loved their chats
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
awesome...update the next chapter soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 2(a)



I waited for him to reply but there wasn't any response from his side, maybe he wasn't online. In evening a message dropped in my inbox actually not one, there was a bunch of messages from him in a single reply. "I'm sorry that I didn't reply u in morning but it was because of my classes. What happened to your charger? When it's going to get repaired properly? Charger kaise kharab ho gaya? phir kharab ho gaya to? Mere laptop ka charger toh kabhi kharab nahi hota. 'Get well soon' a wish from Reyaansh to Kria's laptop's charger" It seemed to me as if a blast had taken place in fact my mom also never panicked so much when we break something. "Calm down boy and keep away your scientific thoughts away while you're talking to me. Pin of my charger was broken while I and my sister were fighting over it anyways you said u said u know some secrets."

"I guess you and your sister love sharing LOL and I was just kidding about the secret." a reply came from him. What the! He was joking that he knows a secret here I thought what could be that secret. "Very funny" I typed back and was sure he himself would have understood he's insane. I surely would have replied him if I would have been online then why the drama of secret. "Actually it wasn't funny I know, hmm I guess uh got too worried about your secret. Don't worry if I ever go to know something I won't share it with anyone without your confirmation. Waise koi secret hai to u can share with me like Hannah Montana, I'm good in keeping secrets."

"Stupid! you almost scared me, I thought what you got to know and I don't have any secret like Hannah Montana." I replied back settling on the bed. "Vaise kya kharab hua tha? Wire? Pin? Or internal error?" He was the future scientist so he had to ask the problem. "The pin of the charger broke?" was a simple answer to his question. I shifted here and there on the bed changing my position continuously due to which the pin of the charger loosened. In adjusting the charger I didn't reply him. "Hey? Kya hua Kria?" he asked. "Rey, charger ki pin phir se loosened. I'm trying to adjust it temporarily in my style"

"Kaise? I mean how you doing it?" he was quite curious about every technological thing. I told him not to interfere in it as he won't be able to understand the way I do things. "Ek kaam karo rehne do faltu main shock lag jayega. Let me tell you the way." In classes also he had a habit of giving expert advices so how could he leave this chance but it his help was useful. I repaired it myself with screw and tape. The next what he asked was, Is 94******** my number and it was my number but from where he got that. I had to find it out. "Yeh mera purana simcard tha, it's not with me anymore but did you call? Kahan se mila yeh number"

"No, I never called. I got this number from Science Club records and you're lying you still have this number with you." He got my number from Science Club records but no one is allowed to touch the records as privacy is assured then how he got. "It's not possible as confidentiality was assured in that club and how can you say that I'm lying." Something was fishy and I was eager to know what. "You're lying because I had called few days back and talked to you that day and I stole this number from one of your friend's slam book." I trapped him in his words and he told everything including what he said when he had called. "Dekha you yourself accepted that you had called and from where you got the number."

I had received missed calls from this number many times and instantly remembered the day I had received a call from him. Di and I were preparing pasta when I received a call from this particular unknown number. On picking it up the person who was obviously Reyaansh as it was confirmed now asked about someone in nervousness and then kept the call saying wrong number. I checked my call logs and replied him back, "Rey, is 98******** your number? I've received too many missed calls from this number. You had called on 5 April and asked about someone. When I said no, you kept the phone."

"Hey, this was quite old like a month from now. You still remember?" he asked and of course I did, I was weak in science but not stupid. "I do remember, my memory is quite sharp." I was quite curious about this particular number due to too many missed calls and once even Di asked me to call back to find out, whenever I called back to the number no response. "It means you still have the same number." I thought he would have understood by now that I still have the same number but I guess I only had to inform him. He gave a long explanation for why he called, I don't know why? I had never asked him anything to explain.



Heya guys...
I don't know whether it is making sense on not...
but I wanted it to be this way...
Plz do leave your reviews and likes...


- Love Arya




Edited by Dewdrops.ShaKun - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
res
unres..

haye dii finally u updated..

haye dii awsum update..

loved it..

haye mujhe laga hi tha esa kuch hoga when i dont reply to my frnd they do the same..

haye loved the cute chat of KriYaansh..

haye KriYaansh having each others no. awsum

haye dii ab jaldi se next part update karo..
Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Res
unres...
cute update aru...
rey bhi na,kria reply nah diya toh kuch bhi bol diya 😆
rey toh scientist nikla...
awww i soo loved their chat talks...
amazing...
loved it...
update soon 🤗
Edited by Princess_Devil - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Thnks for PM. Its awsm. I realy love it. Thnks a lot for the update. Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Finally...i dnt know tu doubtful kyu h...bt chapter came in its best possible way...dat secret part...m so proud of myself...i knew it will be like dis only...
I think its all in kria ka pov...bt it will be great if u give rey's as well...
That number thing was hilarious...nyc chappy...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Nice Update..
But kuch pata sa ni chala kya ho gya..!!
Waitng for d nxt part shyd clarify ho jaye..
Btw Jo v c Mast c.. ;)

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