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Posted: 13 years ago
@Jewellery - I'd truly truly love to see that!! I mean him sitting her down, slowly putting on her bangles, her earrings and finally the veil and telling her she's truly the prettiest girl he has ever seen... Love it Vita bt jst one thing ...make sure after he has done with his lovey dovey talks...Pls PLs make him TAKE OFF all the jewellery with even jyada pyaar se😳😳😳 goodnite and keep dreaming😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just get inspired by all of u...
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jungle: ACP Abhay rai singh is planning to arrest Phulwa and he ask his subordinate (jitin) to be on temple right time with enough force, and also calls his family to be there on time to witness the fall of chote takur's killer daketh phulwa. The jungle was still not even a single leaf moves it seems like they all get an idea abt what is going to be happen tomorrow.

kabile: All are sitting sadly, completely silent scene, Gouri enters and says "jijiya tho subhese kuch nahi khaya ya piya, ab hum kya kare muche lagatha kuch dhin hamare sath rahane se jijiya ke sath rehane se abhayji ko sab yad ayega lekin aphsose eisa kuch nahi hua"
One of the ladies says (sorry I dont know their name thithily and gungad i think) "Kya kismath he meri beti ka us par santhosh na likhahe ka ay matha rani kuch tho karo"
then somebody says that Abhay is coming then everybody gets up and shows as if they are enjoying in the news that shatru is going to meet phulwa with his house members. shatru enters and enjoy with them fr a few minutes and his eyes searching fr phulwa then gouri told him that she is at her room, shatru leaves the party.

Phulwa's room: phulwa standing in front of the window and looking at the sky... then all of a sudden a hand come from the back and hold her around the waist. She stunned and looked back to a very close Shatru's face she felt as her lips touched his. She murmured "shatru ye kya nodanki he chodtho hame" she said it but never mind to move a bit from that position. He whispered into her ears phulwa thum kya kar reheho apne parivarwalom se mere bharemeh kah reheho kya? this made a firball move through her stomach; he sounds like Abhay! she just turned around and looked into his eyes with surprise: mera abhay, kya vo vapas aya? tears filled in her eyes. " are phulwaji ap ro kyom reheho apne parivarwalomke bhare meih sooch kar koi bhath nahi ab hum hai apke sath har khatham har pal apke sath" phulwa tried to smile at his words but all of a sudden she thought all nakli vathayem by ACP Abhay rai singh. " Phulwaji our ek bhat hum chahathe he ki hamari parivarwale abko ek ladki ki tharah dhekle isliye agar ap kal dhoda sajakar ayegi tho bhada acha legegi. ab hum chalthe he ap so jaiye kal subhe mandhir jana he"

Morning: all kabile people are ready for the temple and waiting for phulwa and shatru. and sharing each other their non willingness to be there to witness an another arrest drama.

Phulwa's room: shatru enters phulwas room with a cover phulwa still in her salvar. Shatru was wearing a sharvani " are ap abhi thak thayar nehi huye, kya phulwaji apne sasural walomse milneka man nahihe kya? Shatru gives the cover to her and tells meri mane bheja he use apko is meh dhekne ka man kartha he" Phulwa opend the cover and stunned to see her wedding dress in it. She just look into the eyes of shatru with surprise" wo meri mane bhahuth doond doondu kar laya ese ap use udhas math karna" she just go inside and dressed up in that and comes out. Shatru helps her in wearing all the ornaments, and told her that she looks so beautiful now and he cannot stop himself to hold that beauty for a while and make her close to his heart she can now hear his heartbeats, she knows very well that this is the last now they are going to separate shatru will reveal himself as ACP and send her to the jail her inner mind whispered pls abhay dont loose your hand pls pls stay like that I can stand like this fr all my life but pls dont leave me. " are phulwaji time bhahuth ho gaya hamem chalna chahiye".

Precap: temple Phulwa is standing in front devi maya and praying fr her Abhay.

