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naina

@naina927

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

That was so cute...!!!!
Loved it to the core...

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TeekhiMishti

@TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Abe oy...12 year old goof? are you doing their baal vivah? 🤣🤣

I liked it. Though the language could've been better, didnt have that shruthi touch ;) But the idea and execution was really really cute ❤️

And suddenly there seems to be a dearth of cute stories on this forum 🤣 everyone is riding the sadism wave 🤣

Abeer coming to set meher free was so aww 😆 and mehers reaction 🤣 it is a really nice plot idea. i mean to make abeer think so sensibly about their whole marraige scenario. if only they had that sense before :@ idjits.!!!

Oh and i loved their shouting matching 🤣 pagal only they both are 🤣

and the ending as always yum. screw the lipstick indeed 🤣

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TeekhiMishti

@TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: VaticanCameos

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VJDIPA

@VJDIPA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Thankew for the pm..

Very well written!!

Pls pm me when you update next part..

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suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Oh Gosh matured Abeer is too cute handle 😆

He did considered her wish , aww and he entered through her window , this more cute

Loved it . Well written.

For some reasons Travis Maddox was running in my mind through out the read from beautiful marriage sequel of beautiful disaster .

Loved it girl keep writing.

Thank u so much for pm

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suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Okay Aaj CC mei Koyi nay hai , so utilising time to complete my pending works 🤣

Taking chances comment

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That was amazing Girl !!

And ur sadisim I am in love with it lol u nailed it .

I too pen sadistic stuff , but my witty humour from no where barges between and give shock to readers in middle .

But this plainly perfect . I should admit reading abeers heart break my heart churned a little 😆

And Meher my head strong girl and her mooting senses u portrayed perfectly . Loved it to the core .

Thank u so much for pm .

That was a brilliant read 😳

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suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: ananya925
Such an awesome os!! Thanks a tonn for writing it and yeah plzz write more. U have a style of writing which is unique which is likewise possessed by best writers of the forum- naina, madhu, fero and ittisikriti. Hope to read more.:)

Eyes popping 😲

Well thank u Tish , still can't digest what u just said 🤣

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Ask Me :)

@bepannaahpyaar.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Hey Shru, aww isn't IF just a total b*tch about formatting? Come here you, 🤗

I thought the premise was super cute!!! I also believe Meher's decision to get married wasn't exactly an easy on on her part, and so this whole situation was adorable and totally believable. Is this the "bit you wrote but didn't know what to do about?" 😆 What made you finally post it? Did it just not fit?

Either way, I'm just glad I got to read it. Keep writing!

Kriti