AP Valentines' Day SS - Chapter 5 (The end)updated - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh God! Oh God! Oh GODDD! I'm really speechless this time. I have read it five times but still no words how to describe what I'm feeling. It was beyond what I have ever imagined about PhAb.
Just AMAZINGLY FANTABOLOUSLY AWESOME!! 👏👏👏

Ok that may not make sense but I'm just...AAAHHH! I LOVED it so much! :D

Abhay's romance is like him- hatke. Uff the bittersweet passion is leaving me breathless.
Pieces of her bangles had landed on her stomach and he bent down to pick them one-by-one with his teeth, leaving a kiss every time.
He picks up both her arms and starts to kiss away every scratch he had left while she simply smiled at his sweet gesture. Seeing her drop her guard, he licked one of her scratches and bit it -
UFFF!! The above lines are whirling in mind and i cant think straight! ☺️☺️

Jungli Billi on the lose! And how i love it. Absolutely wonderful.

as her right hand traced from its way down from his chest to just above his belt.
OMG!! Reading this line my eyes went wide and I'm imagining all sorts of things that I shouldn't. ☺️

she grabbed a fistul of his hair and yanked up his head to look at her, her hair draping the sides of his face.
UFFF!! LOVE this line. Esp the hair draping his face as if they are romancing yet hiding. The element of mystery is very alluring.

Oh Gosh! I'm in AP romance land right now. The raw passion and the intensity of their romance was felt through your words. I could imagine each and every scene and feel the emotions and the building tension. Honestly the BEST romantic piece I have read here.
You are a wonderful writer. Hats off! 👏

Now like others i'm also requesting please write more sooon! Because after this we cant stop here, we need mooore! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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He sat up with a start, leaving Phulwa bewildered. Without a warning he picked up both her arms and hit them against one another - leaving a rain of glass bangles shattering into countless pieces that landed all over her and the rest of the bed.VITAAA...wow u keep telling us that what u write is from all that u have read and seen in movies bt girl the above lines has to b an original so 👏👏👏👏...these lines were jst ...so so abhay..thank god he has married someone like Phulwa cause no ordinary girl would have been able to handle the sadu and patidharam joint comm😉😉I jst hope CVs give us even half of what u have written...the way they avoided showing us if they were using the same bedroom ...sometimes I really gt scared abt thrie SR😕Bt your writing really ...HATS OFF😊😊😊...I wonder what will JayGun say if they ever read this SS...ajay will defintly turn red😳😳And yes yes ripping off all the buttons...SUPERLIKE😳😳
And I want to see Abhay in that maroon shirt...
Well done girl ...loved all the 5 parts...enjoyed it throughly...have read it many times...and trust me will read it many more times again😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AHHH i almost fainted when i was done reading the last part... you are are an amazing writer... you did an awesome job with the whole story.. 😊 hope to read a lot more stories from you.. you have a way of words.. 👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow, still in shock. I think a thermometer just broke👏👏👏
So much passion, think you really made some swoon including me vita.😉 Hats off. 😊

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