I know my language has many problems pls pardon me and also I want any one of you to write the next part pls...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Athira: 👏👏👏 Wow, loved it!!:DD
Seriously yaar, that was too good, the whole scene setting and how the episode plays out - wow kaise hoga! And I especially loved the Phulwa-Shatru/Abhay interaction!!:DD

He whispered into her ears phulwa thum kya kar reheho apne parivarwalom se mere bharemeh kah reheho kya? this made a firball move through her stomach; he sounds like Abhay! she just turned around and looked into his eyes with surprise: mera abhay, kya vo vapas aya? tears filled in her eyes.

😍😍😍 I could really see this scene playing out with so much emotion...For a moment Abhay drops his guard just to be with his Phulwa that he loves so much...and Phulwa getting back her Abhay just for that while...Wow very nicely done:))

Phulwa opend the cover and stunned to see her wedding dress in it.

Aww her asli wedding dress! I'm sure it'll bring back so many memories of their wedding day again, especially the way he picked back up their loosened gatbandhan and put it back together again:)) Loved this touch...

Shatru helps her in wearing all the ornaments, and told her that she looks so beautiful now and he cannot stop himself to hold that beauty for a while and make her close to his heart she can now hear his heartbeats,

she knows very well that this is the last now they are going to separate shatru will reveal himself as ACP and send her to the jail

her inner mind whispered pls abhay dont loose your hand pls pls stay like that I can stand like this fr all my life but pls dont leave me.

This last paragraph truly truly touched me - the way Shatru puts on her ornaments and truly means his words to her for once and her dilemma over knowing that this is really the end. I think that's the true sorrow of this whole situation, she knows exactly how it will be played out and how she'll have to face utter humiliation, and yet for the sake of her pati she will gladly go through it again. If Abhay has gotten his memory back, I'm sure it would hurt just as much knowing that she would gladly suffer so much for him. True love...😍

Yaar this was too good, please keep on writing - really want to know what happens nexttt:DDD
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waise, I was just thinking of this scene that could play out between the two. Assuming now that Shatru has started to doubt his initial judgement of Phulwa and has started to fall for her as Abhay, it would be interesting to see this conversation playing out between them.

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Phulwa's standing at Shatru's door in his kabiley room, and she only says one word "Abhay". Shatru looks up in surprise, wondering if she had already gotten to the truth.

Phulwa walks over to his bed and sits down, looking at him straight in the eye. "ACP Abhay Rai Singh". Shatru is truly shocked now and is about to leave when she continues "Humne suna hain ki humko pakarne keliye Abhay Rai Singh ki koshish chalrahin hain. Hum toh sirf yeh kehna aayethe ki tu bhi thoda shatark rehna, kaun jane woh kaab aati hain"

Shatru breathes a sigh of relief looks at her, takes her hand and smiles, "Phulwajee aap chinta maat kijiye, iss ACP kabhi yahan tak nahin aapayega". He gets up to leave as Phulwa continues.

"I've heard a lot about this ACP recently. Suna hain, he has caught many dacoits since his fast rise among the ranks in his police department. Sounds like a very determined person to me."

Shatru stops in his tracks and looks out the window, wondering how they had suddenly reached this topic.

Phulwa continues, her back to his, "I've been thinking about it, wondering why he seems to be so intent on capturing me. I've heard people say he is a very just and honest man, never stepping back to help the weak. Sometimes...sometimes he sounds just like me - we both have an aim in life to give justice to those who deserve it. Sometimes, it makes me wonder if like me, he has also had to endure great loss in his life that his turned him like this." She pauses for a short while before concluding, tears welling up in her eyes "Sometimes I wonder that perhaps if we were on the same side of the law, we could actually be able to connect to one another"

Shatru felt an enormous pang of guilt stirring up within him, what was she saying? Was she sympathising with Abhay? But how could she know - how did she manage to figure out that he had indeed lost so much in his life that it had forced him to take this path in life? She was supposed to be his greatest enemy, and yet here she was taking his name as though they were on the same side.

"No, no you two cannot be alike. There's no way this ACP can be anything like you - you're so just and honest and he only sounds like a jhoote makkar to me"

Phulwa couldn't stop the tears from rolling down her face. She knew the exact effects of what her words had on him, and yet she had to do it to make him realise his wrongs before it was too late. Yet she felt great pain and hurt because at this point only she knew that even Shatru was wrong, Abhay was not a jhoote makkar - he was possibly the most just man she had ever met.

