FF ..restart of new beginning UPDATED page no 12 - Page 9

Originally posted by: ronshaan

Mansi, this lead character is irritating me ...

why

not because she is not sugni ... may b at 1st yes but now .. i have different things about her...

a. she thinks he is married and did not ask him where is his wife ... she could ask and say that now in the world we have phones so how come your wife did not come back to see on you - see in this one thing would be cleared - HE IS NOT MARRIED OR YES MARRIED TO REVA / DIVORCED or what ever but still... !!!

keep lil patient... u would know soon why she is behaving like that.. suspense aur surprise bhi koi cheez hoti hai...😳

b. he did not want her to touch him, fine she loves the man but come on what u going to give him bath .. ? shukar hay uska nauker aa gyaa tha,

Oh my god !!! she din't mean like that ..she was only teasing him..she know her limit.. maine ye likha tha..na

M - kyo ? mai aapki madad nahi kar sakti.. ( usne use ghum kar dekha) mujhse sharm aayengi aapko.. ( lehja shrarati tha

Lehja shrarati tha..ka matlab india me naughty hona, tease karana hota hai.. jyada arth ka anrth na bnao.. 😆

c. you know those 2 days could have bring vikram closer to her but it did not bring them closer / friendly .. it just made him feel uff when will she leave my house and go and here i understand his feeling and feel yes .. go go malhar 😆

yes, u r right he want her to go..but not because he is fed up to her ( he is grateful to her) but because he doesn't want to open his door or shell for any body .. he know very well, if she comes near then she would know about his past,his mistakes, every thing... relations hurt him,betrayed him so this time he doesn't want to make a new relations ,he is not fool ..he know very well that whatever mallhar doing its not formal..

She is reminding me of Nandu from ek boond ishq

yes she loves him but still she thinks he is married so she had to keep herself away or just ask about his wife Not say i dont care because this character is being ruined

she is not nanadu..ok ... nanadu doen' t care about adi's feeling he continuously saying i don't love u but she is not accepting... she thinks that after marriage everything will be ok...and here for mallhar, vikram's feeling is most important for her..

Dekho ... main padd rhei hon i should love this girl but daily i feel like punching her face and throwing her out of his house ... BURA NAI MANO ... kya karien yeh ladki ka zidd .. mujhe pasand nai .. koi khud ko kisi aur per thop nai sakta .. !!

its ok...but once upon a time we all wanted some for sugani..😛 m wrong ? she is not thopna type, because she know, pyar jabardasti hasil nahi kiya ja sakta... 😳

She loves him fine .. but uska pyaar deewanapan banta ja rah hay ... !!

yes she is deewani ...😳 but is she only one deewani..?

vikram love for sugani, was not deewanapan ? no my dear he was total deewana for her.. he was as much deewana that after sardhkai when adi brought her at home he went to her with a necklace and show her with proud as she is belong to her,and even she always say i m not love u .. please go back to rewa.. he continuously saying i will make everything perfect... and i love u and one day u will come back in my life.. he done all mistakes because of his deewanapan...but maallhar is not as much deewani..she never pressurize him and never would ...

Originally posted by: Vinnie79

Hello Maansi !!!😊,
How are you...I see ron has asked for people who want the translation and no one said anything!!!... Theek hian...when who ever is reading dose we will OK>>>!!!

Now on to the story...
FIrst Of all Grea Job...but vickram is hurt 😭😭...and I don't understand why is he at home if he is unable to take care of himself , like bathe?...
Mallhar...hmmm...Kuch garbard hian...Dose'nt she find it strange and she dose think he is married na...itna close aaney... Haa fikar to hoti hain na lakin door se...or at least wonder why he is alone , and his wife not come by his side assuming she went to the wedding...
I hope you clear the misunderstanding soon, or we might have problems with miscommunication.
Having said that...Good chapter looking forwart to the next!

Originally posted by: payal7

Baap re baap

What are you trying to do girl, give me a 6 months worth of Hindi lessons in one chapter😲

I have not had to concentrate soo much even when I was doing my professional exams😆.

I know you want to make this girl different to Sugni and want her to be interested in him rather than TVS doing all the work as he was in the SugVi relationship but perhaps telling him she will assist him to bathe is a little to far !!!! The best example I can give in terms of a comparable is Adi asking Sugni to join him in the shower when they had not even slept together. That kind of suggestion requires a level of intimacy which was not there so was inappropriate. Adi was an idiot but Malahar is not soo it seems a little out there.

Also IMHO if I have understand the character of TVS while he seems to like strong, fiesty women he would not want to be dominated by one and Malahar is verging on being dominating.

Cannot wait for the next chapter. Please can we have it soon.

Originally posted by: ronshaan

mansi one more thing
how can she take leave every week ?? she is new in work so how ?