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Julieee e😊😊😊🤗 So goood to see you after so long. And read your comment . Glad that you are enjoying it so far... Thank you!

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So with out further adu...here is chapter 12!!!
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CHAPTER 12

It was nightfall by the time they arrived at Ratti Nagar. The driver was a nice man but a curious one and four hours in a car was bound to bring questions. Vickram came up with a story about them being sight seers who got lost, losing their luggage somewhere along the way explaining their somewhat disheveled appearance. He seemed to buy the story.

"This is it...I need turn down this street here." He said stopping at a street corner.


"Thank you again for the ride..." Vickram said reaching for his wallet.


"Any time...Oh please...I don't want money...it was no trouble really." He nodded in acknowledgment.


"Well it is late and most transport stop in these parts about six o'clock ...you can get a place to stay down that street. Ms. Chanda...it's a pink building with a sign...can't miss it..tell her Roy sent you..." He said pointing to the opposite side


"Ok..thanks" He said again as they got out of the car. Turning towards the street they began walking down the lane.


"Think they gave up?" Sugni asked , He shrugged.


"I don't know...but I don't think they saw us ..and in any case they won't know where we are ...by tomorrow we will be out of here."


"hmmm" She said "Is this it?" She asked looking at the little cozy looking house with a sign that declared Chanda's Bed and Breakfast.!


"Got to be.." He said as he knocked on the door. It was answered by a plump old woman with a pleasant round face.


"Hi..Ms. Chanda? We are looking for a room...Roy sent us..." Vickram said


"Roy...hmm...I see.." She said looking at them "Ok come in..come in..." She said ..."Where you coming from ?"


"Brasso Nagar." He answered. As they walked in. She stopped and turned to them, looking at them
suspiciously Sugni recognized that look. She saw it many times before.


"And you are?"


"I am Chulbuli and this is my husband Vickram, Maaji. We sort of lost our bags and we just need a place for the night...please..." She said. She could feel Vickram watching her


"You lost your bags...?" She asked "Haaye raam that is a bad palce! How did that happen?"

"Ahhh..."


"We made a wrong turn..." He said repeating the story he gave Roy.


"Ohh poor things...of course ." She said sympathetically... "That Brasso place has a bad reputation, the people there touba touba!!! Worse place to visit, no good people go there...see your wife lost her bag... it's ok..that can be recovered. You are lucky I have one room available. " She said leading them inside to a bedroom.


"Thank you how much is it?" he asked.


"Well usually it is $250 per night...but since you both had a lot of trouble I don't ...


"Its ok .." Vickram said handing her the money. "That won't be a problem..." He said touched by her kindness.


"Alright...So this is your room. Your bathroom is through that door. If you need anything there is an
intercoms on this wall...hmm I guess that is it, you must be hungry I'll get you guys something to eat." She said as she turned to leave.


"Thank you" He closed the door as they looked around. It was a cozy room. There was a small TV in the corner, a dresser, a small sofa. The bed was made up in a cheery color print.


Sugni sat on the bed and sighed. He sat on the sofa. Opening his bag...He needed a shower. Then he remembered Sugni had no clothes or anything."I guess we need to get you some clothes..." he said.


"hmm but all over is closed..it's ok I'll manage until..." She said feeling grimy but it won't kill her for one night. if she wore her dirty clothes . "I'll make do " She said . She noticed that he was wincing slightly as he handled the bag.


"Are you alright?" She asked.


"Yeah I am fine...just need a shower." He said


You go on I'll go after..." She said .


"Ok.." He said . Grabbing his things he made his way into the bathroom.


There was a soft knock on the door, she answered it to find a pleasant smiling Chanda."Hi..I hope I am not disturbing.." she said.


"No ..no .." she answered


"Well I know you lost your bag and after the day you two had..nothing will feel better than a warm bath and some clean clothes...I have some clothes that belonged to my daughter, she left it after she went away...it might fit you... you can choose what you want..."


"ohh umm no...I don't want to give you extra trouble.."


"None sense! It's no trouble...come on..." She said. The offer was tempting she really wanted some fresh clothes.


"Ok let me just tell him..."


Going to bathroom door she knocked...


"Vickram babu...I am going with maaji upstairs. Be right back..."


"Ok..."


"So how long have you to been married?" Chanda Asked as they went up the stair case.


"Uhh...not long...a few weeks" She said God forgive her lie.


"Ohh...what a way to start off...but don't worry in a few years you'll look back on this and laugh!' She said.


"Hmmm"


"Here we go.." She said opening a room...


"What's all this?" Vickram asked as Sugni came back in the room carrying a small plastic bag.

"Maaji...na..she gave me a few of her daughters clothes.I was saying no but she insisted..." She explained


"Very kind of her.." he said. She nodded.


