The Rise of the Phoenix: A FF (Showtime 1 contd. ) 21/7/2015 Pg. 5

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THE RISE OF THE PHOENIX

PROLOGUE

"Sometimes our heart becomes the villain of our love story. The same heart also becomes the villain our friendship story when we do not know where our friendship ends and love begins. Hi, I'm Abeer Malhotra and this is my story...No! This is our story...the story of seven inseparable friends...the story of the PHOENIX. Yes! That's what we were called when we were in college. It was the name of our gang. It was the name of our music band...a band which exists no more...just like our friendship! Signing off with that is your friend, your mithr, your humdum, Abeer Malhotra. To know more about us the PHOENIX, stay tuned to Music Time FM, same time every day."

Hi, I'm Sailaja. This is my first FF on this forum. Please let me know if any of you are interested in reading this story.

CONTENTS

SHOWTIME 1: Pg 2

SHOWTIME 1 Contd.: Pg 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yess I am interested to read it more
Please continue
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Yes yes...!!!
Interested... 😃
Continue soon n pm me...
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Intersting do continue n pm me for sure
Intrested dear prologue seems good
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Shailu Di!!!!!!!! It's sooo nice to see you!!!!! You're back from the trip right? How was it! I'm so happy to see you...Your FF's made me go mad!!!.Especially AHAT from the NAUC forum..It sgreat to see you here..You watching the show???? Mind you guys, she's the best writer I've ever seen !!! Her stories are simple yet very lovable!
Very excited for your new FF...Love you!

Anjali 😊
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Dont forget to pm me! Looking forward to your story..Make it long and in the end happy like the other two FF's of yours!
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Sounds very interesting, update soon and please pm me
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Originally posted by: NiRajCraZey

Shailu Di!!!!!!!! It's sooo nice to see you!!!!! You're back from the trip right? How was it! I'm so happy to see you...Your FF's made me go mad!!!.Especially AHAT from the NAUC forum..It sgreat to see you here..You watching the show???? Mind you guys, she's the best writer I've ever seen !!! Her stories are simple yet very lovable!

Very excited for your new FF...Love you!

Anjali 😊

Yes. I'm back from the Trip. Great to meet old friends on a new forum. Really sad that NAUC ended. But this new show is also very promising and interesting. Started watching it now. Some of the major characters who are there on this show will be there in this FF. There will be a lot of new characters also. Hope you enjoy this FF like my other FFs.
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Nice concept, would definitely be interested in wanting to read more! Please continue with it
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SHOWTIME 1

Abeer please answer your calls. I know that you regard me as Hitler Malhotra and not your father Kabir Malhotra. But I AM YOUR FATHER and I HAVE THE AUTHORITY to take decisions about your life. I know what is good for you. You will study MBA and not music. This was the third business school from which you've been rusticated. So I've been smart for you. I've spoken to my friend Satish Sahani who is the Dean of SSM Institute of Management, Kodaikanal. Do what you will, you will never be able to get rusticated from this business school. At last I'm going to see the degree of MBA after your name in two years. You might be thinking, what if I don't join at all, or if I run away...Don't even think about it! You know how weak your mother's heart is...So I expect that you'll be in time for the bridge course wherever you are now...I keep a track on all your credit card transactions. So I exactly know where you are now. Next time see to it that I don't receive a voice mail message and I speak to you in person...man to man.

"So that was my father for you. A Hitler Malhotra to the core. If there was a person who could manipulate even his own son, it was him...business magnate, Kabir Malhotra. You must have realized by now the bone of contention between me and my father. He wanted me to do MBA while I wanted to pursue a career in music. My father came to Mumbai with a capital of thousand rupees and dreams of millions. After twenty five years he had the millions of bank balance in reality. But he never realized that I too had dreams of my own. And that those dreams were necessarily not consonant with his dreams. I too wanted millions but I wanted to win a million hearts with my music. While I was a rebel to the core, I was going to meet someone that day who was the epitome of discipline and order, the keeper of the rule book, the topper of the batch, the perfect mystery, and my muse Meher Purohit. I know that many of you don't listen to the old classics. But they happen to be my all-time favorites. Here's one such wonderful song for you.

Mere saamne waali khidki mein

Ek chaand ka tukda rehta hai

Afsos ye hai ke vo hamse

Kuchh ukhda ukhda rehta hai

Mere saamne waali khidki mein

Ek chaand ka tukda rehta hai

Jis roz se dekha hai usko

Ham shamaa jalaana bhool gaye

Dil thaam ke aise baithe hain

Kahin aana jaana bhool gaye

Ab aath pahar in aankhon mein

Vo chanchal mukhda rehta hai

Mere saamne waali khidki mein

Ek chaand ka tukda rehta hai

(Barsaat bhi aakar chali gayi Baadal bhi garaj kar baras gaye) -2

Par uski ek jhalak ko ham

Ai husn ke maalik taras gaye

Kab pyaas bujhegi aankhon ki

Din raat ye dukhda rehta hai

Mere saamne waali khidki mein

Ek chaand ka tukda rehta hai

Afsos ye hai ke vo hamse

Kuchh ukhda ukhda rehta hai

Mere saamne waali khidki mein

Ek chaand ka tukda rehta hai

You might be wondering what is the connection between Meher and the song which you heard just now? Keep on thinking. A little bit of brain work will not do you any harm. It's time for a break. But coming up on the other side of this break is how I and Meher met each other for the first time."

BREAK

Edited by shailusri1983 - 10 years ago

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