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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ameres

Beautiful update Athira!


Really the pics and the song added such a nice touch to the whole update. Really good selection and perfect blending. Sigh...in AP land right now. 😍

Aw...you will be ending soon? Sad. But really looking forward to the next one. Cant wait for more cute AP updates. :)



I am very happy that I could bring you to the PhAb dream land...😊 Ya have to end na? I am also bit busy these days... Next update will be a bit late... Since I wont be in station for the next two days... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fa-ameer

ATHIRA... U AR ROCKING ON THE FORUM....BEAUTIFUL... 👏 pictures and song just perfect, loved all ur amazing words thanks alot fr giving us this sweet treat...😃



Thank you... 😃 So sweet... Thanks tho I should have to tell to u all for giving me this much of support with out that I cannot write a single word... You all are here to read and comment and support that is why I am writing my FF...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Athira😊 Fantastic update as usual👏 Well-done sis and keep it up!🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
HAYII THIS IS BEAUTIFUL AAHAA...REALLY NICE... THAKS FOR GIVING US SOME GREAT WRITINGS..👍🏼.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mula6484

Hi Athira😊 Fantastic update as usual👏 Well-done sis and keep it up!🤗



Thanks, for hearing me and commenting... 😉 😃 So I am going to post the last part...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PuvaniPillip

HAYII THIS IS BEAUTIFUL AAHAA...REALLY NICE... THAKS FOR GIVING US SOME GREAT WRITINGS..👍🏼.



Thank you so much Puvani... In fact I have to thank each and every one for this much of support....😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

13. Some unexpected guests.

Abhay stopped the car in front of their old house, to make phulwa sit with a wide opened mouth. They reached there at early morning.

"Abhay" Phulwa called him in a grief bounded voice.

"Yes Phulwa we are here in our home... which we left before four years, When I met you I wanted to came here back. I was never here after that incident. But with you I have a great confidence to step into it, to inhale the old familiar fragrance. Surjay used to be here to done the cleaning."

They two walked all the rooms to met with the old memories of them. Two were tired a lot with the travel. They decided to settle down at Abhay's room. Both get fresh up and went to bed, to fall in a deep sleep.

It was Phulwa who wake up first, to see she was lying with her head resting on Abhay's hand, which is wrapping her in it. She just looks up to get a good sight of Abhay sleeping peacefully. Then she slowly ran her hands through his thick black hair which has got small tints of red in it. She sits up without disturbing his sleep then leaned to give him a small kiss on his forehead and went to take a good bath.

Roshniji and Gouri filled her bag with some very good saries. She chooses one with rose colour. (She is obsessed to rose). When she came out from the bath room, abhay was already wake up and nowhere to see. He may be gone down. She moved to the dressing table and looked herself at the mirror. She saw a figure behind her looking deep into her eyes


'Abhay"



She gestured a 'what' at him. He shake his head indicating nothing. He slowly hit Phulwa's head with his, making her smile in shyness.



"I was just admiring the beauty which belongs to me only." He said in a slow husky voice.

"Ap bhina, come on, now let me do what I was about to do and we have to go out to get some vegetables and all, if you wanted to eat something."

Chod dhoon? Abhay asked, his eyes full of a new trill, which Phulwa seems to be hard to handle.

"don't be a child Abhay, let me go". Phulwa said in an authorised voice.

"Ok, go"Abhay allowed her to leave, just by standing away from her, taking his hands from her.

Phulwa felt a little disappointed, but she hides it in her smile and about to move. Then Abhay hold her from the back. Phulwa was never expecting such a move from him, which make her lost her balance and the two fall on the bed. Phulwa fall just above Abhay and she slide down from him lying next to him, with a puzzled look. Abhay looked down at her, his head resting on the palm.




Phulwa felt it too hard to handle the intense gaze of her Abhay, whom she knows from the childhood, with whom she brought up, looking at his face she used to start the mornings and ends the day. Now she felt it very hard to look up at him?... She faced almost all feelings of Abhay, extremely happy Abhay, sad Abhay, disappointed Abhay, angry Abhay, teasing Abhay... and she was/is too good in handling him at any of his avatars, but this one... it is even hard for her to stand along with his this one.

He looked at her, understanding each every feeling, thoughts in her mind at that moment. He slowly passed his hands through her face pampering each part of her face, her eyes in which he could find the piece of the entire world, her cheeks which are the favourite place for his hands, and her lips which he always wanted to arrest with his.