"You finished? "


"Yeah..." He said . Quickly she took her turn in the shower.


Coming out fresh and clean and feeling a lot better than she had before. Vickram was sitting on the couch the Tv playing in the back ground. She noticed there was a tray on the center table covered.


"Dinner is here" he said.


"You did not start?" she asked "You must be hungry..."


"hmm ... I thought I'd wait for you since you don't like eating alone " he said. She smiled. As she sat next to him. She noticed that he removed the cover with his left hand his other hand resting on his lap looking weird...


"Oye Maa!" She exclaimed "what happened to your hand?" She said looking at it.


"Its nothing.. just a little sore..." he replied.


"NOTHING?" She said reaching over and taking his hand..."Haai Sita Miya...its swollen and blue...Oh Lord.."


Relax.." he said wincing..."That's what happens when you got into fights" he said


"And who told you to get into the fight..huh.. He had a gun if something happened ..." She said..


"What else you wanted me to do stand back and watch?' He asked ..."And you were the one praising my
fighting skills not long ago ..."


"yeah ...well." She stammered at a loss for a comeback to that statement. "look at you now...I'll be right back" she said leaving to go outside


"Where are you go.." She was out the door before he could finish the sentence. She returned with a bowl of ice and a small container that looked like some kind of ointment...


"Here put your hand in this, it'll help the swelling a bit..." She said placing the bowl down on the table.


"Its not necessary .."


"Shhsh...put your hand in there and eat your food!" she said sitting down and taking her own plate. Effectively cutting off his arguments. She could feel him staring at her..


"You are bossy you know that?" He mumbled


"No I don't know that..." She answered dead pan...as he looked at her. She laughed at his shocked expression. "Just soak your hand please."


He did as she requested. It was awkward eating with his left hand but he managed. The meal was finished in silence as they were both famished and tired.


After the meal was finished she removed the plates and the bowl of melting ice . Taking his towel and the balm she sat down again to take his hand.


"Hey ..it's ok I can do it..."


"No.. you need to massage it to get the circulation back and make sure its ok..." She said .


"Fine I'll do it..."


"sure you can but I can do it better ..don't worry I won't hurt you..." She said taking is hand as she began drying it ...


"No it's ok...stop...I'll do it..hmm. He tried to remove his hand but she ignored him.


"Stop it Sugni!" He said pulling his hand away, it came out louder than he intended and she jumped. He closed his eyes sucking in air through his teeth from the shot of pain that movement caused "I can do it..." he said more softly.


"I am sorry ...I just wanted to help." She said in a small voice Handing him the ointment. He took it from her gingerly opening the small bottle. She had not moved at all. He looked at her, she had such a heart breaking look on her face, that against his better judgement he said.


"You know what...you're right...you do it." He said handing her the medicine.


You sure.?" She asked looking at him warily.


"Yes.. and I am sorry I raised my voice.'


"Its ok..." She said taking his arm she began massaging it gently. He leaned back and closed his eyes doing his best to ignore the fact that she was this close to him, yet so far away . It was impossible. The feel of her fingers gently pressing his arm was not helping his resolve in any way.


"Is that my real name?" She asked after a while


"Hmmm?" he said opening his eyes to look at her.


"Sugni you keep calling me that since we met...and you told Amma you knew me...is that my name?"


"Yes.." He said quietly , watching her. She repeated the name softly to herself ... then shook her head...nothing came to her. How could her name be so unfamiliar...


"hey...!" he said calling her out of her thoughts.


"huh...and I had an accident...what happened?" She asked trying to get some answers she was looking for.

Vickram wondered what to do here...naturally she would have questions. He decided to go with the story he gave Amma and the Doctor. "You fell of a cliff into a river..."


"Huh?" She said looking at him in shock. All of this was sounding like something of off a TV show ..


"How do we know each other?" She asked.


"We are from the same village...and we were friends and..." He stopped she was looking at him hanging on to each word. He could tell her anything about them now and he was sure she would believe him...


"And?" She prodded...


"And nothing...l know you are curious, but you had enough stress for today and I don't think now is the time to go into all that..Hmmm"


"But.."


"Shh...it'll come back to you when we get back to Mawhari. Don't stress yourself."


"Hmm" She nodded. Trying to make sense of what he was saying to her was giving her a headache.


"It is a nice name ...Sugni...I like it" She said


"Chulbuli is a nice name, just hard to remember." He said.


"I don't like it. They gave it to me.." She said. He stayed quite not sure how to respond to that.


"You Know Maaji was asking how long we were married.." She said changing the Subject. "I had no idea what to say..I told her a few weeks!" She told him. "I feel bad though lying to her."


"Why did you tell her that?" He asked.


