MehBeer TS:Broken Hearts-Part 2 page 4 - Page 2

Originally posted by: --Ari--

thank you for that. i just hate res's 🤣

Originally posted by: naina927

mera bhi res aa gya... 😊

Time to unres 😃 thank god 🤣

Finally..!! Applaud to me 👏 congratulations 🤣👏

Anyways you again wrote something Sadie sadie... Kitna rulaogi yaar...??? 😭abhi to bas shuruwat hai 😉kahin yeh badla toh nahi hai na...?? 'Ab naam mohabbat ke' ka badla 'broken hearts' 😲 badla hota to aur sadistic hota 🤣

Because this TS is struck in my head... Given it started from that intense scene only... Meher standing alone in rain and abeer leaving her behind... This scene I tell you... I'm dead thinking about what will it be like 🤢 that scene is stuck in my head as well. every time i think of mehbeer it comes to my mind. thats where their story started/ended. 😭

Loved it though... ❤️ thank you so much. means alot. especially coming from a writer 😆

And tha last lines... Aww... i started the ts around two/three sets of lines, this was one of them ❤️

He wanted to save her,

She only wanted to be saved from him.

Originally posted by: --CrazyForKSG--

Awesome ts
well.written

Originally posted by: ..Steph..

FIRST OF ALL..

This better be really really REALLY LONG Missy.. cause this is good stuff, and I looove good stuff, and you are awesome, and I love you <3 and you need to write more <3 lol if only you knew how many pieces got dumped and sacrificed in its making you'd know how long it was to write this 🤣🤣 but as long as mehbeer ki kripa bani rahe it'll keep coming 😉

Dude, seriously, I love your selection of words.. like it hits you ! HITS YOU in all the right places ! Keep writing okay, like I said.. you've got a gift !! that came out a bit differently 🤣 but i suppose you meant it as a compliment 🤣 i'll take it 😆 thank you so much 😆 🤗 your words get me so conscious of myself. and then i want to write better and improve to be worthy of them 😆

🤗

xx

Originally posted by: --Ari--

Originally posted by: .SSS.

This OS was really so good. Poignant yet beautiful. Abeer!...You just captured him perfectly. how i wish i could actually capture him ☺️ glad you liked it 🤣 thank you so much 😛 writing abeer is the hardest. too much pain 😭

Thanks for the PM :)