"Shatru, don't be quick to pass judgement on people you don't know. But trust me on this one, somehow I can't help but feel that our situations are not that different. He must have lost a lot in life to have so much drive to fulfill his mission. And it seems like he's trying to prove himself to someone, to show someone that he is truly someone capable of getting things done. Loss is a very big thing in life Shatru, and to lose the warmth of a mother's touch or the firm grip of a father's caring hands - it's enough to break any man"

Phulwa turned around to face a rather distraught Shatru, her tears still rolling down her cheeks. Seeing her face suddenly struck him very hard, leaving a gaping hole within his heart - when had he ever seen her so broken before. Suddenly, his guilt intensified to beyond something he had ever known - she had just shown him a glimpse of the fact that they might not be so different after all.

Phulwa quickly wiped her tears away, not wanting to make him suffer in front of her anymore. She walked up to him, gave him a smile and headed off for her room. Before she walked out, she only reminded him of one more thing, "Aur ha, aaj humne jo baat kye hain, usko kisse aur ko maat batana. Here at the kabiley, the ACP's name is simply taken as an enemy's. Call it my weaknessif you like, but sometimes I can't help but feel the other's pain, even if he is an enemy."

Phulwa walked away from Shatru's room, leaving an even more confused man wondering if he was indeed moving on the right path.

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Apologies for my English-Hindi mix, it does get tiring to write it all out in Hindi all the time:/
I think this scene would be interesting to watch because for once Phulwa isn't just siding with Shatru, she's transcending everything and sympathising with Abhay. It would definitely leave a mark on him, and hopefully thoda thoda yaad aajaye?:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
well done both Athira and vita...bt do cont writing both of u ...love the shaadi ka jora wala idea Athira😊😊...in that case i am sure he does remembers everything and will revel that infront of everyone in the temple😊😊...wow that would b worth watching😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ameres


Exactly yaar. And watching that scene it was like as someone else also mentioned that Abhay would feel indebted to Thakur for saving his life. I felt extremely bad for Abhay that he had to depend on Thakur to save his life. I wish they show that Thakur was lying and someone else gave the blood because honestly even the thought of them sharing the same blood is like...yuck! 🤢

Waise when doctor said we have given him blood 'but' at that point the first thought that came to my mind was that they gave the wrong blood or maybe Thakur has some deadly disease and has been passed onto Abhay. But then i laughed on my own absurd theory cause they cant give wrong blood like this lol. And if Thakur had some disease then that would have been the best news! 🤣

Guess its either memory loss or paralysis. :/

anu i'd also written that now abhay'll feel indebted 2 thakur if his blood was given!! @bold i wish & hope this"ll cum true!!thakur may b lying. and a thot just strike 2 me after reading ur comment . thakur may b lying bcoz the moment doc. told her that "we've given him thakur's blood" thakur came & interrupted him. so it can b possible.and this thing is said by athira also(i think i m rite abt name).
but still doc. can't say that they'd given thakur's blood 2 abhay if it'dn't matched wid abhay & he wud'd said that we tried 2 give thakur's blood not we gave thakur's blood!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ameres


LOL! Thakur deserves all those galiyains and more! 🤬
You know while watching the epi esp that blood giving scene i was actually wishing that Abhay wasnt his son. Really he doesnt deserve to be called a father. How can any father be so cruel? :/


Btw, can anyone please explain this post?