"I recognized that look on her face, especially hearing Brasso nagger, I've seen it before...So I said we were married. It's just for one night. It does not mean anything..." She shrugged.


"I guess you're right." He said.


She continued massaging his hand for a while quietly. Then almost made him choke with her next question.


"So do you visit places like Amma's often?" She asked looking down at his hand. Probably aware of how ruse her question was ...but she wanted to know for some reason.


"Uhh excuse me?" he said. Looking at her incredulously.


She looked at him defiantly. "Well you know a lot about me...I think it's only fair I know a little bit about you after all I did run off with you. And you did come in there..."


" Hello! For your information...I did not come in there of my own will...Bunty pestered me until I said yes...and if I had known where he was taking me beforehand I would have refused..."


"Ohh...I see..." She said . Somehow relieved to hear that.


"What else you want to know about me?" he asked , suddenly wanting to laugh at where this conversation was going. Sugni really said what was on her mind, and still did.


"Ohh ...Umm..." she said flustered, she expected him to blow up on her but he seemed amused. Ohh well why not ..."Are you married?" She asked. "ohh don't look at me like that Amma's is filled with men who claim to be happily married. Divakar was one!" She said


"ha ha...no I am not!" he said. "I was though..." he said after a few moments, that omission cost him his life once before . He would not do that again.


"ohh.. what happened?"


"We got divorced."


"I am sorry" She said sympathetically.


"It's ok...we are both happier that way, believe me..." He said


"Hmmm" She said . after a moment she gasped as she looked at him with a comical look on her face..."Was it me? Were we...I mean me and you ...I mean.."


"no..we were not married..." He said, understanding her question. He could have sworn she whispered "thank God" under her breath.


"ohh...then why..."


"Ok...I think we had enough of this... we should get some rest...my hand is much better now thank you." He said interrupting her before she asked any more questions.


"Ok" She stood up and made her way to the bed. "Good night..."

"Good night ", he replied



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me first, me first ..like ke mamle me ..koi shaq ? 😎
nice progress 😃 i relieved that they have no problem till yet..😳
waiting for next..isiliye jaldi comment kiya u blackmailer ..😡 😉 😆
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Wah wah wah ,,,Mansi that was a fast reply...Ohhh I love it!!! Thank you ,... and just for you here is the next chapter ..ENJOY, and I am awaiting your review.|!!!
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CHAPTER 13

Sugni jumped up on the bed, awakened from a nightmare, of being chased by Amma and Bumsukiya. It took are a minute to remember where she was.She looked over to the couch where she made out Vickram's sleeping form in the shadows. She sighed in relief. His presence a calming reassurance to her she could not have made it this far without him.


Now that she was out of Amma's she wondered what next? She wondered if she had any family back in the village...what were they like. Would he just drop her off with them? After all he would not want her as a tail all the time.She remembered their conversation form earlier...about the accident and how he knew her. She had a feeling there was more, but what was it?. The connection she felt with him felt deeper than just fellow villagers. There was something in the way he kept looking at her. Trying to recall anything he told her was futile because it was all just blank in her head. And God knows she tried.



Maybe she could find a job there...pay her own way...but what could she do? Did she have a skill? She could read...did she have a job before...as thoughts began racing in her head the mild pounding began at the base of her skull.From experience she knew it was a matter of minutes before it over took her. Quitely getting up not wanting to wake him, she used the dim light coming through the window to retrieve her purse from the corner.

Going into the bathroom, she opened stuck her hand to pull out the pill bottle only to come up empty. What? ..Where was it? she wondered. "Ohh No.." she said as she remembered taking one that morning...she must have left it on the table in Vickram's apartment. Damn it!


She came back to the room, trying to take deep breaths to relax, but it was not helping. Gingerly she sat on the bed, trying not to make any noise not doing a good job as she let out an involuntary cry.


"Sugni?" he asked quietly. Oh No.! She did not want to wake him.


"huh?" She said


"is everything alright?" He asked.


Ye.yeah...go -go back to sleep" She said quietly.


There was something in her voice that sounded off, he got up and turned on the light. She was sitting on the bed with her head in her hands. Immediately alarm bells went off. Coming to kneel in front of her . "hey what's the matter?" he said.


"Nothing...I just got one..."


"Ok...did you take your medicine?"


"I forgot it in the apartment..." She explained quietly, she closed her eyes.


"Ohh God...what's the name of it..may be I can find a drug store..."


"No its prescription only...besides...all stores are closed" She opened her eyes and looked at him. The worried expression on his face. She forced a smile wanting to reassure him. ..."It's ok...it'll pass don't worry...go back to sleep hmm"


Vickram looked at her , her eyes giving away the pain she was in. He remembered her saying she only gets headache when she was stressed. The Doctor to was eluding to her needed to be stress free. And this had to be the mother of all stressful days for her. He hated seeing her in pain, but how could he stop it.


