MehBeer Dark FF: Mere Nishaan| Part 2|3/9 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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waiting for the story to procced further
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Loving it already. Can't wait for the story to unfold (:
Edited by -Ravneet. - 10 years ago
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nice to see u here too writing dark one on mehbeer... looking forward for it...
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Part 1

" Hello Ms.Purohit" said Abeer in a formal tone, and stressing on her name specially.
Abeer also forwarded his hand to complete the handshake. And the moment their hands touched, their hearts raced and time for them halted.

Meher saw herself losing in his charms all over again and Abeer didn't want it to happen. Neither did he want to lose in her, nor did he want her to lose herself in him, at least not in the near future.

He firmly took back his hand, jerking Meher back to the painful reality of their life. And it did its job effectively. Meher realized that he still hadn't forgotten what occurred in the past.

Well, who could forget a play no one expected but everyone loved. She had broken his heart once and for payback, he was breaking her every time they came in front of each other.

Meher was brought back to earth by Nissar's words which would mean a separation once again.

" Abeer, let me introduce you to our other clients!" said Nissar, with a charming smile.

Jhuki Teri Palkon Pe Mil Jaye Mujhe Panhaa
Palkein Giri Ansu Bhari Reh Jaye Mere Nishaan


Abeer curtly nodded in assurance while eyeing at Meher intently. He could see that she had changed herself a lot. She, no longer looked like a desperate immature teenager. She had a mature look on her face and immense pain hidden in her eyes, but he chose to ignore the latter.

Abeer moved from there, and Meher felt energy leave her body.

She couldn't blame the destiny, could she?

After all, whatever was happening was the result of her own doings which were completely immature.

Meher's eyes traced the path which Abeer's feet followed. He could sense her gaze on him but he chose to not acknowledge it, for his eyes have been always ignore by her and now she had no rights to expect him to see her searching eyes.


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Parking,

The party was still ongoing but Meher had no reason to stay inside all the noise which her heart craved for peace.

Peace.

She was the best example of a person, who destroyed the peace of two lives by her immature deeds.

She wanted to go back home but then thought that her mom would shower questions on her and she was in no mood to answer them. Hence, she decided to take a stroll in the nearby park.

As she walked into the wide patches of greenery, away from the noise, she starting feeling home. But there was something else which was making her feel this way. Rather, it was presence of someone extremely special to her, which made her feel this way.

Suddenly her eyes fell on the reason of the homely feeling, Abeer Malhotra, who was smoking in the park since smoking in the party was not allowed.

He was smoking?

The Abeer she last saw 8 years before hated smokers and smoking and now he came out of a party to smoke. How much can time change a person?

Meher went towards him and threw the cigarette off his hands much to Abeer's shock.

" What the hell do you think you are doing? And What the hell are you doing here?" asked Abeer, through gritted teeth and anger visible in his eyes.

"In this noise-filled atmosphere, anyone would require air! And I am preventing air-pollution by not letting you smoke here." said Meher, while smirking at him.

" Oh! Is there no other place in this whole locality that you came here only?" asked Abeer, raising his eyebrow as he hated her very presence.

" Now I don't know, if you know do tell me." said Meher, with a naughty smile hinting that if there was one more locality he too might not be here.

Abeer irritatedly turned his face away from her, hinting her that he didn't want her in front of him.

" Abeer.." started Meher, as she wanted to apologize badly.

" GO AWAY, Ms.Purohit" shouted Abeer.

" What is happening here?" came a voice from behind, and soon a policeman came into light.

" What are you doing here?" asked the policeman, eyeing at Meher, lustily.

Abeer didn't want to answer him and hence Meheri had to answer.

" Sir...actually..." started Meher, to be cut in between by the policeman.

" If you can't say a dialogue properly then why did you come here to romance with your Majnu?" asked policeman confirming if the guy was her BF.

Abeer sternly looked at policeman while Meher signed him to calm down.

" What are you saying, Sir? He is not my boy-friend." rejected Meher.

" Then are you his colleague?" asked policeman.

" No, Sir."

Abeer looked at Meher intently at why she was refusing the truth. She was his colleague and Meher signed with her eyes to calm down.



" She is not your girlfriend nor is she your colleague. Then who is she?" asked the policeman, with his eyebrows raised while Abeer and Meher, whose eyes were locked in an intense eye lock and couldn't hear anything except their hearts which were beating irregularly.

" Now I understood, ande ka fanda. Kya Chal Raha Hai Kaala Dhanda?" taunted the policeman, with bad intentions in his mind.

Abeer and Meher jerked off to the present with the impure words spoken by the policeman.

" What are you saying, dammit? Can't you speak politely? Don't you dare speak to her like that." roared Abeer in Meher's defense.

" Aye Chal Chal...Don't tell me what to say and what not to say. And you Madam, come to the station right now." shouted the policeman.

As the policeman went ahead was hoping that Meher would be coming with him but he was stopped on his tracks when Abeer shouted,

" She is my WIFE!"

--FLASHBACK--

" You made fun of my love right?"

She felt the sacred chain of marriage being tied to her, while she continued to struggle to free herself but it was of no avail.

" You rejected me right?"

Though it was an anticipated action, she broke from inside as the red color of vermillion filled her partition, marking her as his, forever.