Phulwa felt a sudden rush of blood through her body, a sudden flash of pain went through her spins. She breaks their eye contact and moved up from the bed and moved fast towards the door.

"Phulwa"

A voice ceased her from further movement. She looked back at Abhay seeing him offering her the comforts of the world in his hands, the destiny of her mind. Phulwa walked back to him with more confident and rigid steps.

While finding herself under the warmth of Abhay, Phulwa felt as the safest person of the world, she was not thinking about the past nor about the present or future. She was there at that moment in the hands of that man who only can give the happiness of her life and who only can give her the sorrow of a life time.

"Abhay," She called him with a shaking voice, unable to hold the overwhelming feelings inside her.


"Hmmm" He replayed to her call; she could understand that he was also in the same state of mind. She tightens her hug as she wanted to give him an emotional support.





Abhay felt her hold strengthens around him. He knows she understand his mind... He was missing this comfort from the last four years someone who can understand him before he says a word. He was missing this support, with which he can conquer anything. His mind is now full of piece, happiness and also a feeling to which even he cannot name. He could die at this moment in the hands of Phulwa since he was now complete in any sense. He was holding the beauty and piece of his life in his hands; he needed nothing more in the life... His face was filled with a special satisfaction.





He slowly took Phulwa from his shoulder; her eyes twinkled with the love of Abhay. He slowly placed small kisses on her two eyes, in which he can see only his image, moving down to her nose, her cheeks. Then he slowly cupped her face in his hands, looking deep into the eyes of phulwa seeking permission for something.

Phulwa was already blushed with the thought of where he can go now. She slowly closed her eyes and give a silent permission to him. He leaned slowly to her constantly looking at her eyes and lips alternatively. Phulwa's heart was beating in a pace, which she felt will stop in a while if it goes at that rate. She could sense the increasing warmth of Abhay's respiring air as he comes close to her. Her hands tighten its grip in the Abhay's hair.


Abhay was few centimetres away from his destiny when they both were waken up from the trance they were enjoying for the last few minutes by some huge noise. Both looked at each other in confusion and moved down to face with the man whom they two hated with whole their mind. The entire feelings inside them walk past to fill the place with anger and hatred.

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Takur Dharoga Singh's evil eyes shines in a special light as he saw the face of Phulwa , his facial muscles contracted in a manner that can make every one shiver in fear but not Abhay and Phulwa. They moved to him with solid steps to face anything on their path, with the company of each other they are stronger. Abhay moved front shielding Phulwa with him. Phulwa hold him by the hand and walked along with him. They took their own time to walk towards Takur.

" What did you two felt can escape from me?"

"Any how we are very happy Takur you come by yourself to us"

"Ha ha, still have this much of confidence? Hmmm very good but remember you two are alone having nothing in you hands but I am here with all my people."

"We two are more than enough for you Takur"

"Are you remembering, that night when you two lost all you have? If I can do that and can live as nothing happened I can kill you two and can bury inside this house."

"Abiut which night you are talking Takur? Abhay asked him making Phulwa puzzled.

"You forgot the night in which your family was decided to escape from me then caught in an accident? I was, I was behind that I killed your entire family." Takur said with a proud.

"Oh is that so? I don't know that." Said Abhay in a sarcastic tone.

"Oh ya it is true, and in fact I am decided the same fate for you two also, it was good that the night you were all discussing Kullubhusion was there and he saw Phulwa and came to me telling you two alone went somewhere. I took a little time to locate the place so is late, but no problem now I am here and will complete my job without a mistake this time."

"But you made the mistake at the time you decided to be here Mr. Daroga Singh." Bhavani entered there with all.

Their entry at that time surprised even Phulwa and Abhay, How could they came to know?

"The time Kullubhusion was walking away from the home, after your departure, I have a call came and I moved a bit away from the crowd seeing him walking away from the place in hurry. I could easily figure out that he had heard and see all will counter act. So I went back and we all were confidentially following them from that time" explained Arjun to Phulwa and Abhay.

"Now what you think Takur? This time the destiny is going to pay back you." Said Phulwa

"Takur never failed and will not fail at all, He gave a devilish smile and pointed his gun towards her, his hands were already in the trigger. But the gun dropped from his hands before he could do anything.

"We are all here Takur to take care of the law." The police inspector entered, with his gun pointed to Takur and was successful in aiming at his hands to drop the gun.

"Now you just doom in the hands of law Takur" Abhay said.

Takur leaned to Abhay and said with a sarcastic smile "Laws are made for escaping dear... I will be back".

