AASHLOK INTEZAAR --last part , pg-17@20JAN2104 - Page 13

Originally posted by: Neelum.drashti

Simply awesome👏...congratz for completing the ff 👍🏼

Originally posted by: pt311288

dear fatima,

loved the last part it was mixed kinda update blissful and gloomy at the same time.

now my all doubt are clear shlok has proved himself as a true partner i must say u depicted both's pov very beautifully

awsm wrk as far as i knw about u
u are a student but u still delineated this dowry problm so perfectly these kinda social problems are hampering our society and ur os has potrayed it very well

all i wud say

well done dear !!!!!

Originally posted by: maia22

Wow loved it very well written

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Anusha16

heya!!!

first of all thanks for the PM!!!

next... I seriously have no words to say... I'm literally in tears...what a beautiful story ...what a beautiful update... sad...yes but beautiful!!!

this is one of those stories very close to my heart... really thanks a lot for letting me know about this work dear...

thankyou very much!!!

love ya...🤗

Do continue to write more...

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

oh i just loved ur story

it was awesome

heart touching

for once i thought astha died

bt no she was alive thank goodness

the way u described astha suffering nd shlok turmoil was fab

nd the reason dat shlok had the defect nt astha just made me so damn pissed off on shlok parents

she suffered for no fault of hers

u r an awesome writer

thanks for this wonderful story

keep writing

Originally posted by: fiza1995

Superb ending dear.
Thanks for the pm 😊

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

wow amazing message and great job!

Originally posted by: -LECHU-

this is the one of the best short story i have read in this forum

no words to say...each and every word powerfully

conveyed astha and shlok's emotions...

the middle part,almost made me cry...

and you were right...this part held the suspense till end

only few can write like this

wonderful...just superb! 👏 👏 👏

keep writing more 😊...

Originally posted by: niki795

Awesome update
loved it
superb
ad its ending
loved the way you described both astha and shlok feelings,,,, emotions
keep writing
will be waiting for your next work
thanks for the pm
👍🏼