"Ok lie down..." He said . She lay on the bed as he covered her. Getting up he turned off the light. Moving back to the bed he sat on the floor next to her bed head.


"What are you doing?" she asked turning to face him.


"Relax...I'm just trying to make your head feel better..." he said as he lifted his hand and began massaging her head...


"Wait..your hand is hurt.." She said quietly


"uh huh..its fine see..your magic fingers worked.." He said. She let out a half laugh that tuned into a groan .

"Shh...just relax..." he said "close your eyes...it'll b ok.." he said soothingly "I know your worried and I know this is very stress full and scary for you, Sugni. But don't be. I promise you..you are safe. And soon you'll be away from here, free. And no one is going to make you do anything you don't want to ...I swear..."


"Hmmm... But where am I going? I can't remember any one and what will..." she asked , her voice quite in the dark, voicing her fears.


"Shhh...shhh..relax We'll figure out everything one day at a time. But you have nothing to worry about, you'll be well taken care off. for now we are going to Mawhari...then you can go where ever you want, do what ever you want. Live where ever you want..."


"A house in the mountains.?" she asked sleepily remembering him mentioning that some time before. His soothing voice and fingers making the tension go away.


"Anything you want..." He said


"hmm...will you be there?"


"If you want me to..." He said. Only if she did...wait stop it Vickram he said to himself. He had to stop himself from getting pulled back into these emotions. It was dangerous. Chances were when her memory came back all she would want from him was to be far away from her.


He had to remember that at the moment she was venerable and just looking for security in a world where she was upside down. He also had to remember he put her there...


"What's it like? Mawari?' She asked drowsily...


"Huh?...oh um...it's a quite village...lots of birds and animals...interesting people..." He said as he talked about the sights and scenery of the village trying to find things that were appealing...that was hard. But he continued to talk and squeezed her head, hoping to take away the pain at least in some small way.


Slowly she fell asleep listening to his voice as he painted a picture of the village accompanied by the gentle motion of his hand through her hair, had the pain ebbing after a while as sleep took over.She was worrying for nothing. Vickram was here it would be alright!


She woke up the next morning feeling rejuvenated. All traces of her head ache the previous evening gone. She never fell asleep with one of these so fast. Apparently he also had magic fingers she thought , having the urge to giggle ..wondering why she felt so silly.


She turned her head and realized he was still there fast asleep with his head resting on her bed, his hand above her pillow "ohh" she looked at him , feeling guilty that he was in such an uncomfortable position. In sleep he looked innocent though she thought. Tension free. He was like a puzzle she was trying to figure out.


Giving in to the urge she took her hand she caressed his forehead. "Who are you ...really?" she asked softly. He stirred and hastily she moved her hand, her cheeks growing warm. It occurred to her that she should be uncomfortable with his close presence , but she was not. He opened his eyes and she smiled.


"Good morning!" She said


"Morning..." He said returning her smile. "How are you feeling?" he asked


"perfect...It worked...and I did not wake up feeling groggy" she said "Thank you..."


"Glad to hear it..." settling more comfortable on the pillow so that they were face to face.


"But you slept like that...on the floor , I am sorry.."


"No...I am good..."


"No what if you catch a cold or have a sore neck then it'll all be my fault na..."


"Shhh...I am fine I promise." He said.


Their eyes connected as they got lost in each other . Raising her hand she caressed his face again moving unconsciously. Belatedly Vickram's brain kicked in and he realized this was wrong.


"We should get up...get ready..." He said removing her hand. He got up and began busying himself with gathering his belongings, doing his best to ignore the feeling he was getting being this close to her. He was playing with fire here and in the end he was the one who would be burnt.! Problem was his brain and heart were at odds with each other and he was stuck in the middle !


After a quick breakfast they finally took leave of Chanda thanking her for her hospitality and generosity. She gave them directions to the bus stand, which she informed them was walking distance away.


"This is a quiet little place isn't it?" Sugni commented. Trying to make conversation, Vickram it seemed was caught up in his own thoughts.


"Hmmm"


"It's a nice place to live I think..."


"Hmmm" She sighed giving up. They walked in silence for the rest of the way until to got to the bus stand , that was essentially a plain shed with a small bench. It was deserted. The streets quite.


Looking around he saw a small shop and decided to ask when the next bus will be. He was told that the 1st bus came around 12 o' clock which was about three hours away. "So what you want to do?" he asked her there was not much to see in the sleepy little town..


"Nothing I guess wait.." She said. Going over and sitting in the shed. They sat again quietly for a while, until she could not take it anymore."You don't talk much do you?" She finally said


"huh?"


