AP Valentines' Day SS - Chapter 5 (The end)updated - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you so so much for your comments all of you:DD🤗
Yay I take this as a positive sign and will hence upload the 4th part tonight. Waise bhi I'm super super super happy about the episode today, FINALLY they've moved away from the rona-dhona and they've given us back our dacoitrani. A dacoitrani that I'm sure even Abhay is quite proud of😆

Maham: Wowee your comments really touched my heart, I'm really glad you enjoyed it:))
@Phulwa - Yupp! She's not one to just sit and hope and wait, as we've seen, jab zaroorat she'll do whatever she can to get her way!:D
And nooo, I think you're quite on the dot, I really like to see my guilty Abhay too, because he would really go to great extents to repair them:D And hehe now that Phulwa has told him it's wrong of him to keep ignoring her...just keep on reading😉

Mimi: Hayee kaisa experience beta, I'm only 18😆 Jo bhi experience hain toh saab just borrowing words and ideas (and ahem scenarios) from books, movies etc...lol.😆
The number of times you've written about your desire to see jealous Abhay, well I guess I can only say you'd probably like what I'll post up next😉

Anu: Yesss! Bhooke sher on his way I say!😆 Truly yaar, they share such a happening relationship, they've always got so much to say between themselves, the spoken and unspoken words:))
The best part is they're usually travelling along the same wavelength hence they usually understand what the other person's thinking too:)

Aroojm: Thank you so much, it means so much to me!:))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Alrighty, so here's the 4th part. I'd just like to make a statement before it begins, that this next part is rather different from the first 3. There's less description, less talking and really more action and passion etc going on here. Waaayyy more intense than the end of the 3rd part. And

Basically, read on at your own caution!😆

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Part 4:

Her eyes lit up. His words could only make her wonder - since when? How could it be that she was the one trying to bring it forward yet he was the one feeling the pain of not being able to do so? As his hot breath danced over the nape of her neck, she instinctively clutched onto his right hand for the support she needed to overcome her sudden dizziness.

A playful thought entered her mind as she suddenly let go of his hand and moved away, running further into the room. Abhay momentarily lost his balance and had to lean on the door to stop himself from falling. Seeing his clumsiness Phulwa started to laugh softly, aggravating him even further.

"That's it", he growled in decisive anger, causing Phulwa to stop laughing. Before she could react he had caught up to her and their faces were inches away. She moved back with a hint of fear, with full knowledge that anger on Abhay's face was never a good sign. He forcefully shoved her against the bathroom, effectively jarring it open causing them to crash into the shower and water to rain upon them.

The sudden gush of water had momentarily blinded Phulwa as she blinked the drops of water away. As the taps stopped sprinkling, she looked up to find his lustful eyes staring at hers hungrily, desire burning within them. He inched closer to her heaving chest and she took in gulps of air to steady herself. His hands started moving down from her shoulders, to her arms and tracing over the silhouette of her every curve. His gentle yet titillating touch sent shivers down her spines and she found herself ever more drawn to his alluring gaze upon her.

He rested his left hand on the side of her waist and brought his right hand up to the side of her neck, pulling her closer to him almost into a hug. As she lifted up her arms to hug him back, he suddenly brought the aachal of her saree down and dropped it onto the floor, leaving her chest bare. Her eyes grew wider in bewilderment as he continued to unwrap the long cloth she had used to adorn herself that night. Her hands clenched into tight fists as she looked away from him, unable to face the unfazed smirk he had drawn upon his mouth.

He threw the cloth to one side, leaving her shivering in her skimpy blouse and petticoat. Watching her shiver softened his face into a more caring smile, as he bent down to pick her up. She finally opened up her eyes and met his enlightened smile that spoke volumes of the husband who had picked up her countless number of times before. He cradled her in his arms, walking out of the wet bathroom stall before finally dropping her on the bed.

Before she could get up, he dropped down on top of her, his hands next to her face and the tip of his nose barely touching hers. He moved his face to the left and his lips started leaving a trail of kisses from the corner of her eye all the way down to her lips. Pausing just before them, he used his tongue to trace over them, parting them and teasing her out.

The taste of his lips was unbearably delicious and she let her lips part to enjoy the moment longer. Yet just before she could kiss him back, he lifted his head back up - softly laughing at the apparent anguish etched all over her face.

As she lifted her hand to trace the dimples his face held, the smile vanished from his lips once more, this time replaced with a mischievously smug expression. Moving down to her face, his lips once more brushed over her earlobes. Using his bare teeth he removed her left earring and nibbled on her ear, making her giggle in boundless delight. Looking up at her face, he gave her another wink before doing the same with her right earring. Yet as he moved down to her shoulder once more, her skin was singed by the mere caress of his lips again.

Feeling bolder, he mock-bit her shoulder, leaving a faint impression of his bite-mark behind. Phulwa bit her lower lip and breathed in deeply - she knew she couldn't stop the sher within him any longer.

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Abhay looked back up at her face, mixed in pleasure and giddy delight yet tinged with a hint of fear. He simply whispered rather provocatively in her, "Aaj tumpar khud ka haq jaamaliya. Aagar chaho toh hum tumhe yahin chor sakte hain; kyunki iske baad aur koi raham nahin milega"

His words brought a delicious smile upon her lips as she stared directly into his eyes and retorted, brimming with confidence and authority, "Ek dakayt ko darana bhi itna asaan nahin hain Abhay sahab, khud mein dam hain toh muqabla ki jiye!"

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I dont have words...cannot speak...need time to recover😉 vita👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was...uh..I- *thud*

O.M.G. AAAHHH!!! That was MINDBLOWING!! 👏👏👏

UFFF! Your words sent a shiver down my back. Ohh my heart is racing just reading it!