anu there r such ppl who r like thakur even in reality!!i'd seen& read such case in one forum i.e BV.and that prsn himself told abt it & was not even guilty of doing it.
i posted that he got married 2 gal who was not gud-luking,dark & was fat but her family'd got money so he got married & he didn't mind abt her being fat etc. at that time but he never liked her 4 the same raesons(do u believe that such prsn also there😕) .then he became a father & his daughter was also ugly & fat(in his own words).and he went 2 US &there he found a gal who was educated,fair & slim. he left his wife & daughter & married anoder gal.
and anu while he was telling this story 2 all of us in BV forum, he just not used the words which i wrote but even worse words than those & not just 4 his wife but even 4 his own daughter. actually he wanted 2 gain sympathy saying that his case is like balvivah or child maariage bcoz there sum ppl were supporting jagya & gauri's marriage in the name of jagya being victimised by bal-vivah 2 anandi. but there all members not just scolded him but even blamed those J&G supporters 4 making sum1 think it as rite even in reality!!
@bold wat do u mena by this & which of the posts u r asking ,the TM's post or nxt reply 2 TM's 1st post!!😕😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wah wah Vitaji...aap ke talent ka koi jawab nahi! Seriously absolutely zabardast!

You guys have really turned this potential memory losing track into a very positive thing, and that little scene you just wrote...amazing! Really something like this would put them in such an unusual situation, and Phulwa using the little leverage she has over her husband to truly show him the right path all the while maintaining her cover!

I mean somewhere during the kabilay track, if Phulwa had done something like that it would have turned Shatru/Abhay's world upside down. He's always just needed someone to be there for him, to understand him, love him and you have captured all of that!

Yet she felt great pain and hurt because at this point only she knew that even Shatru was wrong, Abhay was not a jhoote makkar - he was possibly the most just man she had ever met.

This was my favorite line, so beautifully written, truly at this point, Phulwa is the only one in the world who knows Abhay better than anyone, and she is the only one who can save him from himself!

I think this scene would be interesting to watch because for once Phulwa isn't just siding with Shatru, she's transcending everything and sympathising with Abhay. It would definitely leave a mark on him, and hopefully thoda thoda yaad aajaye?


Ok, this part really, really cracks me up! The way you wrote it makes it seem like the amnesia track is already happening, and everything sounds so certain...lol! You guys have got me convinced that something like this is going to happen and I am loving it!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay before I go any further, a couple of congrats and hugs have been long due and because I have barely been here all week, I think this is the best time to dish them out before I forget once again!

1. Major, major, major congrats on reaching 100 pages and that to in less than 2 weeks! Seriously at this rate we'll be needing a new AT every month! I know I am not here as often as I would like, but I would just like to say hi to all the new members who have started coming here that I haven't gotten a chance to talk to because of the time difference issue, but really it's so nice to see this AT flourishing so quickly! 🥳

2. Vita, Vita, Vita, congrats and big hug for becoming a goldie! 1000 posts, that's still just a dream for me! All your contributions whether it be comments, WU or scenarios really add life to this forum and this place really will not be the same without you! 🤗

3. And finally Anu, I know this is maha late, but omggg 10,000 posts! You rock girl, that is so impressive, I really can't even imagine it! So lots and lots of congrats and a big virtual hug for you as well. I really hope you keep entertaining us with your PhAb creativity and phangirliness for years to come! 😆🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Now for my personal take in this whole situation. Let me start off by saying that I went back and read all the 10+ pages of comments that you guys posted after the episode aired and I loved every single one of them. Seriously the transition from utter hopelessness and desperation to you guys coming up with all kind of scenarios and then finally settling in the amnesia/Shatru story, absolutely ingenious!

It's amazing how the kabilay days can still bring a smile to my face even though I know what happens after that! I just feel like Abhay was so cute in that avatar, and the story buildup of Phulwa falling for him was so beautifully executed, so I would love, love, love to see Abhay going through that transition this time. And it will be unique this time, because like you said, even if they do play the amnesia track and he loses his memory, the feelings are still there. He might not recognize her as his wife, but the connection and love will be so much stronger than it ever was! And the conflict that we'll get to see Abhay deal with if he goes back into his Shatru avatar will be absolutely fantastic to watch, and this way we'll definitely get a chance to see the story come a full circle which is something the CVs like doing!