"you are very quiet..." He shrugged "What do you want me to say?" he asked


"I don't know...it's just that..."

He chuckled "Its just that you can't go five minutes without going chappar chappar about something...hmm?"


That's not true..." She frowned , not sure she should be offended by that comment. "I am just trying to make conversation..."


He laughed as he looked at her..."Oh Sugni...I mean...Chulbuli" he corrected himself.


"No...Sugni is fine...I think I should get accustomed to that na.. it is my real name" she said. He nodded. She got up pacing looked around the area. Spotting a little shop down the hill of one of the side streets, she turned to Vickram who was sitting looking in the direction where the bus was supposed to come from.


"Hey... an ice cream shop ...its open..." She said sounding like a kid in a candy shop.


"You want? I'll get it for you..." He said.


"No I'll go I can use the walk and one of has to stay here in case the bus comes." She said.


"Ok ..." He reached for his wallet.


"No it's ok...be right back!" She said as she turned walking down the road happily. Vickram leaned back as he smiled. She may not know it, but she was acting more like Sugni, her mile a minute speech, her dislike for silence, taking everything around her with a natural curiously , it was all still there.


Sugni got to the little shop that just opened , she looked through the flavors , they all looked good. She loved ice cream! She choose two Strawberry ice cream cones . She would have to run before it started to melt she thought. As she paid for it.

She walked out the shop only to stop short at seeing Divakar standing there, parked a little way down the street in the opposite direction from the bus stand was his car with his men standing beside it and another one she recognized as Amma's. How did they find them?


"Surprised?" He asked coming close to her. "What you did not think Amma's men saw you getting into that car?...or that we could ask questions? It was easy enough to find out where you were headed, it was luck to spot you here!" He said..."Ohh two ice creams... where is he?" He asked looking around.


Oh god how was she going to get out of this...She just had to run up the little hill , he was blocking her way.

"Listen just me go , I don't want to go with you...Ok.." She said.


"Ohh really ...well dear I paid a lot of money for you and I get what I pay for ...so you are coming with me...Don't believe me ask Amma ..she is waiting for us ..." He said pointing down the hill. . She shook her head as she tried to move past him, he reached out and grabbed her hand.


"Ow!..let me go you creep!" She said struggling as he bagan dragging her . Dropping the cones she began hitting him trying to cause him damage but it was not working. . Finally she stomped on his shiny shoes and bit his forearm as hard as she could reflexively he let her go. Taking that opportunity she took of as fast as her feet could take her back to the stand.


Vickram wondered if she could not make up her mind over the flavors as she was taking a while, how far was it? he wondered it could not be far for her to see it from here. He got up intending to look for her when he saw her running frantically towards him. What the Hell?


"Sugni...?"


She stopped in front of him gasping fro breath..."Th- they found us, we got to go...Now..." She said out of breath


"What ? Who?" He asked , his question was answered by Divakar who was right behind her and two cars that came up the hill around the corner surrounding them.


Sugni Looked at Vickram "THEM!" she said


"Oh Great!" he said he picked up the bags , took her hand and tried to make a run but they were surrounded.

"Nah nah nah..." don't even try to run." Divakar said . Making his way in front of them.


"Let me make this easy for you Mr. I have no Problem with you. See I paid $14,000 for her and I did not get what I paid for. Now since you had your turn...well it's time to hand her over Don't be greedy..."


"Well you wasted your money cause she is not for sale, you scumbag." Vickram said punching him in the face. He retaliated and his men jumped in as the scuffle began three against one. Spotting the duffel bag that was dropped on the ground she picked it up swinging it in the direction of the men hoping to do some damage herself.


Grabbing her hand Vickram made quick work of the man she was dealing with , turning they ran as fast as they could down one of the many side streets. Thankfully for them the place was designed more or less like a maze with one street leading to another, which would make it hard for the men to find out which street then were on.


After running down one of the streets they took refuge at the side of a small building hiding in between the walls of two buildings , it was not much cover but the at least they might be able to duck out of sight.


"Now what?" She asked looking at him.


"I don't know...we have to get to that bus...or a way out..." He said "come let's see if we can get some help." He said . Looking around to make sure they were anywhere close they came out and ran down another street.


He heard what sounded like music coming from further down and followed it hoping to get some kind of assistance. As they approached he realized that it was a small temple that had a wedding going on apparently the ceremony had just been completed.


Vickram led her into the small temple where everyone stopped looking at the intruders. "I am so sorry to be crashing in like this, but there are some people following us and we really are trying to get rid of them please, can we just hide here for a minute."


"Why are they following you?" A man in traditional wear asked. He must be the pundit.


