Mehbeer SS Humdard mehboob hota hai ( Chapter 5 , page 7) Completed!!

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hi guys!!!!!! thought of writing an ss on mehbeer ... so here it is ... a short prologue ... hope it creates curiosity ... so do tell me whether you like it or not... and do leave ypur feedback!!!!!!! ohh... and please buddy me for pms!!!!!!!ill be updating toghit ..!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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so guys... here a shorrt prologue... please tell me if i should continue ? and hit the like button and leave your feedback please !!!!!!😃😃😃😃😃


Prologue

She was wearing a white ankle length dress... just like she was wearing on the day she first met him... she was sitting on a rock .. which was near the seashore... she was lost in her thoughts... how she first met him here ... the destininy played her game and ... she got married to him... their friends were so happy ... they were so happ y... but then ... what seemed almost like a dream... had to be over... the accident ... he forgot everything... even who is his wife... staying in the same house ... she had to pretend like ... some stranger... she had to sleep in another room... he refused to accept her... he forgot evrything what happened in the past 5 years... she was like a caretaker of him... a person who arranges his stuff... in ahose where only he and his wife lived... she was ok with it... her heart kneww that some day... some day ... he will come to remember everything... and will accept her... a lone tear escaped her eyes ... she was feeling helpless... but ... she had to wait...

she got up... and strted walking along the seashore...water was touching her feet... as she walked... and the sunset was about to happen... adoring th esky with a colourfull shades of pink orange and yellow... her footprints were wgetting marked as she walked

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nicd update. Do continue. Btw how did abeer had an accident.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice prologue...
Dont mind when I say that it looks like your first piece of writing... is it...???
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@tikit : actually i wanted to disclose it in thenstory not in the prologue !!!!! so wait and watch😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: naina927

Nice prologue...
Dont mind when I say that it looks like your first piece of writing... is it...???



no it isnt 😃😃😃
Edited by heartbroken1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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niice starting looking forward for more updates😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome prologue
update soon
i love your stories viny
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey...nice prologue
looking forward for the update
update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay..so it was very good prologue.i really enjoyed reading it!
so abeer had an accident and he have losted his memory..hmm..nice thought!
am feeling excited to read what happened to abeer how he got that accident and how will meher manage her self staying as a stranger with her own husband..
Thanks for them pm.
do update soon :)

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