But, but, but as much I absolute adore this scenario and it's something I would love watching, I do not think, realistically speaking that they'll be doing this. After watching the last half of yesterday's episode and then the precap for today, I am almost 99% certain that they are going to be taking the amnesia route. My main reason for that is, like you guys have already mentioned, the sequence where they basically reversed her entire marriage, she literally has no proof of being married on her right now, and I don't know it was just the way that they showed that that had warning bells going off in my head. Ever since that scene every minute seems to be just be confirming my belief that Abhay will end up losing his memory, and the precap kind of just reinforces that idea. Even though how in the world Thakur knew what was wrong with Abhay before Phulwa, I have no idea, because it did not seem that the doctor went ahead and alerted him, so was he anticipating this all along? Did he plan for something like this? Because that comment the doctor made about administering Thakur's blood is still not sitting right with me, something is definitely off here, and I am confused as hell as to where the CVs will go with this! Either way though, I'll have my answer in a little over six hours!

Anyways, I am totally going off track here, but I just have so many questions, *sigh*, I am sorry if I have lost half of you with my ramblings, but back to my theory. Anyways, there are a couple reason why I don't think Thakur will be sending Phulwa away:
1) If he wanted Phulwa out of the way, he would have made that condition when she told him she was willing to do anything to save Abhay's life. He had that perfect opportunity to get rid of, because he knew that at that point she would have agreed to that if it meant Abhay would get to live. Yet instead of doing that, he told her that he wanted her to become his servant, another way to humiliate her and force her to do his bidding. Like he said in the hospital, he loves their enemy-relationship, and so I doubt that he's let her get off this easily, especially, especially if the amnesia track happens the way I think it will!
2) The fact that Babu couldn't show up when his sister was literally swinging between life and death, I really don't think we'll be seeing much of him, let alone the whole kabilay members! Plus, to repeat that whole sequence again will not garner the TRPs because really no one wants to see the same track happening again despite the little alterations they might add, and the fact that all these constant twists and turns are in the name of high TRPs, I just don't see it happening, don't kill me, I don't want to ruin your expectations, this is just the way I see things.

And finally my actual theory, I think that if the amnesia track is to happen, and I have a bad feeling that it will (I am really, really hoping that this is something they're just hyping up and it all boils down to nothing), Abhay will forget everything from the time just before his marriage to Phulwa, like maybe around the court case time or something. This way Thakur can actually hold Phulwa accountable for her deal and the same time be able to justify his actions to Abhay. He could say something like, they made an agreement that Phulwa would be released from jail under the condition that she will serve the Thakur (I know it sounds absolutely atrocious, but I don't think Abhay knew Phulwa well enough at that time to really know if she would accept something like that or not). This way Thakur will accomplish two things, actually exercise his control over Phulwa and at the same time get Abhay back under his thumb, even if it for a short while.

And this will actually give a whole new twist to their love story without being repetitive and we'll actually get to see a unique side to it. I mean Abhay at that time will be "hating" Phulwa, but at the same time the attraction and love is there even though he doesn't remember it, and how he acts on it should be interesting to watch. And this time it won't be the forced circumstances that bring them together, but really just the honesty of their feelings for each other. And as Phulwa has been stripped of all signs of her marriage, it will be something to see them find each other again. Yeah, so I am not sure if I am making any sense, and it's super late here, but out of all of the scenarios I could think of this seemed the most rational with what the CVs are trying to do.

Oh and this way you guys can get your sadu Abhay back, and his conflicting emotions is definitely not going to be helping his moods. Once again this is all a big, huge, complicated theory that might end up being absolutely nothing and all this typing will go to waste, but I wanted to get it all out before the episode aired!

But lastly before I log off, I just want to say that if they do go the amnesia way then all of next week was like the biggest waste of time ever! Why rush the revelation of Devpur in such a dramatic way if it was meant to be forgotten and revealed all over again. Like we've mentioned before, a confession as huge like this will not have the same impact if done twice, and really pushing them all the way back to square one like this is not only an insult to PhAb marriage but to the whole distance they have covered in this ordeal. They've both almost lost each other, given up everything for each other, only to face this? Please CVs start using your brains, I know you have it up there somewhere, so please start showing something sensible. I am terribly worried that the CVs have started throwing together whatever they can for the name of TRPs whether they make sense or not. So my one wish now is that no matter how they decide to deal with this track, please follow through with it properly so that it make sense. The audience have been put through a roller coaster ride for the past couple weeks, we need some kind of sanity coming back!

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