"Actually they are after her and don't want to leave her alone". He explained.


"Ohh..I see" One of the men in the small group said. "Of course you can join us until they pass..." he said.


"Thank you!" he said. He went inside breathing a sigh of relief to be hidden in a crowd. That feeling did not last long as not to long after Divakar and group came in calling every ones attention to himself!
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me first.me first ..this time too.. 😃
very interesting..but Divakar babu caught them again ..😲 why ? this is very scary.. i hope they will find their way again and this time no body can find them.😉
i liked the way sugani is falling for him..but he is now responsible vikram singh only, not lover one but i know further in this journey ..lover vikram will be wake up for sure .. he can't be so composed long in front of his own sugani...😳 good work...😳
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OMG 2 more chapters. When did that happen!!!!
You have kept the best bits of post leap, the essence of Sugni and TVS's characters as individuals as well the essence of what made SugVi so strong together.

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Hello Ladies I thank you for your patients as I have been under the whether and not able to post the next chapter... But I am better now and without making you wait any longer here is chapter 14...
Looking forward to your comments so don't feel shy to post them... ENJOY
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CHAPTER 14


"Excuse me this is a private function... and you can't just barge in here!" one of the men said to Divakar after he entered the temple.


"Excuse me for disturbing, sir but all I want is that girl there and I will be on my way..." he said pointing to Sugni who was standing in the corner next to an elderly woman. Vickram was standing with the men a few feet away.



"She is a guest , and obviously she does not want to go with you...so I will ask you to please leave...otherwise we will have to call the police!" he said staring him down.


"Go ahead... what will you tell them? Listen this is a private matter that does not concern you all" He said , dismissing the man by walking over to where Sugni was standing "Chulbuli , give up dear you can run lets go...Amma is waiting for you and so am I." he reached for her but she stepped back.


"I said leave!" the man said tapping him on the shoulder, next to him was two other guys, back up he guessed.


Divakar laughed, "really? You people are defending her...hiding her. Wah very good...its nice to know that you would take the side of a common street wh**e!' he said .


The men blinked as they looked at Sugni and Vickram again. Sugni closed her eyes in embarrassment at being addressed in such a way.


"Ahh so you did not know!" Divakar said looking at the shock on the faces. "Yes ... she is from Brasso Nagar..." there was an audible gasp that came with that revelation, "This is Amma and we have been trying to get her back after she ran off owing us! " he said...


"That is a lie..I don't owe you!!!"


"Yes you do $1400 to be exact...now come on and stop wasting my time..." he said.


"WAIT wait wait... Just one minute here!..." Said the woman next to her... "you are from Brasso nagar?...Oh My God...chi chi chi...Get out ...all of you...Get out I don't want you all defiling my daughter's wedding...Hey Raam..!" She said as she pushed her towards Divakar.


Sugni looked at Divakar who was looking at her slyly. "you can't run..." he said softly to her.


"What has this place come to...a wh**e in a mandir...chi chi chi..." The woman continued behind them


"I am not..." Sugni said softly looking around at the people , the accusing eyes and disgusted faces of the people around. She felt like a specimen under a microscope. She shook her head , tears falling from her eyes, she felt dirty ." I am not ..." She mumbled.


"Chulbuli...lets go..." Amma said. Coming over to them. She shook her head. No.


"Enough of this...these peoples patience have run out , there is nowhere to run darling!"

Divakar said as he reached for her. Side stepping him she went to Vickram she clung to him , hiding her face in his chest, she was trembling with fare and embarrassment.


" Take me out of here please..." She whispered.


"Shhh...I will..." He said putting his arm around her., admits the mumbling of the small gathering.


"Listen mister ..." Said the man from before. "We gave you refuge here because we thought you were decent people... this is no place for this and I will not have it... now ALL of you please leave..." He said to Vickram sternly... "Deal with your drama elsewhere not in my function!" He said .


"I am sorry for this..." Vickram said to him. Releasing her so she was standing by his side, looking at the floor. "But this is not true , she is not one of them. She never was..."


"Excuse me..." Amma said interrupting him "Stop it with the lies...Mr. Vickram you came into my place and saw her paid for her and filled her head with all sort of crap! Now I want my girl back...you hear me"


"Oh Lord woman... you can't come in here and act like this!" One of the ladies said. "You are destroying the purity of this temple..."


"I am destroying the purity of this temple... ME... HAHAHA" Amma said turning to look at the lady giving them all a cutting look. "You hear this Chulbuli?...This is what they think of us. Wha you all stand there in your fancy clothes, and respectable " houses...and blame us...but we are where we are because of men like these." She said pointing at Vickram and Divakar. "But do they get the blame, Nooo, do people say they defiling the temple ...Nooo. They have all the fun..and we carry the bad name. They walk through out doors and look for us ...but we are the home breakers... They use us and discard us, and once we demand something for it we are bad...but it dose not stop some of these decent men from coming to US dose it??" She looked around some of the woman had the decency to look embarrassed at her words. " Come on beti...instead of facing this ... this hypocrisy every day...come back to where you belong" She said convincingly.


