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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Ishana-

This was just heartbreaking.
I cried. ... So much.
But so well written yaar! I loved it! I wish Abeer in the show could say that last line


Thank you so much Ishana! 🤗

I'm sorry I didn't mean to make you cry! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: xxSomeonesLuvxx

I love this OS! Literally!

I love how you potray emotions!


Do write more! xx


Thank you love! x
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --fero--

Really superb
I had tears in my eyes


Thanks Fero! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful writing dear!
This was so sad and I'm a sucker for sad stories :(
Do you plan on continuing? Please consider it <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome os
beautifully written...
Read sumthing by u after long time.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Tell me how can simple sweet writing bring tears to my eyes. Aww I just loved ur writing .


U pen everything so clearly , with utmost simplicity . deep meaning in subtle way of portrayal.
It's a literal beautiful piece. I am in love with ur writing.

Keep writing kiret
Love u for this ❤️


Thank you so much Madhu! It's so kind of you :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww ...dat was so beautiful Kiret 🤗
u penned down Meher and Abeer's emotions very well
one can feel how much hurt they are and still Abeer is confused between Meher's tears and break up


Loved it and Do write more 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anapneo3003

This was beautiful❤️

Well penned⭐️
if possi write a 2nd part to itt😳
jus lovedd ittt😊


Thank you so much!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -TeekhiMishti-

SADISM SADISM MORE SADISM 🤣 bring it on.!!! duba do is forum ko asuon mei 🤣 Ari khush hui Ari bahut bahut khush hui 😈 🤣


Firstly the banner is gawjus ❤️ Aichu seriously has done a great job with it. I could stare at it for hours

The song is really good as well. Though i've never heard it. I really liked the lyrics.

Meher leaving abeer for his own good is such a sadistic way for their seperation and especially on their anniversary 😭 Girl you gave sadism another level.

The way you described both their conditions and their heartbreak 🥺 My poor babies 😭

Good job kiri 😳 Write more :)


Thank you so much Ari! Means a lot!

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