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Takur's trial went for about one month. Takur was arrested with in the case of murder attempt, then Abhay and Phulwa produced proves against him in many other cases also especially in the murder of their family, the most important among them was the self confirmation of Takur which was taped by Abhay on the day Takur came to their home to kill Phulwa, that was why he asked Takur to explain about the night. Takur has no ways to escape from the judiciary. He lost his MLA position as well as his party membership. He was punished by death.

Takur looked calm after the decision like nothing is happened to him. Abhay and Phulwa were standing on the way, Takur saw them.

"I will be back in any ways, anyhow, and Phulwa wait for your death" He said with cruel eyes.

Abhay neglected him and hold Phulwa by shoulder and walk away. Takur stood some more time there to watch them moving away from him. He then directed by the police to the jeep. Abhay and Phulwa stood at the end of the corridor looking at Takur entering the jeep. Today they succeeded in getting the justice for their family.

It was happened suddenly. Kullubhusion entered into the scene with a few cars full of armed people and they all come out of the cars shooting into the sky. Kullubhusion dropped a tear bomb into the police jeep successful in making the Takur release from the police custody. Takur snatched one gun from one of them and started running towards the direction to where Abhay and Phulwa were gone.

They saw him running towards them. Abhay look at Phulwa to get permission from her, both of them deserves to punish him because both of them lost a lot because of him... Abhay slowly placed his hands on his pistol. Phulwa slowly run her hands through his shoulders as she was giving support to him to do it, may be God want them to do. Abhay extended his gun to the running figure of Takur, Phulwa standing behind him holding his shoulder. He once again looked in the eyes of Phulwa, which were shining with the tears, before he shoot at Takur. He shoots three times to him. The faces of their family flashing on their minds, the four long years of depression and loneliness flashing on their mind and all those innocent faces which were suffered under him came to their mind. Takur fall in to the floor. Abhay and Phulwa closed their eyes in satisfaction, tears rolling down from their eyes. Phulwa placed her head on Abhay's shoulder she was standing behind him. Abhay arrested the head of Phulwa with his. The people came to the scene then, all looked at the died figure of Takur. Kullubhusion was arrested for his deeds.

"Never wanted to go against the law, but he forced to do that". Abhay told while dropping his gun to the hands of Bhavani.

"You did nothing Abhay as a cope it was your duty to punish the one was trying to escape from the law and as a better half it was your duty to rescue your other half from all the dangers. As a son it was duty to show the correct place to the person who once destroyed all your family. So calm down."

Abhay felt a little uplifted. He felt he was right. It was just his duty, to save the law.. by killing a person like him he just done his duty... also Takur was not a less criminal than those all goons whom he finished in encounters. *************************************************************

It was months after the death of Takur. The two houses were in full charm, the wedding of Abhay and Phulwa. This time also the ladki wale is the ladke wale also. Two houses are fully lighted up... all are happy. Once again the life and happiness entered into the two houses. The ceremony was great.. not with the luxuries but with the love and happiness. So the two people who were together by the eternal bond were tied into the relation in the worldly manner.

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Phulwa was standing near the window while Abhay entered into the room. He came and stand near her. Both looked up to met with the stars which are twinkling looking down at them... Where ever they go they were just looking at us and are happy in our happiness' Phulwa said placing her head on the shoulder of Abhay. Abhay nodded. A small smile in their lips.



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So here we ends... Thank you to all for the patience you all show with my writing... the last part I think a bit fast... Pls pardon me if you all felt I just skipped many things... point out it if any... Thanks to all here for the likes and comments... Also to all silent readers for reading my post and if it makes you all happy I am satisfied. Thanks to all once again, for the pics thanks to Gagan and Mula...


Once more my hearfull of thanks to all,,,,,,😃


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Edited by thiku - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏👏👏CONGRATULATION👏👏 Beautiful ...great story, romantic on its best. very good end. please don't stop fm this. your words has become a part of my day...
Edited by khaira48 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
He leaned slowly to her constantly looking at her eyes and lips alternatively.Athira,,,,excellent excellent writing...and honestly i LOVE the way u use the pics...simply amazing...and the line I quoted...😊Abhay was scared maybe so he was constantly looking at her eyes ...jst to make sure she doesnt open her yes and glare at him...and u didnt let them kiss...*naughty girl*...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏simply superb wonderful writing dear. loved all the romance and words that discover all the emotions. pics adding more beauty for the words. PhAb last pic was👍🏼 my favorite.
Edited by akeash - 13 years ago

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