Oh GODDD! If the sadu Abhay wasnt enough you made them wet? That too under the shower?! UFF! *blush&giggle*

@Unwrapping- Did the temperatures just rise or what? Oh my God! that was unbelievable! Phulwa ko chodo mujhe kuch hojaye ga while imagining it! EEekkksss! ☺️

@Dropped on her & lips- And i dropped down! AAhhh! Are you planning to kill me? That part was like ahem...just like i always wanted. *blush&giggle more*

kyunki iske baad aur koi raham nahin milega

Oh Goddd! Abhay jee kya irade hai? Not good i can see that lol.

But seriously i'm like...no words. That was straight out of some romance novel balke usse bhi better! Your words screamed PASSION! Their strong desire and the sexual tension almost tangible. And not only that but the way you captured their unique personalities and presented them here with the romance...highlighting all the aspects of their relation as well...just PERFECTTT!!
Honestly you made my skin tingle and made me all those forbidden emotions. *giggle&blush uncontrollably*

I'm in PhAb land right now with all those oh so sexy images. ☺️
So a big thank you for writing it and making me go gaga over them. ;)
Edited by Ameres - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Vita...I really dont know how u do it...such use of language such clarity and yet so much in charecter...I mean its jst👏👏
I could imagine the whole scene and honestly like anu said dont know abt Phulwa bt I was to completly gone ...more so after crushing inside the bathroom😳😳
And Abhay misleading Phulwa thinking that he is about to hug her...and what he does instead😳😳...so typical of Abhay...love the taking off the earings with his bare teeth...hai hai thats raw passion talking😉😉😉...and the way he changes from being angry to sexy to naughty to caring and back to sexy is amazing😃😃...Vita u r excellent...u should b a writer...and the dialogues at the end..too good...so Abhay was actually thinking of stopping it there...LIAR😛😛...Phulwa should have jst teased him by saying that ...yes i think u r rite enough fr today will cont later...then Abhay would have begged her to let him continue😊...but the sad part is that only ONE part of your writing is left😭😭
A BIG thank u fr bringing my Sadu patidharamand jealous Abhay back and in STYLE😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue soon, its so good :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG OMG I LOVED IT😊 it was just amazing i have noo words to describe it.. you did an amazing job and the way you described the whole scene was just amazing... can't wait for the next part .. eagerly waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow, wow, wow! As usual, you have rendered me completely speechless, really Vita, how do you do it?!

Such a gorgeously sexy scene, it was like all our dreams coming true, and you included a shower scene, hot, hot, hot! Plus Phulwa bringing our her dacoitrani side at the very end...this couple and your imagination combined will be the death of me!

Can't wait to see what you have in store for us after this, this one set the bar really high, so super excited for the next one :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great piece of writing as usual😊 U have a flair in your writing which i love. Thx for the heart stopping moments u give us😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you all so much for your wonderful comments!:DD
Without further ado, here's the last part to my SS, really glad to have written it and just a disclaimer before all else, it's much much more sizzling than all that you've read up ahead!😉
Enjoy!

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Part 5:

With that Phulwa threw his arms off of her and made a rash attempt to get off the bed. But Abhay wasn't one to give up and managed to hold onto her ankle before she could move off. Phulwa lay giggling on the bed, as Abhay laughed along to its sweet melody. She sat up and watched him carefully remove the payal he had gifted her barely a week ago. Kissing both her pretty feet his fingers traced along her legs, moving up as she threw her head back and inhaled deeply - the blood rushing through her veins and once more flushing into her cheeks.

Abhay stopped just below her knees, giving her a quick kiss on the lips. With that he moved down her neck to below her chest, his hot breath leaving her in pieces. His fingers then lightly caressed all the way to her navel and stopped there. He sat up with a start, leaving Phulwa bewildered. Without a warning he picked up both her arms and hit them against one another - leaving a rain of glass bangles shattering into countless pieces that landed all over her and the rest of the bed.

Phulwa brought her right arm back up to shield her face, unable to understand what was going on in Abhay's mind. Pieces of her bangles had landed on her stomach and he bent down to pick them one-by-one with his teeth, leaving a kiss every time. Combined with the scratches left on her arm, Phulwa's face was a cross between pain and pleasure - her heartbeat quickening with his every touch.

He slowly removed her arm from her face and cupped it in his hands, calling out softly, "Phulwa". Her chest stops heaving and she looks up to see his sweet smile beaming upon her. She slowly gets up as they sit kneeling across each other, taking in one another's face in its entirety. He picks up both her arms and starts to kiss away every scratch he had left while she simply smiled at his sweet gesture. Seeing her drop her guard, he licked one of her scratches and bit it - leaving her once again boiling in desire.

This time, she growled at him threateningly, "Ek dakayt ki saath aisa maaza bohot bhari parte hain, police sahab."

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Abhay looked up, a little amused and a little surprised at the same time. She moves her head down to his chest, and with her bare teeth, ripped off the first button on the maroon shirt that was stuck to him. His eyes grew wider as he marvelled at the sudden josh that had gripped her.

Looking back at him, her eyes glaring straight into his, she ripped off the rest of the buttons with brute force, giving him a great shock that had him almost falling back. Her left arm grabbed onto his right shoulder to steady him, as her right hand traced from its way down from his chest to just above his belt.

Standing up on her knees, she grabbed a fistul of his hair and yanked up his head to look at her, her hair draping the sides of his face. His face was filled with shock, amazement and a tinge of curiousty while hers hid a craftly smile under an unforgiving gaze.

Moving her lips down, she finally managed to get a taste of his lips that she was suddenly addicted to - reminding him once again why he had made the decision to challenge her.

His hands wrapped around her waise as he lowered her onto the bed once more - a medley of love, romance and passion dancing about them.

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THE END!:D

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