" Now your whole life has become a joke,Meher Purohit. And I reject you right now because YOU don't deserve LOVE, YOU deserve PAIN." roared Abeer Malhotra before leaving her struggling to free herself from the ropes which bound her hands and legs.

--FLASHBACK ENDS--

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Sounds interesting. Looking forward to the next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So mehbeer are married n abeer married her forcefully,interesting...wonder what meher did that he hates her so much...continue soon...this is going to be a hit ff
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Amazing update yagna , quite intriguing
Update soon , can't wait to know what made Abeer hate her more.
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Nice update...i love dark ff and this is awsome dark ff on mehbeer...love it...
Update soon and plz do pm me
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Part 2

" Oh that's why you were fighting! But the park is now closed so please leave!" sighed the policeman who felt bad that he couldn't lay his hands on the gorgeous girl in front of him.

Abeer walked away from there without even looking at Meher, but he knew that her intense gaze was still tracing the path his feet followed. Meher walked but not even for a second did she stop looking at him with all the love she had in her heart for him.

She didn't realize when the redemption, the pain and the guilt in her got transformed into love but now she was determined to make the love in her heart, triumph and she vowed that she would not let Abeer hate her.

"Abeer..."

Apna Lo Tum Ya Mujhe Bhula Do,
Keh Bhi Do Jo Bhi Shikhwa Tera Ho,
Khud Ko Kyun Dete Ho Saza Ye?
Maaf Bhi Kardo Meri Khaadein,

Mere Sawaalon Ka Jawaab Do..Do Na..


" Don't even think that I think of you in that way! You mean nothing to me, Meher Purohit! Nothing at all! We have no relationship except that of hatred!" said Abeer, through gritted teeth with immense anger and hatred but only he knew how much his heart bled while enunciating each and every word of the sentence.

He walked away from there but she was left behind, in the place where she was, replicating what happened exactly 8 years before. He had left her in pain, in guilt and most of all in love. She moved on for the world but inside she was still the same Meher who wanted Abeer's love and loved his presence, his attention and him.

She hadn't realized when tears streamed down her slightly flushed cheeks. She silently wiped them off her cheeks and made her way towards the party as she was sure Nissar would be worried for her.

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Party,

Meher was right. Nissar was searching her in the entire party and was about to go out to look for her when he bumped himself to Meher, who instantly lost her balance and required Nissar to stabilize her by holding her waist.

" Hey Meher! You okay? Where were you? You know how worried I was!" bombarded Nissar with questions which never seemed to cease.

" Chillax, Nissar! I just went out to have some fresh air. There was too much of noise in the party so just got a mild headache." said Meher, while straightening herself up and slightly distancing herself from Nissar.

" But you could have informed right?" asked Nissar, with a serious look on his face, which made him look cute.

"I am sorry, baba! Now forgive me. I will never repeat this mistake again." said Meher, while holding his hand inbetween hers.

Suddenly the lights turned off, and they realized that the dancefloor was open for people. And Nissar being the host and Meher being the guest of honor, they had to dance first.

Nissar pulled Meher along with him to the dancefloor to sway to light romantic beats playing in the background. While a slight smile played on both their faces while dancing, Abeer's looks were worth looking at.

The wine filled glass in his hands, would have cried at its fate on being in hands, which were on the verge to break it due to the building up frustration and jealousy in him.

As he saw Nissar and Meher dancing closely, he felt something being snatched away from him, a piece of heart being broken.

He hated her, didn't he?

But maybe there was love hidden under that hatred, which begged to come out from the dreaded cover of hatred, but so much was the hatred that it over-powered the all-over-powering love.

However, as they say jealousy takes away the best of you. Abeer threw away the glass in his hands and proceeded to dance with some random girl on the dance floor, to evoke the same feelings in Meher.

But he didn't know that, the love which Meher had for him, would never result in jealousy but only in pain.

Love was a bad disease which destroyed their live forever. They could never be those happy-go-lucky or careless people they had been in each other's company in the past. Their past had influenced their present so much that their hearts craved for each other, their souls pined for each other but distances were painfully created by them.

A feeling which Abeer wanted to suppress and leave unrecognized, started brewing in his heart as he saw Meher laughing heartily in the solacing arms of Nissar.

She used to laugh for him like that, right?

But now he knew that he will never be able to make her laugh like before. He himself broke the relation then how can he go back and ask for it to be joined?

And how can one forget his ego, which would stop him even if his mind wanted it to happen?

His already broken heat was breaking into more pieces, as he saw an elegant smile dancing on Meher's lips and a flirtatious look appear on Nissar's face. How can he not recognise flirtatious looks when he himself had it plastered on his face, 8 years ago?

He was dancing with the girl for the sake of it, but his eyes were dancing on the sensuous body of Meher, which was well revealed from the translucent layers of the green fabric, she was wearing.

He couldn't act for long and he knew it. He signed the DJ to announce the change of partners and immediately he saw a saddened face which was of Nissar's, followed by Meher's.

Maybe she likes his company and presence.

As soon as the grip on Meher was gone, a stronger grip was found on her waist and this time it was of a person who was in every thought, every dream of hers. And it was a touch, which still managed to send shivers across her spine and could still have the same effect on her as it had 8 years back.

What had happened 8 years back that everything changed so drastically?

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Edited by .MereRangMein. - 10 years ago
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Yeh Poore Reserved's ki line Lagi Hai!

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