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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Intersting part..
Weel abhi itna hi keh skti hun shayd rey fell in luv with kriya during science club...
But itne din himmat nahi hogi baat karne ki toh ab try karr raha h...
But manna padega sari details h uske pas kriya ki...hehehe
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Awesome update
Dono ke beech talking season tho hua
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Amazing update..
Really nice how does Rey has her Num..?!
He is too sweet..i m sure he is in love wid her..
She would know dat soon..:)
This cute chats i m loving it really..
Thanks fr pm..keep writing..:)
Update soon,.:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Ummm.. i don't know actually.. i told you about how good the first part was..
but when it comes to this chapter i found the girl confused whithin her feelings, see there are just two options : whether she likes him or she doesn't.
There were times when i wanted to slap this guy - i found his cute in chapter one.
but here, i just found him so irritating.
Like who does that? Stealing number from friends slambook *coughs*
Anyways.. aajkal ki duniya ha.. kuch bhi hosakta ha!!
chezien clear kar.. abhi toh its going above my head like bouncer.
Sometimes i find the guy so cute, and sometimes so dumb.
yet, i like this peice of work the most.! Thoda clear karde toh better hoga.
"Too much suspense won't keep the story going" - trust me when I'm saying this!!! Comes from my experience in WEEP NO MORE. believe me, people came n said to me that they won't read it.
U don't want that with ur work. Hena? Anyways.. its up to you.
See what you're going to do.
And as per now. I'm really enjoying this write up of yours! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
nyc chap...rey iz such a technical xpert...letz c how it turns out to b...do write soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
wow..this was amazing..

finally dono ka baat hogaya..

thnks a lot for the pm

update it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
NYC update...
KR chat awesome...
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
amazingg part👏
rey's charger wishes kria's charger to get well soon😆
lovingg this story😳
continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
loved it!!
great update!!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
read both the parts...its really awesome...loved their chats and convo:)
charger ke liye sisters fighting ..hehhe..
rey toh science mein masters kar chuka hai 😆
it was nice...continue soon

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