That is enough Amma!?" Vickram said.


"What enough Vickram Babu..." She stopped him. "What is the difference between you and Divakar here...at least with him she knows where she stands...with you what? You fill her head with sweet words...at the end of the day she is the same thing to you, a wh**e from Brasso Naggar...until someone else comes along that you fancy where does that leave her?" She laughed condescendingly, "we're like the mat you wipe your foot on and leave, then discard when it suites you. No one wants us for keeps Vicram babu...no one." She said


"I do!" He said looking at her.


"What?" She said frowning. What did he mean?


He looked at Sugni , who was still staring at the floor blinking back the tears she could not quite stop from falling. He took her hand in his.


" Sugni is not some whim for me...nor is she a doormat., you want to know the difference between me and him...I'll show you." He said. As he began leading her towards the alter. Suddenly the entire place got quite all eyes on them . Amma opened her eyes wide as realization of what he meant hit her, her mouth opened in shock. He would not...


Her expression was mirrored by Sugni, she looked back at the crowd, then back at him..."What are you doing?" She asked softly.


"Shutting them up..." he said as they got to the front. "I know you have nothing to be ashamed of Sugni...and I really don't care what any one says. I also know your character means to you, and no one could dear lift a finger at you if you say yes. I won't let them.!" He said looking at her.

She looked at him, the determination on his face. She looked back at the crowd...Amma was shaking her head, Divakar looked wide eyed and everyone else was just enjoying the show. He was going through great lengths not just to get her out , but to shield her from bad name and the stain that came from being a resident of Brasso Nagar.


She may not remember him, she may not know what connection they had or their story, but in this moment she was sure of one thing, this man owned her heart. She felt overwhelmed with emotion , her voice felt choked as all she could managed was a nod.


"Pundit ji..." Vickram said "Please do the honors, as quickly as possible !" he said.


"But this is..."


"There is no time to waist." He said looking at him.


It had to be one of the fastest and shortest ceremonies in history as the pundit said the required mantras as they did a small puja and going around the fire the required 7 times, ending with the placing of the sindoor on her head .


After it was finished he turned to the people present. "Ladies and Gentelmen as you all can see she is now my wife, Mrs Thakur Vickram Singh. Like any other married woman in this room, she has the protection, rest\pect and standing of a wife. And I dear any one to contradict that!" He said . Taking her hand he turned to the Pundit thanking him for his assistance.


As they moved down they stopped in front of the man, clasping his hand he said..."please accept my apology again, for ruining your function and for all of this...but it was the only way. She is not one of them and she never was..."


The man looked at them as he nodded. Still in shock at all that had unfolded in what was supposed to be a small family function.


"Ahh its ok..." he said


Turning to the rest he apologized to them as well, he turned then and walked out of the temple only to stop short when he saw Divakar and gang standing there waiting.


Nice... touching ...but you know what I don't buy it...!" He said to Vickram.


"Well I really don't care if you do or not...now get out of my way..."


"not so fast...She is..."


"Divakar Babu!!!" Amma said coming down the steps of the temple, making her way to them.

Sugni looked at her, she let go of Vickram's hand and went up to her.


"Amma please...please just let me go." She said . "remember you said we all have our destiny...well this is mine" She held her hand. "just let us go please..." Amma looked at her for a long time , then she let out a heavy sigh. Silently she touched her face in that motherly way she had and smiled a bit. She closed her eyes and nodded. Letting go of her , she moved forward to stand in front of Divakar.

"Divakar Babu...I guess once you lost to him...I am sorry I'll return your check..."


"But Amma this means nothing... you know that...he.."


"Divakar Babu he did something that no one else I know would do. No one marries one of us. And even I would not disrespect that. I am not going to stand in their way and I am not going to let you...there are plenty of others"


"You brought me here..." he reminded her..


"Yes..I did but I have changed my mind...you'll get your money when we get back home...now please...lets go back.."


"You bitch!!!" Divakar said looking at her in anger. "you think you can play me... For months you been dangling her infront of me like bait and now you tell me to forget it... You listen hear you old bat..." he said grabbing hold of her hand and twisting it until she cried out ..."no one plays me for a fool!"


"Get your hands off of her!" Vickram said pulling him off and twisting his thumb until he heard a crack. "Ahhh"


"Listen to me , rich boy I am about fed up with you. You lost accept it she said you will get your money. You will get it. Now leave before you end up behind bars and have to explain to your wife how you got there. Understand !"


