AASHLOK INTEZAAR --last part , pg-17@20JAN2104

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

very emotional and highlights plight of girls in some parts of the world

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Awesome..😛...thanks for the PM

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pixi_nightingal

@pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: meerab...
Very nice...love the pic

Thanks dear 😊

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pixi_nightingal

@pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: lachii
🤢y u stop?

you are cruel😭

😡pls update sooon

😆
Thanks dear 😊

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sonia

@lachii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

you said you will update soon!! how soon is soon for you yaar?

pls give us update now...

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pixi_nightingal

@pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: lachii
you said you will update soon!! how soon is soon for you yaar?
pls give us update now...

sorry dear😳

yes i know
but till now i didn't typed in MS-word, i finished writing in my note book

will update 😊

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Suri

@BlackJack.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

But since its Ashlok for me these days,... i found it most suitable on Ashlok...thanks for this awesome work...continue soon!

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pixi_nightingal

@pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: roshanii
so nice dear
but where is the rest part
u said in ur last update that it will be last part but you left us in middle
why ? why? why?
😭

so dear for not updating all

Thanks Roshanii😊

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pixi_nightingal

@pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: summaiyasayed
Awesome part

Thanks dear😊

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maivelli

@maivelli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

nice update dear
the way u depicted astha is very nice i mean during 60's women condition was like this only .
but the way u potrayed shlok is very unfair
men of 60's were orthodox and dominating typ shlok didnt possess any of this quality . and shlok is pondered as a man who truly loves his wife then why u made him so coward that he cant take stand fr his wife i mean making shlok so fragile just like astha its nt justified

i love ur wrk but feeble shlok nt seems gud.