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Sara Baksh

@sara1993

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

Hi Vinnie,

Wow! Wow! Wow! Wow! What an ending!☺️ soo sweet. I'm just so happy for Vikram and Sugni..with all that they have been through..they are finally together...finally husband and wife ..that too in the eyes of society . How much it meant to them was crystal clear...lol..just can't stop blushing...i'm even happier for Molly and Neeranjan..they got what they deserved.. and it was nice too that Reva got a proper burial. A perfect ending for everyone!

Vinnie, congrats on completing another FF👏...i would say that this is your best one yet..as it felt so much like PSH..as you said it was inspired by the events from the show...we all enjoyed it alot...each chapter was amazing, full of surprises (lol can't forget 5 year old Adi) and very well written. So hats off to you for a job well done..this FF truly can be a best seller.

I will miss it very much but it was fun while it lasted..no regrets..thank you so much for sharing this FF with us and we can't wait for the next one😃😉

Reading the chapter again😳

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croziaxx

@croziaxx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

hi vinnie !

beautiful ending of the story i love it 😳 and u know ? what is my fav line .. " when it comes to you I am not as strong as I think I am.,

this is very true , where r u ? and what r u doing nowadays ... any new story writing ? pleas let us know.. love u ❤️ 🤗

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Sandy

@Sandy66

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#323

😊HI Vinnie, I haven't read your new your NEW FF THE UNEXPECTED as yet, but I'll read it ASAP and give you my comment. Sorry about that😭. Work and other commitment kept me busy. Guess I'm the last one to read this wonderful Fan Fiction.

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Sandy

@Sandy66

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#324

😊Vinnie, amazing and exciting first chapter. Some similarity to the original show, such as Reva erotic behavior, Vickram hatred for RAI dancing and Jwala Thakur Singh behavior to the Bedni people. Love the tractor scene with Vickram and Sugni.❤️

Enjoying reading the first Chapter. Looking forward to read the rest of the Chapters.

Sara creation for the cover is awesome. Great Job Sara👍🏼

Thank You for entertaining us with your brilliant Fan Fiction.

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Sandy

@Sandy66

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#325

😊Interesting and awesome Chapter 2 Vinnie👍🏼. Maa Sahib's an old fashioned and a strong willed woman who believe in " until death do us part". Divorce is not option for her. It's amazing she prefer if Vickram stayed married to crazy Reva rather than divorce her.

Poor Vickram has his hands full with Reva strange behavior. Reva's full of surprise, her crazy behavior is just an act. Can't wait to see what she's up too.

Looking forward to read the next chapter.

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Sandy

@Sandy66

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#326

😊Vinnie, another amazing chapter👏. Enjoyed reading it. Love the relationship between Vickram and Sugni, their friendship so innocent and endearing. Love Sugni's character, so vivacious and innocent.

Reading this chapter brings back a lot of wonderful memories of our beloved show PHIR SUBAH HOGI at the beginning. Stories progressing very nicely. Thank you Vinnie. You're a very talented FAN FICTION writer. Keep it up👍🏼

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Sandy

@Sandy66

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#327

😊Wow!!!!, amazing Chapter 4 Vinnie. I enjoyed reading it, even though it was an emotional chapter. Gulabia untimely demise surprise me.😲

Gulabia and Sugni have a profoundly strong relationship as Mother and Daughter. I love it. Gulabia did the unthinkable in the Bedni's Society, by educating her daughter, instead off letting her followed into her footstep as a Rai Dancer.

Sugni's Uncles Hukum and Katari are selfish and good for nothing. No emotions were shown for the gravely sick sister.

Looking forward to reading the next Chapter. Thank you.

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Sandy

@Sandy66

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#328

😊Vinnie, another heartbreaking chapter.😭. Sugni's pain, suffering and agony is evident by just looking at her. She's in shock and denial that her Mom past away. Losing a loved one is not easy on one.

Vickram's supports both financially and physically is the elixir Sugni's need to get past her Mother's passing. Her ungrateful Uncles and Aunts are no help whatsoever.

It was a beautiful written chapter Vinnie. Kudos to you.👏 Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Don't worry Vinnie I'll read the Complete FAN FICTION and give my reviews. It'll take me some time, but I'll do it.😊

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Sandy

@Sandy66

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#329

😊 Another amazing Chapter Vinnie. Beautifully written. I'm not least bit surprised by Sugni's Uncles and Aunts actions. They were always money hungry, always leaching off their Sister's income. Now that she's gone, they didn't waste no time in doing Sugni's Sardhakai to old lecherous fool Sujan Singh. He's quite a character.

Sugni prayed for a miracle and lo and behold Thakur Vickram Singh came to her rescue.

Sugni's and Vickram's relationship base upon mutual trust and profound understanding between them, and I hope that will help them in the future.

Reading your Fan Fiction Vinnie bring back a lot of wonderful memories. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. Thank you.

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Sandy

@Sandy66

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#330

😊Beautifully Written Chapter 7 Vinnie. Sugni all settled into her new home.

Maa Thakur was impressed with Sugni's efficiency in the kitchen, that's why she hired her to work in the Haveli, instead off in the field.

Vickram always treated Sugni with respect, admiration, and dignity. He never differentiate between him and Sugni. That was always admirable able him.

Thank you Vinnie🤗. Looking forward to reading the next Chapter.

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