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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj



haa saddie saddie...
na baba itna sad mat hona..

discontinued for a while.. studies + job.. after nov i can restart it.. just hope i'll be able to get some motivation to do that..😊

Ok I understand, will wait😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Susegad

Ok I understand, will wait😃



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj



time ki kami "sigh"..
will try aftter my exmas..😊

ohh okk
understand dear...😊
all the best for exams😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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well i'm starting it again..
hopefully finish it before vanishing again...
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Part 3

Third year has started. All five were gud friends. Armaan and Prem still trying to woo the girls directly and indirectly. Maan continued with his coaching classes. Annie took admission in engineering college in Delhi only. She used to meet maan in his college. Prem who never had any sister started loving her as a sister. It was first time he was pampering a girl as his sister.

But one day a curious thing happened Maan got strange letter.


It happened first time when he forgot his notebook in his coaching class. He thought he lost it but he found it next day. A letter fell down.


Hello Maan sir,

Do u know what u r. what are u doing here in this tiny miny khatara institue.. don't u know u r a bollywood material. dole sole.. u can give comptition to any bollywood hero. anyways u are here. it's gud for us. u r the best teacher in this coaching. Since when I fell for u i don't know.

I hated biology. But this is first time in my life, I'm loving biology just because u teach this subject. I never wanted to be a doctor. But now i want. Just for u.

P.S. ' u r very hot..

Urs and only Urs

future.mrs.msk


Not again Maan thought.. every year he got these prank letters.. he doesn't know why him and that also every year.. he has caught the girls earlier and warned them not to do these things. And they had obeyed because his anger was very infamous in the institute.. he was the youngest teacher there but still his angry avatar was impossible to handle..

He gave a surprise test to the students next day. The plan was to caught the person by recognising the writing. Finally he found the paper with same handwriting...

Geet Mallik Intro

Geet Mallik is a fun loving, very pampered and golu-molu girl . She is beautiful, cute like teddy, and very innocent girl. She is pampered by everyone near her. Geet has many friends but not best friends as girls wanted to use to go near her brother rather than be a good friend except one, Ridhima gupta, her brother's love interest and her future bhabhi. In fact their friendship started with that intention only. But after Ridhimaa's admission in AIIMS, she was not in contact with her. She just got to know about her from her brother.

Edited by mannubhardwaj - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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a short update..
will try to update at weekends...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful update..maan angry young teacher😉😉..pls cont soon..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome story
loved it
plz add me to ur pm list
pm me too when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 4


Maan found the paper but there was no name. Then he saw that there are so many such papers which donot have any name on them. GREAT!! Now first attempt failed. FINE. He will find out the girl. Next one month he used to check other subjects paper also just to find the name. He is getting regular letter from that person with all flirtious adjectives added with his name.


One he saw a boy putting the letter in his locker. He was shocked. Is it a boy? No no this can't be possible. He caught the boy and asked about the letter. The boy was scared due to maan's anger. Maan took him to his locker and opened it to find the paper with some problems. Then he remembered that he himself has asked the students to write their queries and put them in his locker. He just said to the boy and let him go. He was angry on himself now. How can he loose his focus and just concentrate on this idiotic person. He started ignoring the letter and even stopped his efforts to find the culprit. He even changed the batch for some peace.


He was going to meet Annie one day when he saw Armaan coming with a girl. She seemed familiar to him. He has seen her but where he cud not remember.

Hey Ka... Maan, meet my sweetheart, my life, my little teddy, my sis Geet. Armaan introduced the girl. Maan grinned at Armaan. He know what word he was going to use but seem to avoid the word in presence of his sister. He acknowledged geet with a curt nod.

BTW where are u going?

Going to meet Annie. Exams and practicals will be starting from next weekend. It will be difficult to get time. Maan replied.

Ohk. Chal see u at dinner.

Armaan took geet to the canteen where she met Ridhimaa. Armaan left from there because he knows that these two never let him sit with them and will irritate and avoid him.

Geet and Ridhimaa were so happy to meet after so many years. And then started the sessions of gossips.

Maan met annie at her college canteen. Of course she was trying to hide something but he caught the lie which he was sure about them even before the start of college. He was just trying to catch them red handed. He almost did that but then came some foolish friends of The Arjun Rathod trying to stop Maan at gate and thus giving time to those two fools to hide their lies. Idiots!!

Maan sat infront of Annie and just stared for few minutes.

Hide and seek game with me. Bahut urana ho gaya hai. I know he is here.

So what are u going to do.Someone from behind asked Maan. Here comes his arch enemy Arjun Rathod. Annie was getting irritated with their petty fights. This was the only reason she was not telling maan about Arjun. Their parents were best friends but these two are nowhere near the word friends. They cud not stand with each other. For maan it was arjun's ego. For Arjun it was "The Superman Maan Singh Khuara" who can do everything and whom his parents adored completely. They both were glaring at each other.

Bhai please let it go. I'm tired of ur fights. I love u and i seriously don't want any fight. Annie was getting frustrated with their glares.

Let's eat something. I'm famished. Maan changed the topic. He doesn't want to repeat the previous meeting where they had a verbal duel 3 years before. And the result was Annie didn't speak to any of them for 2 weeks.

*****

The coaching batch has ended long back. But the letters were still coming to maan.

After the end of the batch, first time in the first letter the girl admitted that in the starting it was a prank. But slowly slowly she has fallen for him completely. She is so much in love with him.

This was weird. Maan was alien to this type of thing. He can flirt easily but love was a strange feeling for him. He started getting these love letter once in a week. This was the first secret he kept with himself.

Finally their MBBS was complete. But all 5 of them took admission in MS. Prem's brother talked to heer's parents. They agreed. Finally Prem and Heer got engaged. The engagement was fun. Maan has inceased his teasings now.


In Ridhimaa and armaan's love story. Dr. Gupta was behaving like a typical Dad. Everyone was ready except him. He wanted maan as his son-in-law as for him Armaan was very careless not bothered about anything except himself. Maan was feeling guilty. He went to ridhimaa's place and talked to her father that how much Armaan loves Ridhimaa no one else can love her that much. She will be happy. He also showed him being a doctor, armaan can't be careless. He is a very responsible and sensitive person. With this Dr. Gupta agreed for their marriage. So maan's all 4 friends settled in life even before completing their studies.


After their studies prem and heer went back to Dehradun, but remain in contact through letters.


On other side annie and arjun's course was complete. they got job in banglore. Maan wanted them to get married before leaving. It was a small functions with friends as none of maan's and arjun's relatives cared abt them.


Maan, Armaan and ridhimaa also went back to Bhopal where Armaan and Ridhimaa started their own Clinic.


Maan wanted to go for Phd in medicines. He was waiting for some results which were to come after 3 months. He got a job in a hospital but it was a night job. And yes he was still getting those letters even after shifting to Bhopal. Now he was damn curious about this girl.

Another Filler. Now i think maneet's story will start. Don't put too much logic here. I am trying my best. Please bear with me.

And yes press like if u read this. I going to finish it whatever happens. Can't leave my work pending.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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read updates...

very interesting...

is it Geet the girl who is sending letters...Geet ke siwa aur kaun ho sakti hai because from her brother she can easily know where Maan lives... but according to u Geet is very sweet girl so I am confused...

waiting for next part...

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