He let go of his hand , leaving him to nurse it.


"Come on boys..." he said to his men. "Amma I ll be coming for my money."


" yeah yeah ..." She said. Shooting him a disgusted look.


"Amma are you alright?" Sugni asked after Divakar left. Going towards her.


"Yeah I am fine " She said shaking of her hand. She turned to Vickram . "Thank you for stepping in"


"its Ok..." She said. Turning to Sugni she said. "I know that I don't deserve it...but can I ask you one favor please. It would mean a lot to me..." She asked


"What is it?"...Sugni asked. Amma smiled sweetly as she made her request.



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"Is she asleep?" Amma asked as she came to the room carrying two cups of tea and some snacks.

"Yeah she was tired..." Vickram answered looking at Sugni fast asleep on her bed. She fell asleep almost as soon as her head hit the pillow.

"Ohh I brought you some tea..." She said, looking at her a bit sadly. Well let it not go to waste...come we can have it in the other room. Let her rest."

Vickram followed her out to the next room where they sat in silence for a few moments. "Thank you for agreeing to come back here. For trusting me. I know I have not given you reason to." She told him.


"Well you were right , it was late . She did seem like she wanted to say good bye to the girls. As for reason , you seemed sincere. " he said looking at her. he was never one to judge people on their lifestyle , and obviously this was not something they choose to do . Thankfully, she gave up on her quest to make Sugni one of them and accepted that she was out of bounds.


"I am grateful to you for taking care of her. " He said to her.


"Yeah.." She said looking down . It was not such a nice feeling she was getting now, thinking about her actions with Chulbuli. "she is sweet. In the short time she has been here she has managed to win our hearts." She said . It was the truth. Despite all the tension and everything she was facing Chulbuli managed to somehow keep that upbeat spirit in her intact.


"You really do love her don't you? But why do I get the feeling you are holding back with her?" She asked he looked at her surprised that she picked up on that. She smiled

" I have been around this block along time Vickram babu... I have seen all types. The way you look at her, almost reverently...yet fearfully...what is the story with you two...would you share it?" She asked.


After all these months of keeping in all bottled inside, Vickram looked at Amma , she was looking at him patiently. Waiting.. He took a deep breath and then he said.


"Sugni...Sugni was best thing that happened to me. She brought me to life when I did not know what I was missing. Her smile, her innocents, her bubbliness. Her zest for life. Her determination to live with dignitiy. She was just so pure ...and then I came along...and took it away..." he said shaking his head ruefully.


"You...how?" She asked confused.


"She fell in love with me...she believed in me...and everything I told her..." He continued, letting out the entire story of his being married , his lie, his stalking of her. Amma listened to his story in disbelief and shock. "...And now here we are, what happened today was not supposed to happen, this marriage..."


"This marriage...gave her something she has been longing , that dignity, that respect. Have you seen her? this is the first time I have seen her genuinely happy, she could not stop smiling on the way here. And one thing I am absolutely positive about Vickram Babu, she loves you...and it runs so deep that even if the brain forgot the heart remembers..."


"And what happens when she remembers, she'll be hurt all over again, she'll feel betrayed all over again...and she'll..."

"Hate you all over again?" she finished. He nodded. She shook her head.


"That might not happen...she might not even remember her past...and if she does , she would see that you rectified your mistakes, that you went to the ends of the earth for her...Yes, I know what you did before was wrong ...but every one dose crazy things sometime in life..."


"Yes and my actions almost took her life, because of me is in this condition...she went off that cliff so she would not have to be with me and what am I doing here..."


"Did you do what you did today for selfish reasons? You did it because you wanted to take away the humiliation you saw in her face. And you know very well what to expect if her memory comes back. Living in the past and living in the fare of what if...will not change the present. The present is...that right now she needs your love and protection...she needs you, because their lots of places like this willing to swallow her whole...let me ask you something...if her memory comes back tomorrow...and she decides to leave you, will you let her go?"


"Yes..yes I would..." He said.


"Well this is your test by fire , Vickram babu, and I know you can do it because you love her that much. And a love that strong has to be rewarded. And I will pray that you do get that!" She said.


"Thanks for that.!" He said


"You are a rear find , she is lucky." She said to him.


Vickram left Amma short while later and returned to the room, she was still sound asleep. She was wrong...She was not the lucky one , he was.

"Oh Sugni , Please forgive me again!"
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow ! fantastic ! Intzar ka fal meetha 😃 no doubt about that... they r officially couple now.. he still feels guilty
i hope she will understand him..and they both make a beautiful life for themselves...😳
and i wish u r well now, happy valentine day u too.. "meri pyari sakhi".love u..🤗

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