MehBeer Dark FF: Mere Nishaan| Part 2|3/9

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MehBeer FF: Mere Nishaan

Hello Everyone,

This is Yagya Chowdary, a crazy creative and a writer. I am loving the way the story is progressing and this story was something which struck to me when I saw the promos. So I hope you like it.

Love,
Yagz

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Prologue:

Sizzling Dances and Intoxicating Drinks. This is what Meher Purohit found when she looked around herself. She was here for her best friend Nissar's Birthday Party but it seemed much more than that for her.

Nissar couldn't be with her as he was busy with all his friends around him and loneliness took over her.

Only if he was here...

Meher was lost in her own world when a similar gust of air hit her gently bringing her out of her trance. Meher mentally jerked herself for thinking that HE was here.

But soon her so-called thoughts turned into stark reality as she saw Nissar approaching her along with HIM. Meher was not prepared to meet him, at least not after what happened that night, which happened to be their last meet.

She turned around to leave when Nissar called her,

" Hey Meher! Stop!"

Meher rooted herself to the ground and turned around as slowly as possible, while she kept her eyes lowered sensing his intense gaze on her.

" Meher, Meet Abeer Malhotra, my new client!" chirped Nissar excitedly.

Meher forwarded her hand for formal hand shake and Abeer couldn't help but notice that her hands were shivering.

" Hi..Abeer." said Meher meekly.

Nissar suddenly felt suspicious as he never saw Meher getting nervous before anyone and today she was literally shivering. He could sense the air getting thick due to awkwardness between them but it was the first time they are meeting right?

Or Maybe they shared a past, which none could forget ; a past which had the potential to drastically affect their present and their future ; a past which had just pain in it.

Will the past fade and give rise to a new future or will it completely change their destiny?

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This one seems really interesting...!!! I'm excited for it...
I really wanted someone to start a dark ff on mehbeer... I really like dark stories... But I can't write something dark... What an irony...!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: naina927

This one seems really interesting...!!! I'm excited for it...

I really wanted someone to start a dark ff on mehbeer... I really like dark stories... But I can't write something dark... What an irony...!!!



Haha, It happens! I love comedy and I can't really write a lot of comedy, but oneliners and all, yeah! Thanks a lot, baby!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You had me at Dark..

Seriously well written ! Keep up the good work :)

xx
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this is amazing... continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Finally some one to write dark ff for mehbeer cool...
looking forward to it!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yagyaseni



Haha, It happens! I love comedy and I can't really write a lot of comedy, but oneliners and all, yeah! Thanks a lot, baby!


Haha... Means I'm not alone... Great 😆
And ur welcome...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nicely written...I was waiting fr a dark ff on mehbeer...continue soon n pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hehe, am dam excited for this dark story
Well written continue soon

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