MehBeer TS:Broken Hearts-Part 2 page 4

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I'd like to say two things before you read on,

1) Damn it is ridiculously hard to write something when you don't know how you came up with it the first time 🀣 Thank you for loving my crazy experiment 'Her and Him' so much πŸ˜† It took me almost 2 days to come up with something similar. Hope its worthy of it.

2) MehBeer make me so freaking over-whelmed everytime i think of them 😭 how do i write sadistic on them when i almost break down thinking about them 😭 So again if its not good enough i am sorry. i will try better next time πŸ˜†

So after that ridiculously long authors note 🀣 Here goes.

Broken Hearts

Time heals all wounds they say, but some wounds only get deeper with time, with every minute the reality gets harder to deal with, with every second you wish it wasn't your truth.

He left her stranded alone at night,

She didn't give him one chance to make it alright.

How do you get over being let down by the one person who you thought would never let you go? They both hadn't figured it out yet. And so,

They went on faking, acting like their heart wasn't breaking.

Their broken hearts called for each other,

Their souls longed to be re-united.

But for 8 years,

He told his heart he hated her,

She convinced her soul she didn't love him anymore.

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The worst kind of heart breaks they say are the ones where no one knows that the person is breaking on the inside, where a person is dying on the inside but a smile adorns their face.

She broke his heart,

He loved her with all the broken pieces.

No matter how much she tried to be in-different he sought ways to bring up their past and make her forget every ounce of control she had strived to develop. Every-time he bought up the past she felt she would explode with the pain and longing for what could have been,

He brought out the worst in her,

She couldn't help return the pain he inflicted.

Abeer sat in a dimly lit corner of the house he had come to, to save her, having put down by the one person he was doing it all for, after all this time she still didn't believe in him,

He burnt with agony and yet,

He only wanted to vanish into the sea of her eyes.

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Abeer couldn't take it anymore, but he knew walking away wasn't an option, every moment with her hurt but seeing her hurt would be much worse.

Meher couldn't handle what the proximity to him was doing to her, she walkedout of the house realising anything was better than the pain of old scars re-opened,

He wanted to save her,

She only wanted to be saved from him.

PART 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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arre waah tuune finally likh diyaπŸ˜†
ittu saa hai...thoda zyaada rula nahi sakti thi dono ko?

ok back to OS
i loved it aru
and that abeer deciding to not run away this time was

the last lines 😭
he wants to save her n she only wants to be saved from him πŸ₯Ί

ps - abhi likh...aur likh...jaldi likh πŸ˜›

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Posted: 10 years ago
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no matter what you have to be the first 🀣🀣

soyi nahi tu?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res 😳
Omg , this is amazing behen , no words left to speak .
You spoke their souls , u heard whispers , mourns of their crumbled pieces of hearts .
Every line is brilliant . U r too good .
Love u baby for this wonderful piece . It made my morning .
Keep writing
muahh
Thank u so much for pm
Edited by madhufx9... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First one to unress !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Ari--


no matter what you have to be the first 🀣🀣

soyi nahi tu?


teri OS ke aur mere dil ke taar jude huye hain darling πŸ˜†
tuune post kiya aur mai uth gayi 🀣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: war_is_peace

arre waah tuune finally likh diyaπŸ˜† YES. FINALLLYYY.!!!!! *insert happy dance*

ittu saa hai...thoda zyaada rula nahi sakti thi dono ko? ittu sa likhne mei kittu se pages got chucked you know better than anyone else 🀣🀣 but then again its a TS two more parts are yet to come πŸ˜‰

ok back to OS
i loved it aru thank you thank you...thats like music to my ears after all the madness 🀣🀣
and that abeer deciding to not run away this time was he knows what his badtameez dil wants this time πŸ˜‰

the last lines 😭
he wants to save her n she only wants to be saved from him πŸ₯Ί tereko nahi pata mera dil kitna break hota hai thinking about these two crazy idiots. ye likhte likhte i realized smethng that made me even more sad...tereko fb pe boloongi 😭

ps - abhi likh...aur likh...jaldi likh πŸ˜› let us hope is baar zyada pages shaheed na ho 🀣

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Res 😳

Omg , this is amazing behen , no words left to speak .
You spoke their souls , u heard whispers , mourns of their crumbled pieces of hearts .
Every line is brilliant . U r too good .
Love u baby for this wonderful piece . It made my morning .
Keep writing
muahh
Thank u so much for pm


WOW thats motivating .. mwahhh thank you for that ... especially after the hard time i've had with this... means alot... glad you liked it πŸ˜† plus i've never seen anyone so happy to read something so sadistic 🀣 🀣 love you :-* bas aa gale lag ja πŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhufx9...

First one to unress !!


thank you for that. i just hate res's 🀣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Ari--


WOW thats motivating .. mwahhh thank you for that ... especially after the hard time i've had with this... means alot... glad you liked it πŸ˜† plus i've never seen anyone so happy to read something so sadistic 🀣 🀣 love you :-* bas aa gale lag ja πŸ€—

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Literary stuff always makes me forget pain. I will be beguiled with beauty of weaving lines .
Waise u know na we are sadistic , Phir bi u ask such questions πŸ˜†

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