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Kaay

@-.serendipity.-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: neetha
Beautiful OS as I expected! I expect good writing from u n u never fail to impress me :) simple yet classy! I liked the thought process of both Meher n Abeer on same situation :) continue writing...

P.s one req..i want an OS wic is intense and passionate love:P its a req if u could write one such ;)

That's so kind of you! Thank you so much! 😃

I will definitely try writing something like that, haven't written one like that but I am going to try to!

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Isha

@tereliyex

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

This was just heartbreaking.
I cried. ... So much.
But so well written yaar! I loved it! I wish Abeer in the show could say that last line

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

I love this OS! Literally!

I love how you potray emotions!

Do write more! xx

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Fero

@Euphoria_V

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Really superb
I had tears in my eyes

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suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Tell me how can simple sweet writing bring tears to my eyes. Aww I just loved ur writing .

U pen everything so clearly , with utmost simplicity . deep meaning in subtle way of portrayal.

It's a literal beautiful piece. I am in love with ur writing.

Keep writing kiret

Love u for this ❤️

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Awsme
Loved it

Keep smiling

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Rachna

@richurachna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

very emotional ... thanks for pm

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

This was beautiful❤️

Well penned⭐️

if possi write a 2nd part to itt😳

jus lovedd ittt😊

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TeekhiMishti

@TeekhiMishti

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

SADISM SADISM MORE SADISM 🤣 bring it on.!!! duba do is forum ko asuon mei 🤣 Ari khush hui Ari bahut bahut khush hui 😈 🤣

Firstly the banner is gawjus ❤️ Aichu seriously has done a great job with it. I could stare at it for hours

The song is really good as well. Though i've never heard it. I really liked the lyrics.

Meher leaving abeer for his own good is such a sadistic way for their seperation and especially on their anniversary 😭 Girl you gave sadism another level.

The way you described both their conditions and their heartbreak 🥺 My poor babies 😭

Good job kiri 😳 Write more :)

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@bepannaahpyaar.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Res

Because Kiret <3

*UnRes*

OMG! That was so beautiful yet so sad! I love that song by the way, works quite well here. I guess we really did see ki kabhi kabhi dil hi ban jaata hai khud ki hi love story ka villain. She loved him too much and she left, he loved her too much and he hurt.

Well written Kiret!

Kriti ❤️

Edited by IttiSiKriti - 10 years ago

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