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Shrisha

@...Shrisha...

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

awesome stopry

loved the prologue and first chapter

update soon

and pm me if possible

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Fero

@Euphoria_V

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

⭐️⭐️⭐️Good one dear

👏

Please pm me

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hiya

@coolhi1988

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

this seems to b interesting...
well written..👏
plz continue soon...
pm me if possible

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hiya

@coolhi1988

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: ...Shefa...
interesting concept!!

hii shef..
nice to see u in this forum...
hw r u?
y dont y cum to cc this days???

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Arifa Sultana Shefa.

@Magpie_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: coolhi1988
hii shef..
nice to see u in this forum...
hw r u?
y dont y cum to cc this days???

di 🤗 how r u?
I am fine...bohut busy hu aur mere pass new cc ki link bhi nehi hain

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Anjali

@clary

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: shailusri1983

Yes. I'm back from the Trip. Great to meet old friends on a new forum. Really sad that NAUC ended. But this new show is also very promising and interesting. Started watching it now. Some of the major characters who are there on this show will be there in this FF. There will be a lot of new characters also. Hope you enjoy this FF like my other FFs.

Great to hear that :)

Well, I was also happy to see some of my old friends here. NAUC had to end so that, this could come and your amazingly different stories would follow along :p

Badtameez Dil will not dissapoint me as I have given my hand to one couple and since the story is such a way, none of the leads will change, nor will my heart break . It's a youth shw yet again and a quite intense one. NAUC was more like a family show...I will enjoy any of your FFs Shailu Di! quite obviously..Hahaha

Anjali 😊

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Anjali

@clary

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Ohh..Did you put it in an episode kind? or as a chapter?

However that was good. Really good. I liked how you explained Abeer's dad and his situation. I too need to understand the song and Meher's connection. I'll think!

Bye, Anajli 😊

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Fero

@Euphoria_V

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Really good one dear

Beautifully penned down

Thanks for the pm

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hiya

@coolhi1988

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ...Shefa...

di 🤗 how r u?
I am fine...bohut busy hu aur mere pass new cc ki link bhi nehi hain

m f9 dear...
i dint knew u dint hv it..
but dear she would hv send u a pm on new cc & if u replied to it then she would provide u d link...

Edited by coolhi1988 - 10 years ago

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Shailaja

@shailusri1983

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: NiRajCraZey
Ohh..Did you put it in an episode kind? or as a chapter?
However that was good. Really good. I liked how you explained Abeer's dad and his situation. I too need to understand the song and Meher's connection. I'll think!

Bye, Anajli 😊

Abeer is narrating his story and the story of his group Phoenix in an FM channel.So it will be full of songs along with the actual story side by side. Just like a show, there will be breaks and a bit of suspense about what is coming up on the other end of the break. The first chapter is still not over. We have still not seen Meher or any of Abeer's other friends. I'm sorry about not being able to send the PMs or reply to the any of the comments. I was very held up . But I love to read each and every comment of my readers. I may not be able to PM anyone for the next two updates.

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