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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Very emotional part..how could geet bro do that..he is a very nice guy and did not give any chance for him to explain😭😭hope geets marriage info was not true...and geet in his house😕😕..pls pls cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
part 6
awesome...
why did Armaan do that?
poor Maan and Geet...
cont soon dear...

PS - can u plz post the link in this thread when u update?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: spvd

part 6
awesome...
why did Armaan do that?
poor Maan and Geet...
cont soon dear...

PS - can u plz post the link in this thread when u update?
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i'm sos sorry deepa.. i know u have asked me many times to post the link when i update..
but as i'm not a writer i forget the usual things like PMs and posting the links...😆

next time pakka i'll post...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
OMG!! You didnt tell us you are a writer I am angry with u😡 Anyways i will talk about this later😳

Come to the story
it is nice simply beautiful story and i am liking the pace of the story but next try to eloborate more about Maan n Geet pain after their last meeting.
Waiting for next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: _MGArti_

OMG!! You didnt tell us you are a writer I am angry with u😡 Anyways i will talk about this later😳

Come to the story
it is nice simply beautiful story and i am liking the pace of the story but next try to eloborate more about Maan n Geet pain after their last meeting.
Waiting for next part.

OMG 😲. u read it and praised it.😲

ok ok i forgot that i have written this story..😆😆 i ll update it soon. may be this or next sunday. depends on my net connection.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

P.S.- Dedicated to goldmoon. i was surprised to see ur two 'waiting for the update' comment. really shocked to know tat someone is waiting for this story.


PART 7


What what...

Bhai, OMG bhai. Annie hugged him tightly. after few seconds he could hear her sobbing. He patted her on her head.

I'm fine Kiddo.

That we can see very well Doctor Maan Singh Khurana. Came Heer's voice. Then he saw all of them were there. Armaan- Ridhimaa, Abhi bhaiya with Nikki Bhabhi with their kid, Prem and Heer and arjun. Most of them were glaring at him but for different reasons.

Prem was first to come forward and punched him. "one from my side also", came Heer's voice.

Maan looked at her with a smile. "Prem, look at ur wife. I swear tujhe bhooto se dar lagne band ho jayega." Maan chuckled. Well it didn't go down well with the one he was commenting about. Prem has just punched him once but Heer punched him on behalf of everyone.

"Kamine bacha mujhe apni biwi se. Saale ye Tyson ki aulaad mujhe aaj hi swarg pahucha degi." Maan was shouting while running away from Heer.

" u deserve this." Prem shrugged. " and please, swarg ke sapne dekhna chod de. Tujhe to Narak hi milne wala h" Heer added.

Maan and Heer were just running around others. Except three everyone was smiling.

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It was night time. Everyone had dinner. They were walking on the beach. There was silence. Everyone was occupied in their own thoughts. Maan could not understand why Geet was there. He was damn confused. Geet was supposed to be married three weeks before. But she is not luking like a newly married bride. She was wearing anything which can show that she is married. but In this situation of confusion, he was feeling calm in his heart first time after that incident.

"wondering about her situation?"He saw Ridhimaa luking at him questioningly. "why didn't u come there at the wedding, Maan?"

Maan looked away from her "as if u don't know anything."

Ridhimaa sighed loudly, " i wish u wud have been there. Today u would have been coming from your Honeymoon trip."

Maan looked at her with shock.

"the guy was Shinghaniya's relative. They just wanted to take revenge from us. But we came to know this on the day itself and broke the marriage. If u would have been there, i'm sure Abhi bhaiya would have asked you to get married to Geet." Ridhimaa cleared the confusion.

"I don't think so. Armaan would never allow this."

"Do u think so?

Geet has lost her smile the day you left her. She is bearing so much pain that she has become immune to any pain other than this. You know that day when her marriage was broken she neither smiled nor cried. I have not seen any emotion on her face since long. She has been brought up like a princess. Her brothers have fulfilled her every wish. But since last 2 years they have done many things to bring her smile back. But they failed Maan. They failed. She has stopped talking, smiling, crying. She just sit at one place and keep looking at nothing. She is lost. Just like a breathing statue. It pains me to see her like this. Please bring her back maan please. It's a request. Please." Ridhimaa pleaded desperately.

Maan was trying to control his rage and his tears. He was angry on him and on Armaan. Why didn't he tried once. Why Armaan behaved with him in that manner. why he just let him do whatever he wanted. He would have tried once more. He just ran away like a looser leaving behind her a living dead body.

"Armaan's issue is something else, Maan. it is not just about Geet."

"What do you mean by that?"

"He started having issue with you since Papa broke the news that he wanted me to marry you not Armaan. He started feeling jealous. He started feeling inferiority complex. But that one feeling of having a family, having a brother, sister, sister-in-law was one that keep him from hating you. It was like having a competition and him winning by this one point. When he saw you hugging Geet and saying those words, the reaction he gave was coming from a brother. I thought that he would accept your relationship after cooling down but this thing kept him away from accepting it."

Maan was shocked, " u are mistaken Ridhimaa."

"Oh come on, Maan. U don't know him more than me. I have known him since childhood. I tried to put sense in him. That's when I got to know this. Well he got what he deserved. Apni jealousy and competition ke chakkar me Geet kho ho diya. He lost her forever."

Maan was too shocked to react. He was feeling like a deceived person. He didn't know how to react. He has put Armaan, his friendship before every damn thing, before his love, his life. And all he got is this. Jealousy, hate and competition. he just went away.

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Armaan was looking at Geet, regretting his deeds. Geet was always like a daughter to him. He has looked after her since childhood. He has started loving Ridhimaa just because Ridhimaa was Geet's best friend. He knew it that if there is a girl who will love Geet like an elder sister or best friend after marriage that will be Ridhimaa. Everything was going smooth. Then came Maan, Maan Singh Khurana- His best friend.


P.S. i know this is just blaawww. But well. I'm not a gud writer. gonna finish this soon. When i started it, i had many ideas to write and when i wrote this, i was lost. I'm confused now. So trying to finish it as soon as possible.

Edited by mannu_minnie - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
why this????
well i m feeling happy tat somebody commented here.🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
amazing part..welcome back..so sad to see geet like this yaar..hope maan can bring back his old geet soon..pls pls cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

amazing part..welcome back..so sad to see geet like this yaar..hope maan can bring back his old geet soon..pls pls cont soon..

thank u ji..

i will try to update soon.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
awesome update...
sad to see geet like this...
all this armaan's jealous...

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