Badtameez One Shots : Wedding Blues Page 5 - Page 3

Originally posted by: -Shiiya-

This was FLAWLESS! Definately one of the best OS's I've read so far ... It was brilliant.. Thanks for the PM :)

Originally posted by: IttiSiKriti

Guess what?!

It's letting me POST!!!

Taking full advantage of this generosity from the IF Gods.

RES (Like a Boss 😎)

*Unres*

Wow, ok um. THAT WAS AMAZING.
First of all, for Abeer's part, I adored the way you described his heartbreak. Like it never felt Devdas-ish, but it still had the right melancholic tone. And Meher, I love how understated her suffering is, but you know goddamn well it's there.

And the end, you had me sighing...it was pretty damn perfect. 😉😆

Thanks for this,

Kriti.

PS. Also the spamming error is back (I know cause I tried RESing on Shameless 😆).

Originally posted by: malikakas

That was amazing! Loved loved loved Abeer's perspective... especially the part where he got that boyish exuberance that all he has to do is reach out and it will all be fixed... on only to end with heart crushing defeat. No wonder he was so angry for so long.

And Meher... "I am not going to fail for a lack of trying"-- I think its going to come down to that for Meher... She is going to have to take a leap of faith again.

Originally posted by: qazplm

This was intense and heartbreakingly beautiful ❤️ Please do write more.

Originally posted by: cutie15

Omg this was just so beautiful...:)
Loved it..!! :)

Originally posted by: .SSS.

Melancholic-ally beautiful!
Your style of writing is so different. Well written.

Yes! I'm waiting for shameless.

Thanks for the PM Shruthi. Keep 'em coming!