MehBeer Drabble: Strangers

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chemgirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

U r a fab writer...awesome post...just loved it...very touching n ...plz write more

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TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: war_is_peace
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i likies the titles 😆
so i loved the meher pov ...who is she kidding! she hates chinese..she went there to have a look at him!
and abeer...poor thing...his whole room must be filled with meher...o the orange shirt ! :'(
i loved the whole set up of this OS

ps - i hate you..like i love u 😆

i loved writing mehers part more as well ❤️ but then mehbeer arent complete without abeer so added him 😉

thank you so much hiyu. you know you are one of my most fav readers :-* 🤗

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TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Shiiya-
aww' poor MehBeer...
From being so close they became strangers sigh!
the best thing about this is that its so subtle, like I can totally imagine MehBeer being in this kinda situation.
You've captured their thoughts & feeling's so well in this Drabble. I want that orange shirt back in the show lol! Anyway it was a great read.

Thank you so much for reading and liking yaa 😳 I am experimenting with this style so its a huge motivation that i am able to get the feelings across. glad you liked it.

and the orange shirt is ❤️ i want it back too 😳

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TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: neetha
very nicley written Ari..u r one of the best in sadism genre in BD forum.
The characters and their reactions is captured really well in the drabble. Meher is calm, inspite of her inner turmoil and Abeer is spontaneous who is unaware of how to hide feelings, this is how these two are and u have exactly portrayed them in the drabble as well. I loved the content.

neethaaa where were you yaa? i missed you around here. 🤗 and woah that is a biggie. sadism zindabad 🤣 thank you so much. i am glad you liked it 😳 means alot :)