MehBeer OS || Amnesia

Originally posted by: MySarun

Wow .. I had tears in my eyes 😔
Hope u continue this .. I can't see Mehbeer hurting like that 😭
Loved the OS 😳 !

This is beautiful Kiret!

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

This is beautiful Kiret!

Again, your writing is so simple but yet so sweet. I really felt for the two and to have both their perspectives was great. The transition between the perspectives was really smooth and didn't feel choppy at all. Something that I need to work on in my own work! 😆

But, this was beautiful nonetheless. Reading any of your work is always a pleasure. 😳

emotional os

Originally posted by: -.serendipity.-

Reading your comments always makes me blush 😳😳 It's super sweet of you and I'm glad you enjoy reading my work 😳🤗

Beautiful OS as I expected! I expect good writing from u n u never fail to impress me :) simple yet classy! I liked the thought process of both Meher n Abeer on same situation :) continue writing...

P.s one req..i want an OS wic is intense and passionate love:P its a req if u could write one such ;)

Originally posted by: jeharshu

emotional os

loved it so muh

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Aww, you're so adorable! 🤗

A sweet writer like you deserves sweet comments. <3

Btw, I just noticed, there are so many one-shots based on songs these days. I think we're all craving for a song sequence in the show. I know I am. 😆