MehBeer TS:Broken Hearts-Part 2 page 4 - Page 4

Originally posted by: war_is_peace

this was amazing 👏 thank you

par phirse ittu saa 😭 me greedy..me wants more 😆 good things come in small packages 😉

i want one more part bass 😡 let us see 😆

i cant see my abeer hurt by pinky n then alone 😭 atleast meher and bua se to better hi hai

ps - ye le 🤗

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Originally posted by: .SSS.

Writing Abeer is the hardest, I second you but you know: this couldn't be anything better than this. Just perfect. You got him 😆 its over whelming but he is such an infinite pool of emotions..ahh a writers dream combine that with pearls expressions and its

Chalo! I will also make a wish for you: in acually capturing him, if only its possible 😆 ahhh thank you . i love you . 🤗

Originally posted by: .SSS.

An amazing update.. Your updates are straight to the point. I'm loving this. Keep up the good work.

Originally posted by: naina927

Ari darling how many times do I have to tell that I love your work... 😕 As many times as you wish. i am always happy to hear that 🤣 ☺️
Anyways I loved it again... it was so amazing and its the first thing I read this morning... so ab definitely din bhar sarr mein yahighumta rahega... nothing better than starting a morning with sadism 😆
Mehbeer... aww they love each other soo much... yes they do 😭
The last part was the best one for me... thank you so much. glad you liked it :)


All he cared about was sacrificing him-self for her.
All she wanted to do was save him no matter what the cost.

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Wohhh

When will ur chudailgiri end 😆

It's Amazing baby , na beyond amazing

Ke writing girl.

I loved every line